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Someone To Carry You

Saturday, March 18, 2006

An old flame of Mal's reflects on the time she spent with him.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3651    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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We were together for so long but I still remember it like yesterday.

There I am, sitting in my usual spot overlooking a low, sagebrushed hillside, caressed by the warmth from the sun and the occasional, welcome breath of wind. I’m waiting. For who or what, God only knows. I see a lot of men pass through here, engaged in their own pursuits; but none of them seem interested. It’s like I’m just a convalescent to them, I have too much age and not enough flair for their tastes; I don’t elevate their status in society, such as it may be. But still I sit here, one day after another, waiting for someone to stop and take notice. Just sit tight, I tell myself. The right guy will come along one of these days.

However, the way old man Rundle behaves around here, I begin to wonder if one of these days will ever come.

There he is again, coming out of that rat hole he calls an office with another client in tow. I watch them in my peripheral vision; I don’t even need to look straight at them to know where old man Rundle is going. He’s leading this fellow to the same place he always does, trying to push the same fat, useless piece of niu fen on him that he always pushes on his customers. Still, I can’t help trying to hear their conversation from where I’m sitting. Rundle’s path never diverges, but I’ve heard it said that the buyer is the one who’s liable to stray.

Rundle is making jolly conversation as he marches along the same path he’s nigh on beaten into the sagebrush. He asks the client his name and that’s my cue to perk up, see where this conversation is likely to go.

Malcolm Reynolds.

Decent sort of name, I think to myself. I listen closer, as closely as I can from where I sit, and I study the newcomer from afar. He’s got a few miles on him and no doubt of it. Has the look about him of a man who’s seen too much, a thirty-year type maybe, or a veteran of that gorram war that dumped me here in the first place. But he’s still got a fire in his eyes that doesn’t cool, not even on St. Albans. He’s a surv

Comments
Saturday, 18 March 2006 15:15
who woulda guessed from the summery...oh wow. so...wow. Gives a whole new meaning to the idea that Serenity is the tenth character. I also love how you just casually refrenced michanical parts where a human would refrence body parts, makes it seem all the more real.
Sunday, 19 March 2006 02:57
Oh, goddess that was wonderful! I cried, really cried. I may be off my nut, but I cried. Excellent! Sham on!
Sunday, 19 March 2006 07:46
i really liked this--lovely
Sunday, 19 March 2006 09:01
I hope this isn't the only part of this story, cuz I think more could be done with this, especially dealing with the BDM and the final 30 minutes.

Still..excellent work. Have to agree with LadyKnight about the summary....very misleading;)

BEB
Sunday, 19 March 2006 16:24
Excellent, this is one of the best Serenity stories out there. Absolutely loved the ship thinking Mal was bidding on the other ship only to realise he had bought her and that 'love at first sight' comment is bang on the nail. Love also how Serenity feels about Kaylee. Very shiny, thanks! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 March 2006 01:17
Gloriously wonderful. Thank you.
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Monday, 20 March 2006 03:49
awesome
Monday, 20 March 2006 09:55
I loved it...Serenity's story in the first person!

Really enjoyed 'her' take on the name Mal chose for her.

"Be still, my beating reactor core."
Love this line!





Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:20
WOW....thank you, everyone!!! I sure wasn't expecting it to be this well received!!! Shiny!

As far as doing another one, well - it didn't cross my mind until I came back and read everyone's wonderful and boundlessly-appreciated reviews. But I also posted this on LiveJournal, where several people remarked that they didn't much care for Serenity -POV fics but enjoyed this one nonetheless. I'm wondering now if I should do another one based around a different episode (or the movie) and see how it comes out.

If you think I ought to go for it, lemme know! And again, thank you all!
BOATIERRA
Monday, 17 April 2006 05:27
Niiiice. Lovin' the unusual perspective, from the 10th character. Excellent job working in lines and storylines from the show. I think Joss would be proud :)
Sunday, 28 May 2006 14:06
beautiful.

b
Saturday, 13 January 2007 20:18
Steamer, this is wonderful. I simply love it. (I'm thinking maybe there's a lot of you in this. And your train's name is...?)

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