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Drops of Jupiter - The Forgotten (Chapter 6)

Friday, May 5, 2006

Serenity's crew learns of and has to deal with a rather saddening aspect of Kaylee's recovery, and they wonder if it'll work itself out in time... Simon/Kaylee.

Woo! I'm back, finally! Sorry it took me so long! Hope you like this chapter!

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"Who are you?!"

Simon stared at her, shocked. He had known memory loss was a good possibility, but he hadn't been prepared for it. He glanced over his shoulder at Mal and Inara, who were both looking about as shocked as Simon. Kaylee was looking in fright from Simon, to Mal, to Inara and back again, and it was clear in her eyes that she hadn't a clue who they were. Simon crouched down a bit at her side, pulled a stool over to him and sat on it, looking at her in concern.

"Kaylee... baobei, don't you remember any of us? Simon, Inara, Mal..." he asked softly, naming them each in turn, wishing he could taking away the look of utter fear and confusion in her eyes. She shook her head, her eyes still as wide as saucers. Simon swallowed a lump that was forming in his throat. As much as he wanted to sit and discuss this with Mal and Inara, and try and figure out how to fix it, his first priority was Kaylee. He had to get her to calm down, not to be so scared. He had to try and convince her she was surrounded by friends, not strangers.

Suddenly the need for him to do such a thing was taken away when Kaylee let out a moan.

"Simon?" she said breathily, looking up at him, clearly recognizing him. A relieved smile broke out over his face and he heard relieved sighs from Inara and Mal behind him.

"Yeah, baobei... its me, its Simon..." he reached out his hand, cursing its shaking, and gently brushed her hair out of her face, cupping her uninjured cheek in his hand, his thumb stroking her cheekbone. He sensed Mal and Inara moving and saw them appear on Kaylee's other side a moment later, looking down at Kaylee.

"Hey, Meimei." said Mal softly, grasping one of Kaylee's hands lightly. "You just hang in there, okay?" Kaylee managed a small smile and she nodded slightly, squeezing his hand weakly. Simon glanced up as Inara gently placed her hand on Kaylee's forearm.

"Are you alright, Kaylee?" she asked quietly, concernedly. Simon could see the beginnings of te

Comments
Friday, 05 May 2006 21:51
Poor Simon and his guilt. I'm sure the doctor will be able to make everything right and they get get on with their growing relationship.

Don't wait so long between the next posts, hmm?!
Friday, 05 May 2006 21:52
*blush* Sorry about that.. my muses kinda died...

I'll try to get it faster this time!
Sunday, 07 May 2006 06:19
I love how you paint an image. Continue on, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Saturday, 03 June 2006 21:25
I'm sitting here wondering why the Jesus I didn't review this before.

In any case, I just re-read the entire series and it's so amazing. The whole story, this chapter in particular, is heartbreaking. You've got tears in my eyes!

>>He took one of her hands and gently kissed it, leaning his head against her arm, letting a single tear fall.<<

That line right there is what did it, that just broke my heart right in two. I can just imagine how guilty and responsible Simon feels. I love how you manage to embody everything in this story with such emotion. It really is amazing.

Keep it up!

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