Okay, you asked for it! Here's Chapter 3 for your delectation. Again, a thousand thanks for all your shiny comments. It's for your enjoyment, and y'all make doing it worthwhile!
3
TRINITY STATION
Ossie had apparently been doing okay for himself, in spite of his location. He had a little office set up right in the heart of the station, and a couple of hefty-looking types to do his ‘paperwork’, as he put it, though as to what kind of paperwork needed brawn like that, Mal couldn’t rightly say.
The little hustler hadn’t changed much since Mal’d last seen him. A mite greyer around the face, maybe, and the little pencil ‘tache had gone the way of the whales, but otherwise it was the same old Ossie Chen who'd welcomed them in, offered them seats, and handed out shots of liquor.
Mal and Jayne had necked theirs straight, like the hard-ass hundan they were, but Simon still nursed his half-full glass, most like worried about what the fiery liquid might do to his educated brainpan. But that was shiny; they were here to talk business, and the good doctor’d proved in the past that he was, if nothing else, the smart sort. Saw between the lines, as it were. Probably ran in the family.
“It’s a cargo vessel.” Ossie punched a couple of keys on his large handheld and a schematic of a long, bulky transport appeared, rotating slowly on the flat screen. “Bound for Needell, out of Beaumonde, and it’s a ghost run – not listed on the official Alliance schedules. Should be an easy intercept.”
Mal’s fingers flexed around his belt. A simple job , Ossie’d said in his wave. Nothing too illegal . A smash-and-grab on Alliance shipping wasn’t what he’d had in mind.
There was a time when he’d have jumped at the opportunity to relieve the Alliance of its property, but the situation was less plain now. They’d been off the radar a while – no tellin’ what kinda welcome they’d get from any Feds they might encounter. Their assassin had made no promises regarding their future safety, and for all Mal knew,
Chapter 4 is already underway - in which our BDH take to the black once more, and we should finally see what lies in store aboard Ossie's cargo ship. More'n just crates, I'm guessin'...
Keep me posted, folks - all comments are taken on board, and much appreciated!
I like this new take on River. I've never considered her to be so protective of Simon (it was always the other way 'round), but it does seem natural after the whole Reaver business that she'd take her new role seriously.
I have the oddest feelin' I know who the baddy is and that is frightenin', but I can't wait to find out more...So get to the writin' and send more soon.
Like the River you write a perfect mix of crazy/sane and the way she finds joy in flyin' and speed...you can just see her pilotin' Serenity into the black with Mal no matter who else takes their leave.
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Only point I couldn't buy is that Zoe has money stashed away. When they're always pulling so close to the wire to get food and fuel, she wouldn't have been holding back on Mal. She's an all for one and one for all girl. She could get work almost anywhere, though I doubt she'd want to go anywhere near core planets, and could support herself that way. But not savings...
Yeah, I had the same doubts as you when I was writing, but I reasoned that Wash and Zoe were a married couple, and couples tend to plan for the future. Plus, at least one of them held out hopes of starting a family (remember their spat in HoG?).
It seems conceivable (narf!) to me that they might have set up some kind of 'trust fund' somewhere, separate from their 'petty cash' and unbeknownst to Mal. Wash, after all, was always pressing Zoe to stand up to the captain, and reminding her that he, Wash, was her husband. So these savings could just be a logical extension of that.
That's my reading, anyway, but many thanks for the feedback!
Sorry about the Anon... I'm posting from work, so signing up not a great plan! but I will look forward to the next installment :)
And I really like your River. It's a very believable mix of crazy and sane and damn good pilot. And her being protective of Simon makes sense.
And while Zoe is going to leave, I have a feeling it won't be for a while yet.
More, please!
Shinigami_senpai
Funny, but scary.
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