Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

New Prospects: Chapter 2

Saturday, January 21, 2006

(*WARNING* This fic contains some spoiler references to the BDM - if you haven't seen it yet, do so immediately!) Miranda is over a month in the past but its legacy lives on, and the crew of Serenity feel it more than most. There are new roles for some, new rooms for others, but still the same pressing need for food on the table and fuel in the tanks. Attempting to reestablish his ship's solid name among the 'business community', Mal heads for the moon of Trinity, and a meeting with an old friend, Ossie Chen, whose promise of work is too good to pass up...

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The story continues as Serenity reaches the moon of Trinity. It's a slow-burner to begin with, but patience has its rewards - by Chapter 5 or so, things should really start to hit the fan... Thanks to everyone for taking the time to read Chapter 1, and for your positive comments. They keep me motivated when I'm typing away at two in the morning!

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Trinity was about as far from civilisation as it was possible to get, short of leaving the system entirely, and it was no surprise to Mal that Ossie had ended up there. Most like he was on the hide from someone or other, he surmised. He usually was. Trinity offered privacy on a geographical scale: the population of the small moon could comfortably be estimated in double figures.

“Take us in nice and careful, River. Don’t need to tell you that we’re not in the best shape for this.”

“I understand.” The girl nodded firmly. “The engine’s sick now. We don’t have a wide enough power band to offset the effects of atmospheric resistance. So you want me to instigate a shallower angle of attack on entry, to minimise stress on the drive couplings without compromising hull integrity.”

“Uh… yeah. All of that. Shiny.”

The moon loomed large in the windshield now, a reddish-brown ball crowned by a halo of bright atmosphere.

“Shiny,” River echoed. “Glass world. Shake it up so it snows on all the little houses.”

“Well,” Mal said flatly, “we can do that later, maybe.”

Trinity was not long ‘formed, and it showed. The only significant population centre was the single port, Trinity Station, where ships came to deposit new settlers. Almost by accident, it had become an important waypoint to those who chose to frequent this far-flung region: a place to land, refuel and restock, and to do business.

Dotted around the sprawling port, like children keeping close to their mother’s skirts, a few farms struggled to scratch a living in the red desert, but it was a losing battle – in spite of the best efforts of the terraformers, the moon’s soil remained barre

Comments
Saturday, 21 January 2006 19:55
Well, that's Chapter 2 on the board. I'm speed-writing this story, and ideas are coming to me as I type - as someone who's been working on the same novel for the past three years, it's a new approach for me, but I'm finding it mighty invigorating as an exercise!

Chapter 3 should be up in a few days' time. What kind of work does Ossie have for our BDH? Who is the mysterious Suited Man? And will Jayne get the chance to show off Lola? Stay tuned...
Saturday, 21 January 2006 21:18
Keep up the good work Jayro!
Saturday, 21 January 2006 22:38
keep it going, poor Mal not getting enough sleep, he *could* suggest Kaylee and River switching rooms, you know ;)
CBY
Saturday, 21 January 2006 23:17
Interesting pairings you set up here, the Kaylee/River subplot sounds especially interesting the way you decribed their relationship in chapter one.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 23:28
Oooh, super shiny, but I am so not liking Niska appearing on the scene. That man is one very bad penny and he always turns up! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 January 2006 00:33
I'm loving this. I just read both parts finally, and I like. Very much reading like an episode, and you have done a great job with everyones voices.

I especially love the bit about Jayne being jealous.

*loves*
Sunday, 22 January 2006 07:44
thank you for adding inara in i was kinda freaked when in the first part she was not there and i thought you might of had her not on the ship but in sihnon or some other fancy shmancy place where she just dont belong. i love the way you write this it not only gives me visual but audio. what i mean is some people write so i can only see what is happening and some write so i can only hear. you do them both in just the right amount. hell you even gave me the sence of smell with the whole inara thing lol.
DR5700
Monday, 23 January 2006 02:35
keep up the good work. its an enjoyable read. i look forward to the next one. keep it up.
Thursday, 11 January 2007 16:16
Jayne's 'harem' got me laughing hard.

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