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Drops of Jupiter - Blindsided (Chapter 4)

Saturday, February 4, 2006

As disaster strikes with Simon and Kaylee, River's prophetic screams alert the crew to the danger. Kaylee/Simon. Part 4 of a what's-looking-like 6 part fic

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A.N.: Have fun with this part... apparently it made my beta cry, so... *holds out a tissue box, just in case*

"Kaylee!!" River sobbed, clinging to Inara as though her life depended on it. The startled Companion tried to hold the distraught girl while trying her best not to let herself panic.

“Shhh, River, its okay, Kaylee’s fine, she’s with Simon, she’ll be okay.” Inara tried to soothe her, but River would have none of it.

“No... a splash into the glow... lifeless... Kaylee...” River sobbed, trying to pry herself from Inara’s grip. The Companion tried her best to calm River down, but the young girl’s words were startling her more and more. Most of the crew had come to trust River’s instincts, if that’s what they were called, or at least know that when she carried on like this that something was definitely wrong. Inara’s heart was pounding in fright, wondering if Kaylee was okay.

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“Simon! I just saw a fish!” Kaylee exclaimed, leaning further over the rail and pointing below her, where a fish had leaped out of the water. The glowing water made fish hard to spot until they were at the surface, but this one had jumped. Simon laughed over by the picnic area, just finishing packing everything up. He turned to see Kaylee leaning with all her body weight against the guard rail, and to his dismay it seemed to be leaning a bit with her.

“Kaylee, maybe you shouldn’t lean on that rail so heavily..” Simon called to her as he began to walk to where she was. She didn’t hear him; she was too busy scanning the water for more fish. “Kayl--” he was cut off when a sudden loud cracking noise shot through the air, and he was horrified to see the guard rail she was leaning on suddenly snap. The sudden absence of support sent Kaylee headfirst into the rocks below with a terrified scream. “KAYLEE!” Simon yelled in panic, racing to the platform and watching with a sickening feeling in his stomach as she bounced off the rocks three times, hitting her head and cutting up her body. Simon’s

Comments
Saturday, 04 February 2006 18:15
It made me cry last night, and it's still having that effect on me now.

You seriously never fail to amaze me!

I hope dear Kaylee's alright and that Simon doesn't totally hate himself for letting it happen!
Saturday, 04 February 2006 18:33
As an added note...

...so much for my glow in the dark sharks and jellyfish idea.

*giggle*
Saturday, 04 February 2006 19:15
Hmm...ok, 20 feet into water isn't too bad. 20 feet into water after bouncing off a cliff, on the other hand....

I get the feeling Simon is going to be big on the self-hatred.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 19:31
hurry up with the next part, I hope she's allright.
~ misskitten
Monday, 13 February 2006 17:41
that has got to be the worst first date ever...

b

ps. why are there so many kaylee-gets-hurt fics??? what did she ever do???
Monday, 13 February 2006 18:01
aww lol... yeah there are a lot...

I think it has something to do with the fact that Kaylee is so innocent..
Thursday, 16 February 2006 04:16
Please, more, this can go in so many directions!

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