Chapter 9, as promised!
9
Ossie Chen was clearing his office. He made it a rule never to stay in one place too long, and the money Niska had sent his way was burning a hole in his pocket. He hadn’t misled Reynolds on that point, at least – it was his retirement fund, or at least it would be if most of it wasn’t already marked for his creditors. He’d already decided, however, that his creditors could go spin.
So he’d had to step on a few decent folk to get hold of it, but that was okay. His conscience had remarkable wipe-clean properties, which was good considering how many people he’d stung in the past.
He was attempting to stuff the last of his bond papers into a bulging attaché case, when a change in the light made him look up.
His mouth popped open.
Jayne Cobb was standing tall and wide in the doorway. There was a big knife in his hand, and the glint on the silver blade matched the one in his eyes.
“ Ta ma duh !” Ossie exclaimed, at once shocked and terrified. He fumbled on his desk for a weapon, but he had already packed them away. He snatched up a radio ‘com instead, which he brandished like a grenade. Another perk to having money was the amount of hired muscle it could purchase, and his goons were more muscled than most.
“Hey, now don’t go startin nothin’ – I can have this room full a’ my people in a coupla seconds…”
“You mean, all these big, tough hwoon-dans out here?” Jayne indicated the room behind with a flick of his dagger. “The ones lyin’ on their backs an’ faces?”
Ossie weighed up this information and turned to run out the other door, but there was a slip of a thing standing there in a summer dress and boots, hands folded behind her back, head tilted demurely to one side. The way she was smiling made him think twice about trying to barge past her.
“Where you goin’, Chen?” Jayne stepped into the circular room, grinning evilly. “Got us some catchin’ up ta do.”
“Cobb – listen… ‘bout the job… it was all Niska, he threatened me, forced me to dupe you guy
Loved it. Still want more!
Yes, let them get distracted on the way...
River calling Mal a curmudgeon...hee
I'm very much enjoying this. Keep up the good work.
<first,” she said softly.>
WOOT! SCARY...I loved it I bet after that Mal's friends think before sellin' 'im out...WOOT!
<“Curmudgeon: noun. Surly or miserly <person.”
<“Huh. Ain’t never needed no reader to <tell me that.”
<He returned to the girl’s side and <rested a hand lightly on her <shoulder. “Get prepped to take us out <of here,” he instructed. “Full burn, <on Kaylee’s mark.”
<River nodded. “Back to business. <What’s our heading?”
<As if you didn’t know already, he <thought.
<“Sihnon.” He caught Inara’s eye; the <Companion smiled appreciatively. “Got <me an agreement to keep.”>>>>>>>>>>>>
Great interaction...I love it...perfect Mal voice and River bein' all mouthy is what you'd be expecting from his little albatross...
I have so thoroughly enjoyed this story! I mean I check every morning to see if you have updated before I even get coffee...so, there your writting is better than coffee to me...That is the highest praise you can get from a coffeeholic such as me.
I like the pace and I love the voices you give the characters.
I also really enjoyed Jayne and his talk with Ossi about River...I like that they have come to a sort of peace. I think after Miranda he would re-evaluate his opinion of her...if only 'cause she could kick his gorram arse!
You are an all inclusive author and that is rare...IT is gorram hard to stay true to (7) seven characters.
I read yesterday that you have a second story all set up...HOT DAMN! I can't wait.
You are the Firefly/Serenity Fic Author extraordinaire!!!
SID :-)
Got one more chapter to complete, and then I'm moving straight on to the next one. It'll be a canon fic, but set during the Firefly series arc. I wanna write me some Wash and Book this time!
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"I'm babbling like a moonbrain."
The girl smiled sweetly. There was blood drying on the front of her dress.
Taya!
You can't take the sky from me
Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic. The characters and situations were dead-on. It was like watching (reading) an episode.
I can't wait for more.
~Shinigami_senpai
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