AN: Kaylee/Inara femmeslash. There, i said it twice, you've been warned! =) This is my first attempt at writing femmeslash and I had fun writing it. There is possibly a part two in this works. Enjoy. ^^
Kaylee could see the annoyance in Mal before she'd even gotten near him, just from the way he was standing. He was leaning against a support beam rising from the catwalk on which he stood, his arms crossed in front of him, and once she got close enough to see, a grimace on his face.
Loud metallic clanks echoed around them, and Kaylee winced from the volume of them as she came up beside Mal. He glanced down at her, giving her a small, forced smile, then looked back at the shuttle door, staring at it as though he could see right through it.
"What's she gettin' done in there, Cap'n?!" Kaylee shouted, as it was the only way for her to be heard over the loud bangs and clangs echoing from inside the shuttle. Mal didn't answer at first, though she saw annoyance and his usual stubbornness flickering in his eyes.
"She won't tell me." he said bitterly. Kaylee tried not to smile. Aside from Inara, he'd never let anyone install something somewhere in the ship without his exclusive permission. "Says it'll help business." he said, his tone disbelieving. Kaylee smiled, but didn't say anything. She knew what he was thinking, about Inara's career choice and what it entailed; he was clearly trying to imagine what could possibly aid in what she did. Kaylee was wondering too, but unlike Mal, she was curious and excited to see the new addition to her shuttle.
Kaylee smiled a characteristic Kaylee smile and took Mal's hand. "C'mon Cap, let's go get somethin' ta eat." she suggested, pulling him along. After a moment of resistance, he came along on his own, and Kaylee lead him into the dining area, the bangs getting fainter as they walked away.
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Later that day, an hour or two after supper, Kaylee was lounging in her hammock in the engine room, dozing lightly, the hum of
The sensory description and imagery in this piece are spectacular, I could almost feel everything along with the characters, surround myself with their presence in this story. The form was flawless, the pace of the story was perfect and the syntax and diction were exceptionally well observed.
You've made the pairing very believeable. You really managed to show Inara and Kaylee's love for one another in a riveting new way, on a great new plane. Writing like this really makes me believe that under the right circumstances, the pairing could have worked. Even with the fact that this is a non-canon pairing, you've managed to handle characterization brilliantly. There was not a word out of character in this piece.
Another thing I have to comment on is the absolute simplicity of their attraction. It just happened, no strings attached, you made it seem so natural. For that, I commend you once more. No worries, no complications, just love.
Once again a breathtaking, ground breaking piece. I sincerely hope you keep it up!
I look forward to reading more like this!
Yeah, there's gonna be a sequel, a little more playful, a little more... shall we say, smutty. Might not be strictly femmeslash, but it should work :)
Thanks again!!!
It was actually an inspiration from a Smallville episode, one of Lex's many girlfriends comes up behind him, kisses his neck and says "I'll go draw us a bath"... and yeah, this idea just popped into my head, hehe.
I can really see this kind of thing happening between Kaylee and Inara, for the reasons mentioned by Anonymous: there's shared characteristics that would allow both women to feel comfortable with one another in a way that they wouldn't get with Simon or Malcolm;)
Can't wait for part 2:D
BEB
"S'not true." she said bashfully.
" 'mazing..." breathed Kaylee, her eyes still closed as she felt almost overwhelmed by the feelings of Inara's touch.
"I gotta go 'fore he kills me..." she said softly, regrettingly.
As usual with your writing, I can see her saying these things, along with the other verses you have her saying. Great.
The whole idea of a jacuzzi on Serenity...very original and imaginative. And yes, I loved it, the pairing and everything.
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