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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-Four

Friday, January 20, 2006

The Devil and Shepherd Book

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty-Four

The Major shook Book awake roughly. He was in a small machine room, the hub of dozens of conduits and pipes that controlled . . . God knew what. Something unimportant. It did not have the feel of a room that was visited often. One wall was curved, the exterior of one of the big reactors he guessed. He was sitting in a cheap folding metal chair, the kind you saw in poor churches and cheap banquet halls. His hands were still bound behind his back, his shoulders uncomfortably numb from the long time he had assumed that position. The room smelt of lubricants and stale air, cleaning chemicals and reactor coolants. The sole illumination came from a portable harsh white utility light near the door.

“Good morning, Shepherd,” the Major said pleasantly. “I trust you slept well?”

Book did not answer immediately. His mouth was dry. When he finally did summon the moisture to speak clearly, he focused on the issue foremost in his mind.

“Tell me he’s dead,” he whispered. “Tell me he died in the revivification.” It happened, sometimes. People did not always come out of hibernation properly, especially when they had been down for a long time.

“Oh, our dear Master is very much alive and well. In full possession of his critical faculties, I assure you. He lives.”

“God . . . must be sleeping,” he choked out.

“I’ve heard your God is dead, Shepherd. In the ancient Kuo Ming dynasty, they considered all of the gods to be dead. Emperor Mao was quite adamant about it.”

“He ain’t dead. You think that, you ain’t paying proper attention to the ‘verse.”

The Major smiled. “Perhaps. Would you care for a drink?”

Book eyed the younger man – who was a man grown four generations before Book had been born – with suspicion. “I’d love one.”

The Major took a canteen off of his belt and uncapped it. He gently held it to the Shepherd’s lips, and waited for the man to drink his fill.

“Thank you,” the old man said when he was done. “You’ve done me a kindne

Comments
Friday, 20 January 2006 20:39
This one was hard. Sorry it took so long, but I wanted to do it right. I hope I have.

ScrewtheAlliance
SUVIE
Friday, 20 January 2006 21:13
boy howdy did you do it right!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 22:17
Great writing. I crave the new additions every day. Keep it up.
Friday, 20 January 2006 22:19
You're the best with dialogue, even tricky bits like this one. Very fine.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 23:26
Awesome! Don't mess with Book. At all. He won a contest of wills with Shan Yu himself! Really vivid imagery, sharp, funny writing.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 23:53
Terrific scene! I really love your story and was pleased as punch to see an update today. Interesting examination of what motivates a tyrant.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 00:57
*mumbling incoherently*

BOOOK! NOOOOO! I love Book! And...with the pain! Awwww!!

And now I'm supposed to go appreciate "Tristan and Isolde", after that? All I'll be thinking of is poor Book all cut up and scary!
Saturday, 21 January 2006 02:22
Beautiful. I'm all twitchy from the torture description (too much physical empathy). Can't wait for the next bit. And for Shan Yu to get his.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 04:55
Ohhhh. Book! No!
WINGONTHEWIND
Saturday, 21 January 2006 05:47
Oh, ouch! While I'd love to see this thing made into a movie/show, I think I'd have to go into a seperate room for the Book torturing!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 05:53
You make Kafka seem like a warm up band for the main attraction! Your treatment of Book epitomizes the ideal of the true believer. Able to withstand any mere physical experience, proving we are mental beings, not physical.

Reminds me of Paul and the gom jabbar.
GGCRONO
Saturday, 21 January 2006 06:45
Torture is a very difficult thing to write well. You have done so VERY well. I commend you.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 11:00
Good gorram, the torture session was so long, twisted and painful that it was difficult to read but the dialogue was totally engrossing. I loved it that Book outlasted the machinations of Shan Yu long enough to be saved. I want to see that *tamade hundan* get his come uppance. This is a mighty fine myth. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 21 January 2006 13:45
Wow.

This has to be your best chapter yet. You got it just perfect. Well worth the wait.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 16:27
I'm with Rel. There's really nothing else to say.

Can't wait for the next thrillin', heroical chapter.



Saturday, 21 January 2006 16:27
Yep, you got right. I'd have paid for this book!
Saturday, 21 January 2006 20:39
I'm holding out hope that one day we WILL pay for THESE books.
Sunday, 22 January 2006 02:53
Always good. No exception this time.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 January 2006 11:48
I wish I could say I liked it, but gruesome torture isn't something I can really love.

Let's say instead that I found it very compelling, and well written.

Godeskian
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 15:34
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I love how you tied River and Book, this was supposed to be a tie to the part in the movie where he is dying and tells Mal to believe in River right??? If it is that was just amazing!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 15:55
Hi!!!

Longtime lurker but a longtime admirer of your stunning work. I was hooked by Kaylee's Lament and then some kind soul pointed to this story.

I love the plot,the description,the dialogue,the emotions that you place so brilliantly into every chapter. The characters are damn perfect,plus it's always great to see another depth to them,especially Inara

I take my hat off to you!!(If I had a hat ;) )
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 21:43
- Complete with 9mm rounds, it seems. And . . . a serrated knife?
- Shaving accident.
preacher's been around mal too long...

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