Bed and Wine: Part 13
By Kaynara
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The word *father* seemed to flip a switch in him.
Mal spread his legs a little, bumped Inara from between them with a gentle push, and sprung to his feet.
“You’re Inara’s father,” he repeated dully.
“That’s right, Mr. Reynolds.” But he was staring at Inara, his gaze ripe with what could only be termed need.
“Her dead father. One ate his own gun?”
“I only have the one, Mal.”
He turned, as though remembering her presence. She stared at the older man, her beautiful eyes expressionless. She wasn’t so successful in governing her lips. The softly-painted mouth, still warm from his kisses, quivered as she looked into the eyes of a dead man. What did she see there?
“Mr. Reynolds, you captain a ship called The Serenity, correct?”
Mal blinked.
“I’m sorry, can you just hold on a second...? Sir.” He touched a hand to the small of Inara’s back. “Inara. Are you here?” he said more softly.
“Take me home, Mal.”
“But, ah.” He shot a swift glance at her father. “It’s only the first date.”
“Please, Mal.” She slipped a hand through his arm, gave him a soulful stare, only half-affected.
“Inara. My sweet gypsy girl. Just let me--”
She shrank back, as though Death himself stretched cool, clammy hands toward her flesh. In the moonlight, her face appeared unnaturally pale. Mal stepped forward, set a firm hand on the older man’s shoulder.
“Whoa, now. Let’s all just keep our hands at our sides, dong ma?”
“They came to me in the night: three men from BSB. They told me you were dead.” She sank as one boneless into Mal’s chair. “You let them.”
“I had no choice, bao bei.”
“There’s always a choice,” Inara said sadly. “Letting your only daughter think you dead is the coward’s one.”
“I promise to explain, Inara. But this is neither the time nor the place.” He turned to Mal, the look in his dark eyes a plea. “Perhaps we can continue this conversation on The Serenity, Mr. Reynolds?”
“Well, sir, that would be the lady’s call.” Mal knelt on
A shiny chapter, can't wait to see where this is going!
That was amazingly funny. Jayne's half-assed prayer at the end was perfect.
Favorite exchanges:
“Her dead father. One ate his own gun?”
“I only have the one, Mal.”
that is so very Inara.
and
“Let’s keep a civil tongue, Jayne,” Zoe said amused. “You teach my baby to curse and I’ll have to beat you with your own limbs.”
It was great as always, you're building to another suspenseful season ending I can just tell. Can they trust Inara's father? What will happen when BSB comes after them? What will happen when Gideon wakes up? You'd better write fast as I'm addicted to this story!
Nice job. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Update soon! I love this story!
*snorts* What a way to advertise Serenity! Miss the good Shepherd so much. I love this story!!! The plot always seems to have new twists and turns. The characterizations are perfect. I love every moment that Mal and Inara spend with each other. I'm just kind of confused...who is the "witch" Jayne refers to in his attempt at praying? I think I know but I'm not gonna say just in case you didn't reveal it...
Very witty chapter. Don't trust that Vern very much but poor Inara. First her dad and now she gets no nooky? Pfft, ship is gonna be ripe with frustration *lol*
You can't take the sky from me
"And he’s the dull one."
Seriously, that image of drunken Simon desperatly trying to make up to Kaylee be serenading her and Jayne being backup... all the LMAO's on the 'verse and it still ain't enough!!!
And I loved Kaylee's comment:
"Cap’n? My a total moonbrain for findin’ that sorta romantic?"
Awwwwwwww.... you did well in fixing the problem!!!
~ misskitten
-go"to lazy to login"blueguy
just read all the comments again and that'll be my opinion!! hehe!
Hurry and write up the next one! I can't wait!
Hmm still dont think I trust Inara's father....but I'm loving all the Mal/Inara of course! And I thought it was so cute that Mal wouldnt sleep with her while her father was on board. Cant wait for more as always!!
~K
But Inara's reactions to her father..I love those...I can just see her all creepified out about him coming back...love the crew as always..
Can't wait for more!
~SCE
interesting visual there...
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