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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-Five

Sunday, January 29, 2006

In which we see Simon discover something about Mal in the middle of a firefight

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty-Five

RESCUE PARTY –40:04

Jayne crawled forward on his belly, making nary a sound. The corridor was dim, lit only by the widely spaced emergency lights, and Jayne wore an all-black tactical suit, courtesy of the former Imperial Army. He had a bullpup carbine in his hands, but when he spotted his target he set it down, slowly, carefully, without even a click as it touched the cold deckplate. Instead he drew a large black automatic, pre-equiped with a silencer. That toy he had liberated from the armory, and he wouldn’t soon part with it. It was an odd caliber, a .41, but he didn’t mind. It was just the tool for taking out a sentry without calling undue attention to oneself.

It was a longish shot, nearly a hundred feet. But Jayne waited for the right moment, watching the man patrol until he caught on to the pattern of his movements. While one part of his brain was doing that, the rest of it tried its best to think of nothing at all. He’d learned a long time ago that part of the art of sniping was not alerting your target, and for some reason if you stared at a man long enough, intently enough, he started getting nervous even if he didn’t know you were there.

Folk got killed for that kind of subtle thing. You didn’t bring your attention to bear on a target until you were sure you were ready to pull the trigger. It was something you had to be careful with, and patient. It surprised some that a man like Jayne Cobb, who was so sloppy about so many things in the rest of his life, could operate with such care and professionalism when he was offing a body.

Fact was, Jayne was real good at anything that might serve to keep Jayne breathing, a state he had grown accustomed to over the course of a long life. If not making any noise would get yourself shot, then Jayne would be the quietest gorram mouse in the church.

Until he was ready, that is. Then his attention snapped totally towards his prey, just as he turned his back, and Jayne exhaled loudly

Comments
Sunday, 29 January 2006 00:55
Sorry for the delay. Work has been hellish this week.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 01:18
Forget adrenaline junkie. I'm a chapter junkie. You rock, man.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 01:35
it's interesting to me how I can watch a show, then read your stories, then go back and watch the show again and nod to myself and think 'Yup, StA was right, Mal really is an adrenaline junkie'

It really is rather an exceptional talent you have.

Cheers

Godeskian
Sunday, 29 January 2006 02:28
Wash and Kaylee getting their geek on was priceless.



Sunday, 29 January 2006 04:23
>“I may have to change my panties,” she admitted. “You?”


Yep, me too. This was a great chapter!!!

Sunday, 29 January 2006 11:13
Great chapter, and yup, Mal is an adrenalin junkie. So happy he and Simon have got to Book, loved him asking for the gun then using it to take out the light! Very Book. And Jayne was just perfect. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 29 January 2006 13:27
So much goodness to praise, I ain't got the time to write it all!

Shiny-riffic!
Sunday, 29 January 2006 18:37
Very shiny!

I love,love,love your Kaylee and Wash. They have such great moments together.

Yep,Mal is an adrenaline junkie-I like the scene with him and Simon.

Everyone is great though!

:D
Sunday, 29 January 2006 22:23
I check for new chapters every day.
I love this story.
Keep writing.
Monday, 30 January 2006 17:12
EEP!! YAY! You just took up my whooooole lunch break at work, StA, and I couldn't be happier! I adore Kaylee and Wash! Plus: Tons o' Jayne! "Jayne was just like that". Love it!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 02:37
You know, when I began reading this, I thought, "It's fifty-five chapters! (S)He's gotta be almots done, and there's no way I'm going to finish all of this before s/he posts the last one!"

...

Damn you. ;_;

In all seriousness, I am in love here. People are, for the most part, marvelously in-character--the only quibbles I have being that River's too sane and Inara's too, iunno, piratey?--and the style is amazingly accurate to the series *and* the movie.

Amazing job--now hurry up and get out another chapter! :P

~Chibi_Squirt
Saturday, 11 February 2006 15:13
you aren't a postal worker, are you? 'cause you seem to know an awful lot about how to kill folk...

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 15:49
Screw the Alliance,

I have read 55 chapters of Lei Fong Wu in less than 4 days. You hooked me with "Kaylee's Lament" and I had to have more. I have run an endurance race to read your chapters.

For someone who has lived and breathed with Joss Whedon's characters in the world you created, I say you have done an admirable job.

The PDF file I downloaded was 790 pages and when I got to page 781 last night, I thought, "There's no way, in this 'verse, that he can finish this thing in 9 pages.

I was right and I look forward to reading your chapters in a more leisurely pace; as they come out.

Keep up the good work, but don't be afraid to strike out on your own. The characters are Joss', but you can do whatever you want.

Ulysses
Friday, 17 February 2006 18:45
MOST AUSPICIOUSLY SHINY!!! All good stories are about people, but the scifi/gear head ubergeek in me also loves awesome gear and technospeak (rational or otherwise; its even beter when its based on hard science). Yet again a fantastic chapter!!!

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