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Saturday, March 4, 2006

New baby and old feelings. Things are about to change. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/ Inara-ish, more later. Continuation of Thoughts-Baby.

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Here's another installment for you guys. It's a little funny, a little angsty and a big bunch of mushy ( I can't seem to escape it!). There is more to come. Hope you all like it and please comment!:D

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Inara climbed the stairs and entered the galley where upon she encountered Mal, fully dressed now, pacing in front of the hatch. They practically slammed into each other.

"Oh, I'm sor-"

"Yeah, I 'm ...yeah, so ?"

Zoe and Jayne looked up from the dining table, anxious for some news.

Inara turned from Mal to face them and announced, "It's a girl!"

Inara noticed Jayne's face seemed a bit crestfallen as she continued.

"She's healthy and Kaylee is doing well."

Zoe smiled back at Inara, "So, what's her name?"

"I didn't -"

Thundering footsteps racing up the stairs greeted everyone as River bounded into the dining room.

"It's a girl!"

Jayne snorted to himself and rolled his eyes at River.

"Yeah, moonbrain, we know. What kinda fung la witch are ya?"

River stuck her tongue out at him, then taunted, "I know her name."

Everyone stared at River, waiting for her to respond, but she just sauntered over to the fruit on the kitchen table and picked up an apple.

Zoe held back a smirk but Inara and Mal were still staring fixedly at the girl.

"Gorram it, what's her name?" Jayne questioned her, more irritated than before.

River finished her bite of the fruit and smiled at Inara, "Sara."

Inara blushed in uncompanion -like behavior as she realized who they were naming the baby after. Mal reached out to Inara, grazing her hand, trying to grasp it. Inara's back stiffened and slipped by him in one fluid motion, entering the kitchenette.

"How about some tea for everyone? It's been something of a trying morning."

The odd smile that graced her face and her reaction to his touch sent Mal immediately into a black mood.

"If Kaylee and the baby are fine then I've go

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 March 2006 04:08
Alright, I get to comment first... Another excellent chapter, very touching. I especially liked Jayne's response to River's announcement that the baby had been born (very in character) only to have it rubbed in his face. I also liked the description of Simon's few quiet moments with his new daughter, also very true to form and yet showing Simon already growing into his role as a father.

Thanks as always and keep it up.

-goblueguy
Saturday, 04 March 2006 04:42
Another awesome installment! I love reading these pieces. Poor Kaylee, so tired. I'll bet they have the prettiest baby in the world though, despite Jayne and his comments. *giggle*

I can't wait to see more of this story, to see how the Inara bit plays out as well.

Keep it up!
Saturday, 04 March 2006 04:54
Okay...picturing Simon with a baby...his and Kaylee's baby...

*brain turns to mush from the AWWWWWWW*
Saturday, 04 March 2006 08:09
Aww, the few quiet moments Simon has with the baby are so nice. Something wholy his - and Kaylee's.

Inara's moments were very nicely done as well.
Saturday, 04 March 2006 08:49
aww imagine kaylee and Simons baby... so cute!
Saturday, 04 March 2006 13:20
What a super-cute chapter! And a very sensitive take on Zoe.

ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 March 2006 01:03
And I add to all the Awwww's in the verse! LOVE it, especially love to see the expansion from what you sent me, great chapter, DO CONTINUE!!! :D
~ misskitten
Wednesday, 08 March 2006 02:44
Aww.
I didn't get the Sara bit until it was explained. It so...awww.
Wednesday, 08 March 2006 20:47
Soon there will be a sequel, I promise! Real Life is getting in the way!:D
WINTERHART
Thursday, 09 March 2006 00:31
Awwwwwwwww! This is just *perfect*, I love it :D

And her name is beautiful, it's just right. Now if only Mal and Nara can pull their heads out of their respective arses all will be well... (though of course Inara's point is completely valid). But you know what I mean :)
FUNKYINFISHNET
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 13:34
Lovin this series of fics, you capture the characters so well. I can't wait for more, you're talented :- )
Saturday, 15 April 2006 17:43
OH MY GOD, DO NOT LET JAYNE TOUCH THAT BABY!!!
and calm...okay. i LOVE little sara already and simon's little moment alone with her was just so perfect.

b
Monday, 15 May 2006 21:05
There is not enough *SQUEEE* in the 'verse!
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 14:08
I liked it all except for a bit at the very end. Praying to Buddha is a bit of a contradiction in terms. Otherwise, a very well written and very fluffy bit.

River's response to Jayne trying to touch the baby was wonderful.
KK
Thursday, 10 July 2008 04:21
Although I realize I'm two years late, I really enjoyed this! Also, is there a sequel?

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