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New Prospects: Chapter 10

Monday, February 13, 2006

(*MOVIE SPOILERS*) With all scores settled, Mal is making good on his promise to Inara, and Serenity has embarked on the long journey to Sihnon.

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So here it is: Chapter 10, the last in the ‘New Prospects’ story. I've rated it NC17, since the second segment contains a bit of post-coital S/K, just for Leiasky!

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Serenity fled silently through the infinite night, an amber glow scudding across deepest black.

Those of her crew that could sleep did so like the deceased. Sleep had been a scarce commodity in the forty-eight hours past, and fatigue could only be staved off for so long. So the internal lights were powered down, and a suitably serene hush had descended on the little Firefly, punctuated only by the quiet bumping noise and breathless gasping that emanated from the bunk with Kaylee’s Room painted above the door in swirly script.

Mal stuck his pillow over his head in a vain attempt to block it out. Some people, it seemed to him, needed to rest less than others. He contemplated thumping on the dividing wall, but Kaylee was already doing more than enough of that for both of them.

Jayne snored on, oblivious. In the morning he would wake to the usual patch of drool adhering his cheek to the pillow, but for now his sleeping face wore a contented smile. A score had been settled, and all was right with his world. Tomorrow, he might even tackle some laundry.

Zoe slept better than she had in weeks. She dreamed of her husband, as always, but he was different this time – the gaping hole in his chest was gone, and he was just Wash, her Wash, all tousled hair, twinkling blue eyes and cheesy grin. He came to her and held her close, and whispered in her ear the words that she had longed to hear.

Inara, dressed once more in her customary silken robes, had dozed off on the common area couch: head resting on her hands, body curled up with feline ease. River contemplated waking her, so that she could go to her shuttle and sleep in her bed, but thought better of it. She looked so peaceful, and her dreams were of her Sihnon home and her sistren at the Companion House, and it seemed a shame to break them for something so trivial as

Comments
Monday, 13 February 2006 14:02
So that's it - the end credits are rolling, and it's time to put the next episode on.

Thanks ever so much for all your great feedback, and for making this such a fun ride. I plan to write many more fics, so stay tuned: I'll try to keep improving, and writing stuff that you'll like. And yes, Sid, I might even include some Mal/River for you next time!

Until then, sayonara, and keep flyin'!

2-13-2006
FUNKYINFISHNET
Monday, 13 February 2006 15:29
I really loved this fic, especially the way you write River! Great tense writing and I adore Inara/Mal, River's right - he should just tell her! Thanks for posting, it rocks :- )
Monday, 13 February 2006 16:11
Shiny story! Now if we could just get Mal and Inara to stop dancing around each other.. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 February 2006 17:23
>He contemplated thumping on the dividing wall, but Kaylee was already doing more than enough of that for both of them.


I'm at work man! And that line above made me laugh so loud . ..

This was the best chapter. The sweet conversation between Kaylee and Simon was, just, well, sweet! :)

Dialogue was well done too.

Hope you continue writing!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 February 2006 18:54
Good ending. And I agree with Leia about the banging on the wall line. V good.

It's taya by the way... too lazy to sign in
Monday, 13 February 2006 19:20
poor Mal gets no peace, with all that wall-banging ...

excellent ending! I love River, a smart*ss after my own heart. Looking forward to more!
Monday, 13 February 2006 20:16
Very nice episodic ending!! I could hear the steel guitar as I read it...

You paint a right shiney picture.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 February 2006 21:33
very nice, now a new story arc, more more more.
TAMFAN
Monday, 13 February 2006 23:04
Good job. Looking forward to the next one.
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 04:49
You know I always knew I loved you for something...and the fact that you mention me in your end credits and even almost promise me a Mal/River...sigh...It is truly true love now.

LOL

Great episode and I loved the way you have the crew coming to terms with River and her new cognizance.

Wonderful writing. Loved the night scene and laughed very hard when Mal put the pillow over his face. He'd likely die before they stopped thumping.

THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR SHINY FIC!

Obsidiana who can not wait to read the next fic you produce...any idea when that will be?

Soon I hope.

Obsidiana Girl
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 04:54
Zoe slept better than she had in weeks. >>>>>>>She dreamed of her husband, as always, but he was different this time – the gaping hole in his chest was gone, and he was just Wash, her Wash, all tousled hair, twinkling blue eyes and cheesy grin. He came to her and held her close, and whispered in her ear the words that she had longed to hear.<<<<<<<<<<<<


This made me cry it was so sweet and loving and I was glad to see she had moved on in her grieving process.

SID

ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 05:43
Great conclusion to a great story. You do an amazing job with River, and the River-Kaylee dynamic in the story was excellent. You also do a very realistic Mal-Inara. Here's hoping for a continuation!
Thursday, 11 January 2007 17:18
Very well written, I love it.

'He contemplated thumping on the dividing wall, but Kaylee was already doing more than enough of that for both of them.'
LMAO

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