The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-Nine
Tuesday, February 28, 2006
Zoe and Inara discus politics in a calm and rational matter, and Wash gets drafted.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4176
RATING: 9.0 (G)
SERIES: FIREFLY
The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu
Chapter Fifty-Nine
THE RELENTLESS -33:50
Sinclair couldn’t take his eyes off of the great ship.
He had always had a passion for military history, far more than the mere professional interest of most of his peers. While nearly everyone else on the Bridge of the Relentless merely saw a whopping big but decrepit warship, Sinclair saw a ghost of history made incarnate. It was as if the Merrimac or a Roman trireme had suddenly appeared in orbit for his inspection.
She was only about a third of the size of one of the Dortmunder-class Alliance cruisers – about the size of a Holloway-class battleship – but after looking at the thing all these hours, he couldn’t swear that the Sun Tzu in top form couldn’t stand toe-to-toe with the best the Alliance had to offer. Even excepting the three big lasers – some of the biggest ever built – she was an impressive beast, pocked with fighter bays, bristling with gun emplacements, and festooned with missile batteries.
But the ornate style of the ship was far different than the austere, sterile look of the Alliance architecture. Alliance ships were designed to intimidate, ideal for keeping a lid on the inevitable Outer Rim rebellions. The Sun Tzu was designed to impress a foe with her lethal magnificence. She was the ship of a conqueror, not a peacekeeper. She was one of the last of the great warships built by independent planetary governments, back in that wild time where every dipshit moon in the galaxy insisted on planetary sovereignty and the right to oppress its people and invade its neighbors as they chose. Not soon after she was decommissioned, the Alliance had seen to most defense needs of its members. There was no need for such impressive doomsday weapons such as the Sun Tzu under the Alliance. She was the last of her kind in so many ways.
He tried to insist to himself that it was awe of the vessel that had kept him in the command chair all this time, staring at it. Sinclair did not like to admit to himself that he
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 18:14
Hahahahaha! Poor Wash! The action's picking up and like every chapter since the first I'm lovin' it!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:04
So happy to see the next chapter posted!! And as usual you make it worth the wait!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:04
YAY!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:07
HA! My twice daily check for a new chapter has paid off! And just when I was getting ready to beg.... :)
THANKS!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:09
ABOUT GORRAM TIME!!! I've been going through withdrawls. It was worth the wait, but geez. Keep them coming.
LG.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:47
The dialogue is always firstrate, but I also liked the two perspectives on the war. Hope you're not losing interest in this, because I'm sure not.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 19:56
Not losing interest. Not one bit. But you know that feeling you get when you've written half a million words in six months, and you go to sleep at night with your brain reeling with plot angles and character development? Yeah, we've all been there. Had to take a short break and play some mindless video games to get my mojo revved up again.
Also, I've been busy with another little project: trying to convince the new CW network to invest in a new Firefly show. I hope you'll join me and write the Powers That Be and beg and plead for them to give us another chance. Noble work indeed.
Glad everyone has stuck around. I'm feeling much better, now, and I'm bored with mindless video games. I'll be writing more real soon -- so keep checking! And comments are ALWAYS appreciated. It's like Ego in liquid form.
Keep Flyin'!
ScrewtheAlliance
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 20:19
Toppest of top marks as ever!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 20:48
"Buddha's hairy nuts"?!
I almost choked on my gum!
Great stuff.
WOONSOCKET
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 21:12
so nice to have a shiny new chapter after your break.
the war dialogue was excellent, with both sides portrayed sympathetically. kudos.
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 00:05
Nice to see the complexity of the political views here. It made for quite a thought provoking chapter.
Hope you enjoyed your break. I, too was on the verge of begging.
Quite an impressive project you've undertaken and I'm mighty grateful!
Thanks,
Taya
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 00:32
I think what impresses me most is the inverted history here. It's no great secret that Firefly's tone was 'post Civil War in space'. Only this time it was the North who was against personal rights and the South that was for it.
On a purely selfish level I prefer not to wait so long for a chapter, but if that's what it takes for you to keep up the fine quality, you take all the time you need!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 02:09
I third the begging thing...
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 03:43
Begging begging sing'n the begging song!
I loved this i wonder what would inspire Inara to try out a brown coat.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 04:05
Been waiting a while for this and it was worth it. Screwthealliance, keep up the good work.
Ulysses
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 04:06
Oh thank God you finally updated. I've been going insane, here! I'll have you know that you are the *only* author who writes Firefly fanfiction I actually read. I haven't even *bothered* with the rest! (Which is a good thing, because my academics are suffering as is.) But you're that good: it's like getting me to read Narnia fanfiction, or something. I just don't do it. And for you, I make an exception.
Also: Wash's "leaf on the wind" thing makes me want to cry every time you reference it. ;_;
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 04:14
Begging! What's beyond begging! But hey, thanks for the shinny chapter. Wrote a letter to the network. Hope they listen. Keep up the good work.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 04:31
Glad to see you're back. This is my first comment on your work because of my tendency to get so involved with the plot I can't take time to stop and comment before rushing on to the next chapter. It's taken me nearly a week to read through this and Kaylee's Lament (my textbooks are starting to get jealous) but it was worth every second. I appreciate reading your intelligent and obviously well-researched political discussions, as well as the occasional bits of science. But most of all I love your character interactions; at all times our BDHs remain true in tone. I also love how you tie in plot points from the movie that were not previously explored in the series. It takes a talented hand to weave new pieces into a 'verse this well known by its fans, sometimes without them even realizing!
This chapter was no exception. The political argument between Inara and Zoe was well thought out and presented, and I always enjoy your scenes between Wash and Kaylee. But what made me most happy is Wash getting a chance to be a hero. I saw it coming a mile away, but it still made me grin like an idiot. Thanks for all your hard work!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 04:33
Oops, the really wordy entry above was me. I swore I was logged in. Looking forward to another update soon!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 15:24
Oh YAY! I loved it! (Especially Wash & Kaylee.) My withdrawal pains can stop for a while.
Tuesday, 07 March 2006 10:40
my favourite line (apart from just about everything wash said. god, you write him good...):
Simon looked warily from one beautiful face to the other. “A collective shudder just went through everything in the ‘verse with a Y chromosome.”
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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 March 2006 20:15
Yay! Back in the game, I see. :) Everyone else put the same positive comments I considered except for one bit in the Inara/Zoe convo. I loved it, and I loved it for something others might not have seen. You took dialogue from the movie, but instead you used Zoe to voice young River's arguments ("Tell folk far off what to do, what to say, what to think") and you used Inara to voice the Operative's idealism ("good work [s]"). I *loved* that to pieces. Don't stop writing and I'll try not to stop reading!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 12:18
I love your Wash. All his converstations with everyboby just crack me up completly. amazingly funny
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