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That Old Yeh Shen Story, Part I: Moving Parts

Saturday, March 1, 2003

Taking some cryogenetically frozen breeding stock to Paquin, it's a bit of a bumpy ride as Simon and Kaylee's budding romance brings out the worst in Mal.

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Part 1 - Moving Parts

The face on the cortex screen was bland and unassuming–the round, pale face of a minor functionary in the middle of a port town. Not Badger's class–but not what Mal assumed Simon's folks must have been, either.

They had just picked up from Eavesdown Docks on Persephone when the WAVE came through. Mal was just as glad to be leaving–a part of him was quite sure Atherton Wing would be monitoring the docking 'nets, and wasn't the type to be above paying some muscle to shiv him while he was in port.

Their trip had been short and sweet–deliver Badger's cut of the last two jobs, see if Harrow had anything he might need ferried off-world. But Persephone was quiet as a tomb. Well, a tomb with a few raucous barroom brawls going on inside it. Still, quiet enough, compared to what they were used to. They'd set down just in time for Wash to get some fresh jiao-zi from his favourite street vendor, and lifted off again less than an hour later.

"I have been told by a certain mutual acquaintance that your crew is both reliable and discreet." Readout said he was a Dr. Nelson Wyner, and was transmitting from Riverside on Zephyr, less than nine hours away. They hadn't had a gig on Zephyr in over a year. Good a time as any to head back, Mal was thinking.

"That we are. Reasonably priced too, if I say so myself."

"Money–as they say–is no object. I only require the utmost secrecy." Mal almost smirked–sometimes, he wondered if the folks he had dealings with were all reading their lines off the script of the same melodrama. But work was work, and after handing most of their coin over to Niska, they needed it. Badly.

"That we can also provide."

"The cargo is breeding stock to be delivered to the Han Province, on Paquin."

"We got a hold capacity of fifty head of cattle–plus room for two weeks' feed."

"I assure you, Captain Reynolds, the cargo won't require that much space. It's in cryo for transport–one cylinder, to be exact, to be decante

Comments
Saturday, 01 March 2003 06:23
I love you for this story! Absolutely love you! I lust after Serenities dark haired doctor, and I just love this part pertaining to Simon and his many wonderful qualities- “…she realized she didn't just like him for the pretty. It was like icing on the richest chocolate cake in the 'verse as far as she was concerned.” If that doesn’t sound good I don’t know what does. Please, please, please write more to this.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 March 2003 12:58
After that strawberry kiss, I can't quite get into the up and coming shopping spree. Still thinking about that oh so yummy kiss, and why Simon can't take his forward attitude with Mal and turn it on Kaylee . . .

Will there be strawberries in the next chapter? Or are you going to torture us all will girl stuff.

And I wanna see Mal getting more upset and stupid!

Good stuff!
Tuesday, 18 March 2003 07:14
Ye gods! This is EXTRAORDINARY! The characters' voices, the deftly woven back-stories and plausible...INTUITIVE extrapolations. Browncoat, you know our show like the lights on the insides of your own eyelids, and somehow manage to fetch the right words to let us see them too. And they're shiny!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 May 2003 23:49
This is a superb chapter. I enjoy the way you write about the characters sexual experiences in a frank and open way. And the character interactions are perfect. It's like a firefly episode that hasn't been made yet. I do think the strawberry thing has been over done. But that's just me :) The only thing now is do I spoil myself and read the next part or wait till tommorrow?

-Gabe~anangke
Wednesday, 03 September 2003 20:25
Holy crow! It's just like having the show back again! Thank you! This is hands down, the best fanfic I've ever read.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 May 2004 04:41
Most excellent. I especially liked this line
"You had your hand in the cookie jar. Daddy isn't pleased."
Very appropriate and River like.
THEDUDE
Tuesday, 24 August 2004 03:09
This writing is phenominal! The quality is that of a real episode. The dialogue and the actions fit just perfectly You have a great gift keep up the good work!
Saturday, 10 September 2005 15:40
damn, you're good!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 16 October 2005 06:37
This is about as perfect as Firefly romance gets. Great characterisation and plot thus far. Looking forward to more.

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