Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Best Deceptions: Ch 5

Wednesday, February 1, 2006

Fun with sling shots and cows. Things get a little heated. So do the eggs. Jayne/Kaylee.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3474    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet >

***

Kaylee walked into the shop and let her eyes linger on the familiar surfaces. She'd spent an inordinate amount of time in here, pestering her dad when she was very young to let her help and eventually, when he finally relented and let her work here, pestering him to let her go a little early.

"Thought you were nearly finished in here?"

There was no one visible on the work floor, which meant he was somewhere melded inside one of the machines and she wasn't about to start looking through each and every one.

"So did I." Frank stuck his head out of a nearby Capissen, his eyes smiled a welcome, but his face frowned at her. "We got some new engines in. Thought I told you, you weren't to be workin' while you was here."

"Daddy." A slight chide in her voice, she could feel him melting already. "It's nothin' too big. Just a favor I said I'd do."

"Yeah, well." He pointed off to the left corner. "They delivered it this morning. That one's yours."

"Thanks." A quick peck to his cheek. "Usual tools in the usual place?"

He scoffed at her.

"Where else would they be?" Frank placed a hand on the back of his daughter's head and let

Comments
RAVENHAIR
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 00:49
Worth the wait! (I didn't want to nag after you did such a wonderful job with Pieces!)

but keep your promise!

would quote the lovely lines, but there are too many and I'm still trying to cool down after they tried to fix dinner!

*sighs contentedly*
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 01:15
Oooh, this is great. This story just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for more!
HUMBUG
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 01:18
Fan-ruttin'-tastic, Jacqui, as Jayne would say!

Don't leave the two of them all hot and bothered with no satisfaction for too long, will ya?

Can't wait to see what happens next..... ...
Will they finally get down to some sexin' (to quote the big man himself)? ....... or will the rest of the family get back and interupt them for a second time...... Ya see, I know how you like to tease your audience ......

Don't keep us hangin' for too much longer!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 02:19
You have such a fun turn of phrase. Hee hee - just one of many that were quite memorable:

Then his brain caught up with events and his hands caught up with her ass.

I always enjoy your stories. Looking forward to your next piece.

-p
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 03:24
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Just what I needed after today. *shudders*

I love it! You knew I would. I can't even tell you in all the ways.

Rinny
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 03:40
i am loving this story so much. please get the next installment out asap.
SEARINGFLESH55
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 04:49
Oh how I missed this series!!!! Don't get me wrong, I LOVED the Pieces series but I forgot how good this one was!

Please give us the next part and if you wanna throw in a few dirty bits, that okay with me!
BOOKADDICT
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 12:14
I love the sling shot partnership and Kaylee not understanding Jayne's hand gestures.

I have so many favourite lines, but this one really caught me..."Now, Jayne Cobb had been called many things in his life, many revolving around the word dense, but he knew what it meant when a woman got that sparkle in her eye"

Waiting, waiting for the next chapter.

ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 February 2006 17:26
Thank you!
"Kay"(...)
"Winnie" (...)
"Lee" (...)
Loved this! And everything else, of course! thank you for being back on this-
you are begging? I think it really is more the other way round!
Did I mention THANK YOU!
MAANTRE
Saturday, 04 February 2006 04:01
Oh Jacqui, you have me on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter...
You are a brilliant writer, and I can't wait for the rest. A little Jaylee ALWAYS makes my day;)
BELLONA
Saturday, 11 February 2006 18:28
squeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! jayne can help me cook any time *wink*

b

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.