Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Drops of Jupiter - Into the Night (chapter 3)

Friday, February 3, 2006

While a somewhat tongue-tied Simon leads Kaylee to a mysterious destination, a frightened River makes Inara nervous. Kaylee/Simon.

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A.N.: So, here's part three. Please dont kill me for the cliffhanger, hehe. So, like i predicted, this one's in Romance. Next one should be back in general fic. Enjoy, and comments are always appreciated, as usual!! =)

A muscle in Simon's cheek twitched nervously as he waited for Kaylee in the cargo bay, pacing back and forth. He was wearing his black suit and vest, with his untucked white shirt, and feeling like he was going to burst from anxiety. He carried a black leather bag that held a blanket, a thermos of hot chocolate and a small box of strawberries; a surprise for Kaylee. Finally he decided if he walked back and forth any more, his shaky legs would give out on him. So he sat on the metal stairs, waiting.

Kaylee was being lead down the corridor to the cargo bay by Inara, suddenly full of nerves and terrified. Inara was trying to soothe her, but it wasn't working; Kaylee was so nervous about how Simon would think of her in this outfit, this beautiful shen-i borrowed from Inara.

"Meimei, relax. You two are going to have a wonderful time." Inara reassured her again, squeezing Kaylee's shoulders. Kaylee shot her a terrified glance as they reached the door to the cargo bay and she stopped short. Inara turned Kaylee to look at her. "Come on, Kaylee. Head up, back straight, be confident. You’re gorgeous, and he'll love it. Really." Kaylee took a deep breath, trying to let Inara's words rush over her. Inara smiled, gave Kaylee a light, reassuring kiss on the top of her head, and urged her forward. Swallowing thickly, she stepped onto the catwalk above the cargo bay and began to descend the stairs, trying not to trip over her ankle length skirt.

Simon heard soft footsteps echoing on the metal stairs behind him and his breathing increased rapidly. This was it. He stood and turned around, a greeting forming on his lips, but froze when he saw her. Saw her slim form enveloped in dark green satin, trimmed with gold. He gaped at her, gaped at how the gold from the

Comments
Friday, 03 February 2006 06:23
Hmm...twenty feet into water isn't too bad. But then, I know people who lived in beach towns all their life and can't swim, so this could be a bummer.

Cliffhangers are evil. Please continue this ASAP.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 13:26
Twenty feet into *water* isn't bad... but what if there are like some weird, freaky glow in the dark sharks, or jellyfish or something? There are *many* ways this could go.

I think it's absolutely awesome!

~Wanmei (forgot to login aheh...)~
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 15:07
Awww that's gotta be one of the sweetest Simon/Kaylee dates I've read... but I really hope Kaylee isn't knocked unconcious when she hits the water... Hurry up with the next part, okay?
~ misskitten
Friday, 03 February 2006 16:51
Eeeek! Good cliffhanger, complete with cliff. More please.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 23:39
Wanmei here again, still too gorram lazy to log in heh...

Oh man, Cliomuse, the "complete with cliff" comment amused me!

I just re-read this again and it made me all warm and fuzzy again! =)

*waits anxiously for next part*

*can't help boasting* Oh right, I'm the beta, I get to see it before anyone else! Heeee!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 00:07
Excellent work...again :)

Nice cliffhanger, but it better be resolved soon, its hard to breathe with my heart in my throat.

-goblueguy
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 February 2006 00:09
PS Extremely jealous of the Beta grrrrr arrrrgh ;)
Sunday, 12 February 2006 15:39
*hides behind sofa* eep!!!! save her, simon!!! save her!!!

b
Thursday, 16 February 2006 04:07
I love cliff-hangers, especially those that have cliffs!

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