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New Prospects: Chapter 5

Friday, January 27, 2006

(*WARNING* This fic contains some spoiler references to the BDM - if you haven't seen it yet, do so immediately!) Miranda is over a month in the past but its legacy lives on, and the crew of Serenity feel it more than most. There are new roles for some, new rooms for others, but still the same pressing need for food on the table and fuel in the tanks. On a job for old friend Ossie Chen, Serenity has docked with a giant freighter, whose contents are not quite what they expected - and then they receive a wave from another old friend...

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Chapter 5, short but sweet... in which our Big Damn Heroes find themselves in yet another apparently inescapable situation. When will they learn!

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“Mal!” Inara said anxiously into the ‘com. “Mal, listen. River’s having one of her feelings – she says you’ve all got to get out, now. Something about it not being what you think. Mal, are you receiving this?”

“Mal ain’t linked up, ‘Nara.” Zoe apparently was. Even under the signal’s distortion, her voice sounded strange: kind of rattled. “He’s takin’ a call.”

“A call? From whom?”

“Niska.”

Niska ? Adelai Niska?” Inara exclaimed. Shaken, she stared at River, who was still gripping her head and keening softly. “ Run-tse duh fwo-tzoo ching bao-yo wuomun … that explains it. What’s going on?”

“Beats me,” came the reply. That was Jayne, with thunder in his voice. “Find out soon enough, I guess.”

There was a clattering in the hallway and then Simon was there in the cockpit with them – arms encircling his sister’s shoulders, asking her to look at him, asking her what was the matter. He seemed almost more stricken than she.

River met his worried gaze. “Someone’s been here before,” she said, nibbling on her lower lip. “Not real people – spiders. We’re flies, stuck in a web.”

Seconds later, an unexpected sound reached their ears. The distant whirring of a closing airlock door.

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“And who can I see there with you?”

The old man was in a comfortable office of some kind; he was seated in a high-backed chair, and there was a small plant just visible behind him. Above his head, the word TELEFONIX glowed on the handheld’s display.

“Ah, of course, Mr Cobb, the mercenary, killer of many of my best staff. And Zoe Washburne, also – your loyal second, Mr Reynolds. I hear of her husband’s death. Such sad news, yes. Even more so that I did not get to kill him myself.”

Mal glanced sidelong at Zoe and Jayne, who were crowded in beside him, starin’ at the screen, both of ‘em wearin’ the same di

Comments
Friday, 27 January 2006 16:38
Thanks to everyone who's taken the time to follow New Prospects so far - hope it's been a fun ride. I've been trying to make this story kind of like one of the episodes in pace and content, though whether I'm succeeding or not isn't really for me to say!

All your comments are read and appreciated, of course. The feedback to date has been hugely encouraging, and occasionally inspirational!

Chapter 6 should be up after the weekend. TTFN!

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"And we shall call it: This Land."
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 27 January 2006 17:39
We need more! This was fantastic!
Friday, 27 January 2006 17:45
Brilliant, I am so loving this story and this part is pretty much my favourite so far. I especially love the way the whole crew is trying to figure out how to get out of this tight spot and then it's down to Kaylee and River to be the Big Damn Heroes. Just wish there was some way to put a nasty sting in the tale for Niska. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
GOR
Friday, 27 January 2006 17:54
I'm liking this little series of yours a lot. Keep 'em coming!
Friday, 27 January 2006 21:12
Loved it!! I laughed when Jayne started arguing!! Priceless!
Friday, 27 January 2006 22:45
This series is really working well. Can't wait for the next instalment!

Taya
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 27 January 2006 23:26
Loved it...Love River callin' Jayne a village idiot!

The content is very well paced and it does remind me of an episode.

Just hate the freakin' commercials...lol

I can't wait for the next part.

Obsidianagirl
Saturday, 28 January 2006 01:44
Excellent!!

I love this story and I love your use of Chinese.

Great work
Saturday, 28 January 2006 11:39
Another great chapter. Keep writing them please.

Hope the three outside are rescued in time. Love that River & Kaylee were the ones that thought of a plan.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 00:04
I'm loving this series and can't wait to see what happens.
Thursday, 11 January 2007 16:42
Reavers?
Didn't see that coming.

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