Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Doctor Feelgood

Tuesday, March 21, 2006

Okay guys, this is my first Fic, so be gentle, I'm fragile :)

Okay this takes place fairly immediately after the BDM, 1 day after the final scene. This is a Simon/Kaylee shipper story. No angst, but lots of built up tension until the big pay off. This is nc-17 folks, so be warned, and enjoy the ensuing naughtiness.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3516    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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One day. It had been one day and two hours since Simon had finally given Kaylee the sexin' she'd been waiting over eight months for.

Simon's gunshot wound, Zoe's knife laceration, and Jayne's bullet ricochet had all been patched up by the Alliance and given time to heal. Today they were finally taking off. As Simon and Kaylee put away the rations, supplies, and extra food the Operative had forced the Alliance to provide them, they went out of their way to make "accidental" contact with each other. He brushed his hand up against hers by purposely reaching for the same box she did, and she bumped into him several times just for the chance to make him wrap his arms around her to keep their balance.

"Gorramit you two," Jayne was scowling at them from his bowl of udon noodles. "Nobody really wants to see that shit, dong ma?" Kaylee giggled a bit as Jayne lumbered angrily out of the room toward the cargo bay.

"Maybe we should be a little less obvious before the captain gets back," Simon suggested, gently taking his arms out from around Kaylee's waist, but still smiling down at her as though he had every intention of not listening to his own advice.

"Cap'n don't care about that, Simon. He just wants Serenity back in the air. And since I've done every repair possible to her, she's gonna fly true. Alliance even got us all the spare parts we needed."

She pulled herself closer to him again, gently letting her hips sway and just whisper across his hips, making Simon take an unneeded, shaky breath. "And we've been kissin' in front of him for near a week now. I think he knows we've been leadin' up to gettin' all..." she paused and ground her hips more boldly against his, feeling him harden against her. "friendly with one another."

Simon had to shake his head a bit to clear the image of her lying under him in the engine room -skin damp with sweat, mouth letting out sweet and delicate moans as he pushed gently inside her- out of his mind. Everything about making love to her had been incredible. T

Comments
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 00:30
GuhGuhGuh

Good GAWD. This is your first story? I certainly hope there is more where this came from!

I love how you wove parts of the film into this story.

River's line at the end made me laugh so loud I scared my cat sleeping soundly in the chair next to me.

I hope you write more!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 00:50
This was excellent and very in character for everyone. Nice to see Simon so relaxed and happy with Kaylee. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 02:14
Ooh, DAMN. First fic? Holy...wow. Uh...so, more where this came from, yeah?
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 02:37
There will definitely be more. I was telling LeiaSky earlier that I wanted this to be a series. I'm going to be naming all the stories after 80s Hair Metal songs lol. Just cause it's fun.

JanaFae
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 04:45
Wow, great first fic!!! Can't wait to read your next post!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 04:51
very well done, I enjoyed it!

just loved this interaction here:

"What?! Simon let you watch? Ta ma duh hundan!"

River regarded Mal's cursing calmly. "No, he was humping Kaylee. He didn't let me see. He just didn't know I saw until it was too late."

"Little one, I don't need to hear that, ever again."

lmfao...oh man, I'm still laughing about it
Saturday, 25 March 2006 04:28
That last line was hilarious
Saturday, 25 March 2006 04:42
More please.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 23:25
guh guh GAH!!! O...M....G... see this is what happens. i had to wait to read this fic, and i'm kicking all the reasons i had to. gorram it work!! go away!! this was awesome jana!! good characterization, the last line was funny, and, Damn! with the teasing!!! sigh, ok, i need to calm down :P i am so glad i finally got to read this and i can't wait until i read your other fics if this is any indication.

stay shiny!!!
EngineAngel
Friday, 23 June 2006 21:25
Um...wow. You're great at what you do. Only words applicable.
Wednesday, 05 July 2006 18:44
You have been recommended to me by both Leiasky and FrellingBlonde, so, well, I hope you like feedback.

*Ta ma duh hundan!"
River regarded Mal's cursing calmly. "No, he was humping Kaylee.*

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Nice one with the interruptions and distractions, made it that much sweeter (as you said it would).

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