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Bed and Wine: Part 13

Monday, February 6, 2006

Mal meets Inara's "dead" father. Simon sees a ship about a girl. BSB continues its pursuit. It's Joss's verse; I just borrow it.

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Bed and Wine: Part 13

By Kaynara

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The word *father* seemed to flip a switch in him.

Mal spread his legs a little, bumped Inara from between them with a gentle push, and sprung to his feet.

“You’re Inara’s father,” he repeated dully.

“That’s right, Mr. Reynolds.” But he was staring at Inara, his gaze ripe with what could only be termed need.

“Her dead father. One ate his own gun?”

“I only have the one, Mal.”

He turned, as though remembering her presence. She stared at the older man, her beautiful eyes expressionless. She wasn’t so successful in governing her lips. The softly-painted mouth, still warm from his kisses, quivered as she looked into the eyes of a dead man. What did she see there?

“Mr. Reynolds, you captain a ship called The Serenity, correct?”

Mal blinked.

“I’m sorry, can you just hold on a second...? Sir.” He touched a hand to the small of Inara’s back. “Inara. Are you here?” he said more softly.

“Take me home, Mal.”

“But, ah.” He shot a swift glance at her father. “It’s only the first date.”

“Please, Mal.” She slipped a hand through his arm, gave him a soulful stare, only half-affected.

“Inara. My sweet gypsy girl. Just let me--”

She shrank back, as though Death himself stretched cool, clammy hands toward her flesh. In the moonlight, her face appeared unnaturally pale. Mal stepped forward, set a firm hand on the older man’s shoulder.

“Whoa, now. Let’s all just keep our hands at our sides, dong ma?”

“They came to me in the night: three men from BSB. They told me you were dead.” She sank as one boneless into Mal’s chair. “You let them.”

“I had no choice, bao bei.”

“There’s always a choice,” Inara said sadly. “Letting your only daughter think you dead is the coward’s one.”

“I promise to explain, Inara. But this is neither the time nor the place.” He turned to Mal, the look in his dark eyes a plea. “Perhaps we can continue this conversation on The Serenity, Mr. Reynolds?”

“Well, sir, that would be the lady’s call.” Mal knelt on

Comments
Monday, 06 February 2006 04:01
Oh, Simon. Such a boob. Hee!

A shiny chapter, can't wait to see where this is going!
Monday, 06 February 2006 04:18
OMFG. Simon drunk, on the tale, singing. With Jayne as backup and the whole crew as an audience. Gotta give Kaylee credit for accepting it. My wife woulda just knocked my drunk ass off the table and let me sleep it off on the floor.

That was amazingly funny. Jayne's half-assed prayer at the end was perfect.

ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 04:26
Great job. Loved Simon singing.
Monday, 06 February 2006 05:24
I think I am seriously afraid of your brain. The Simon serenading scene was perfect because I was both cracking up and utterly mortified for him!

Favorite exchanges:

“Her dead father. One ate his own gun?”
“I only have the one, Mal.”
that is so very Inara.

and

“Let’s keep a civil tongue, Jayne,” Zoe said amused. “You teach my baby to curse and I’ll have to beat you with your own limbs.”

It was great as always, you're building to another suspenseful season ending I can just tell. Can they trust Inara's father? What will happen when BSB comes after them? What will happen when Gideon wakes up? You'd better write fast as I'm addicted to this story!


Monday, 06 February 2006 05:31
The image of Kaylee straddling Simon's hips holding painkillers is such a wonderful image.....

Nice job. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
GOLDNWLF
Monday, 06 February 2006 06:52
Another wonderful chapter as always. I am glad you brought up the ruby necklace again! I was wondering where it dissapeared to. I hope we get see a conversation between Inara and her father about her relationship with Mal....that is if we can really trust him.

Update soon! I love this story!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 06:57
wonderful, plotty, charactery writing as usual! I love the many subplots you've brought in - suspicion about a new romance, a blast from the past, and action adventure as always. You're a wonderful writer - thank you so much for sharing.

ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 10:46
"Yessir, that’s my crew. All ‘bout family and babies. You know we even had a preacher on board for awhile?”

*snorts* What a way to advertise Serenity! Miss the good Shepherd so much. I love this story!!! The plot always seems to have new twists and turns. The characterizations are perfect. I love every moment that Mal and Inara spend with each other. I'm just kind of confused...who is the "witch" Jayne refers to in his attempt at praying? I think I know but I'm not gonna say just in case you didn't reveal it...
Monday, 06 February 2006 13:18
Why is it that I trust Vern about as far as I could pitch him? Up-hill? Against a stiff wind? Thought Mal's puritanical streak is... well a real mood killer.
Monday, 06 February 2006 14:00
Simon? Righteous Brothers? I was giggling so hard I was gettin' looks.

Very witty chapter. Don't trust that Vern very much but poor Inara. First her dad and now she gets no nooky? Pfft, ship is gonna be ripe with frustration *lol*
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 15:11
God I love your work, keep bringing us more and more!! SHINEY!
Monday, 06 February 2006 17:29
This was brilliant! Loved everything in it especially a drunken Simon **singing** no less with Jayne adding his little quarter cents worth on the table top! That image will live in my brain until the cells in it give up and die. As for Inara's Dad it was so creepifying when he explained how he kept track of Inara through her mother's earrings. Just what is he really up to? Is he trying to save them for her sake or just setting them up for an even bigger evil to step in? Hope the next part is up soon, this was super shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 17:36
Mal shook his head ruefully.
"And he’s the dull one."

Seriously, that image of drunken Simon desperatly trying to make up to Kaylee be serenading her and Jayne being backup... all the LMAO's on the 'verse and it still ain't enough!!!

And I loved Kaylee's comment:

"Cap’n? My a total moonbrain for findin’ that sorta romantic?"

Awwwwwwww.... you did well in fixing the problem!!!


~ misskitten
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 19:38
Can't say more'n what's already been said. Execellent chapter, keep it up. Seeing another of these chapters posted always brings a smile :)

-go"to lazy to login"blueguy
Monday, 06 February 2006 23:19
wow everything i was gonna say was already said....bummer....
just read all the comments again and that'll be my opinion!! hehe!

Hurry and write up the next one! I can't wait!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 05:06
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA omg I LOVE you....Simon and Jayne singing "You've lost that loving feeling" just...wow...I just about cried laughing!!

Hmm still dont think I trust Inara's father....but I'm loving all the Mal/Inara of course! And I thought it was so cute that Mal wouldnt sleep with her while her father was on board. Cant wait for more as always!!

~K
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 09:45
this keeps getting better and better keep it up
FUNKYINFISHNET
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 13:57
Real shiny chapter, all the imagery and detail was wonderful. Mal's change in behavious is amusing (but I prefer him normal lol) and I hope Inara's daddy won't stay too long. Keep it up coz I love your work :- )
SERENITYCREWELLY
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 08:14
LMAO Simon!!! that was too funny....
But Inara's reactions to her father..I love those...I can just see her all creepified out about him coming back...love the crew as always..
Can't wait for more!
~SCE
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 00:29
Cmon wheres the next one?
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 06:20
I don't want to rush you in any way. I know it takes time...please post chpt. 14 I'm hooked on this story and dying to know more.....I check for your chapters more then I check my match.com hits.
Monday, 13 February 2006 19:56
“You teach my baby to curse and I’ll have to beat you with your own limbs.”
interesting visual there...

b
Saturday, 18 February 2006 16:16
I LOVE Jayne's little prayer at the end!!!

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