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New Prospects: Chapter 8.1

Wednesday, February 8, 2006

(*CONTAINS MOVIE SPOILERS*) A vengeful Niska has trapped Serenity and her crew on the Decamerone, an automated freighter bound for Reaver space. With time running short, our Big Damn Heroes have been working hard to extricate themselves...

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Chapter 8. In which Mal, Jayne and Zoe return to Serenity with Simon and await the success of Kaylee and River’s mission, which is not going entirely smoothly... This is a short completed segment which I've decided to post because it's taking me so gorram long to get this chapter done, and folks are champing at the bit for more! The rest should follow once I've edited it some more.

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Mal clicked the seals on his helmet, lifted it clear and breathed in, long and deep. Serenity ’s good air rushed into his lungs, a fine wine compared to the suit respirator’s bland water, and it was the best, sweetest thing in the world.

A man could become inured to his surroundings; only by spending some time away from them could he appreciate them anew. He savoured it momentarily and then stepped away from the ladder, whereupon he was immediately enveloped by Inara’s small frame.

She clung to him, light as a bird, as though daring him to make her let go. After a few moments, Mal had to admit that Serenity ’s air ran a close second to her scent.

“I prayed for you,” she told him, softly.

Flustered by her familiarity, he was about to attempt a suitably deep and meaningful response, but then found his fluster compounded when she broke away to throw her arms around the emerging Simon, and then of all people, Jayne. The big man lent him an unclean grin; Mal scowled.

Inara embraced Zoe rather more decorously. “I’m overjoyed to see you all safe again,” she said, smiling.

“Thanks, ‘Nara,” Zoe said, “but we ain’t safe yet. Not ‘til we’re free of this gos-se freighter and halfway 'cross the system.”

“Has there been any word from River and Kaylee?” Simon asked anxiously, as he unshouldered Lola and handed it to Jayne.

“No,” Inara said, shaking her head as they left the narrow corridor and trooped through to the dining area. “They’ve been out of radio range for a long time. But if they’re on schedule, they should be reaching that tug fairly soon.”

Mal set his helmet and Ossie Chen’s handh

Comments
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 14:01
Sorry it's been so long... *sheepish*

What with work and other commitments, I've had hardly any time to get going on this chapter, but the rest should (hopefully) be up tomorrow. Real world, eh?

Thanks, folks, for being so patient!
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 14:33
Long wait then what a cliffhanger! *Ai ya*! I am so frantic with worry for Kaylee and River. What the good gorram happened and will they be okay? Please don't leave it so long till the next post, don't think my little browncoat heart could handle it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 15:20
I am with, Ali! I waited so long and you pull a cliffy out of your hat...sigh...I know my brown-coated heart won't last another week for the answer to who? what? when? and Where the hell is River? How will Kaylee be able to help her?

Oh,and for goodness sake if you are planning a Mal/Inara for the last few chapters please warn a Mal/River Shipper so she can prepare for the shock!

Great addition if it wasn't so cliffy. I am so lovin' this story.

Sid
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 17:27
I love your writting and then I get cliffy goodness on top.

Can't wait to see where River is and how everyone reacts!
Thursday, 09 February 2006 10:36
You're mean.

Leaving us with a cliffhanger.

The sooner the next post goes up the more likely I'll forgive you! (hint, hint.)

Seriously though, this is great!

Taya
Thursday, 11 January 2007 17:00
And now I'm really worried.

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