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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-Six

Friday, February 3, 2006

Plotting to take out Shan Yu, and Mal gets his guns back.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty-Six

RESCUE TEAM –39:01

“You sure about this, Sir?” Zoe asked, eyebrows raised inquisitively. “Don’t much like the thought o’ you havin’ all the fun without me.” She held her shotgun casually, but in a way that Mal’s long acquaintance with her told him much. She was irritated at being relegated to what she clearly thought was menial duty, when in fact she was far more valuable as part of the assault team that would make a foray on the Engine Room – but that she would accept his judgment because it did make a kind of sense, she did want to see Wash, and she was, after all, at lower flight rank than him. She would also get back at him in some painful, personally humiliating way at some future point for this assignment.

Funny, he thought to himself, how a little thing like how a woman held her gun could communicate subtle nuances and distinctions like that.

“I don’t much like it either, but there you go,” Mal admitted, warily. “We got wounded. And there’s too much evil lurkin’ in the hallways to let them go back without some protection.” He looked around, but didn’t elaborate. The second White Tiger base was just as frightening as the first, in terms of slogans and debris, but bigger. There was also blood on the deck, and one Tiger corpse that seemed to have been shot execution style, a pistol to the back of the head. He wondered about the story behind that – a good one, no doubt. At least there was one less Tiger to contend with. Eight, actually, after their assault.

“Ain’t like they’re helpless,” Zoe said, her underlying tone a plea for another assignment. “Couple o’ commandos with ‘em. They’ll be fine!”

“They ain’t up to the stress and you know it,” Mal reproved. “You want them relying on a couple of broken up soldiers, a recently tortured preacher, and a couple o’ Companions? Oh, and Dead-Eye Tam, scourge of the spaceways. Zoe, you gotta go. Don’t trust no one else to make sure they get back to Serenity.”

“Yeah,” Zoe admitted re

Comments
Friday, 03 February 2006 08:46
Oh, man. I have been waiting to see the next chapter of this saga ever since I first came across it here. I have to say, the next chapter is always worth the wait.
Excellent stuff, please keep it up!
Friday, 03 February 2006 10:51
Ok... so it took me three days to work through all your back stories including Kaylee's Lament and then I finally settle back expecting to have to wait for the next instalment and you go and make my day.

I'm now wearing an inane grin and very much excited about where this is going!

As a comment on the whole piece so far I wanted to comment that I think Simon, River and Wash are particularly well written. River's harmonica makes me smile! Also I love the humour you work into every scene.

For this chapter in particular I like Mal's obsession with his gun and Zoe and Mal having a discussion about feeling their age.

I have to go now before I'm late for my lecture but thank you for cheering me up with this epic.

Taya
Friday, 03 February 2006 17:31
Very much enjoying this and so happy to see a new chapter! Love it, keep going. Shiny, shiny story. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 18:34
This chapter, considering it's as awesome as each and everyone before it (meaning I can read it time and time again and still have fun), ain't getting nearly the praise it deserves.

I'm lovin' it, in case you can't tell. The bounty hunters using the nuke, Johnny freely admitting he's pussy whupped and the Heavenly Master reacting to Shan Yu's return. This series continues to kick ass time and time again.
Saturday, 04 February 2006 16:19
Great piece of work, as always.

A question, however: Is there a reason Kaylee is referred to as "Ms. Winnett" as if "Winnett" is her last name? Another note, but related: I think the official spelling would be "Winnit", anyhow, as in "Kaywinnit".

Hey, they don't call me Stoopid Head for nothing!
Saturday, 04 February 2006 22:40
Fixed! That's what I get for writing these at 4 am. Keep me honest.

StA
Sunday, 05 February 2006 20:01
Aww... Johnny is adorable!
Sunday, 12 February 2006 16:08
aww, nyan-nyan and johhny are so cute!!! and the three guys watching inara and nyan-nyan was just priceless...

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 11:47
A wise man knows when he's whipped. Johnny is rapidly becoming a wise man :P

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