Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

New Prospects: Chapter 1

Friday, January 20, 2006

(*WARNING* This fic contains some spoiler references to the BDM - if you haven't seen it yet, do so immediately!)

Miranda is over a month in the past but its legacy lives on, and the crew of Serenity feel it more than most. There are new roles for some, new rooms for others, but still the same pressing need for food on the table and fuel in the tanks.

Attempting to reestablish his ship's solid name among the 'business community', Mal heads for the moon of Trinity, and a meeting with an old friend, Ossie Chen, whose promise of work is too good to pass up...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4420    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: All references are copyright of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy, of course. Thanks for giving us such amazing characters to play with - it's like having a shiny new toolbox!

I've been writing for some time but this is my first attempt at a fanfic, so any comments are mighty appreciated. Here goes...

NEW PROSPECTS

A Firefly Story by Jayro

1

The black…

Mal had seen it countless times through the battered windshield of his ship, but never more had it lived up to its billing than now. Even the stars seemed to have been frightened away from this region, and they had every reason to be fearful, for this was Reaver country.

That name was almost taboo aboard Serenity now. The cannibalistic demons had visited too great a hurt upon her crew, and though River Tam had done her best that day to exact all kinds of vengeance with her blades, the loss of Wash still pained each and everyone. The toy dinosaurs remained, dotted about the pilot’s console, but there was an empty space on the bridge that could never be completely filled.

Mal glanced back from the window, at the willowy teenaged girl seated at the control yoke. She was flying Serenity solo for the first time but he was not unduly anxious. Beyond her tumbling curtains of dark hair, the look on her face was one of implacable calm.

“Talk to me, little one,” he said thoughtfully. “Tell me shiny things.”

The girl turned her big eyes in his direction; he could almost feel her reading him. After a moment a slight, knowing smile flickered across her face. “Everything’s fine," she said. "You shouldn’t worry so much.”

Mal had no doubt that River could pilot his ship as perfectly and precisely as Wash. He recalled the words of the doctor, her brother, when he told the assembled crew that there was nothing that did not come as easily to her as breathing did to everyone else. But she did not have Wash’s creativity and sleight of hand at the helm. That was something she would have to learn, and quickly.

Stil

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 14:49
Very nice, can't wait to see what happens next :)
~ misskitten
Friday, 20 January 2006 15:44
Keep it coming
Friday, 20 January 2006 15:56
Intresting, please continue
Friday, 20 January 2006 16:47
?Docking? (wipes spit coffee off monitor and keyboard) In the words of Mr. Universe, "This is goooood." A nice start to a great adventure! Keep it up.
Friday, 20 January 2006 16:49
Oooh always said Simon couldn't keep his foot out of his mouth long enough to keep the good mechanic happy. I hope I'm wrong- awesome story!
Friday, 20 January 2006 19:34
Thanks for the positive comments so far, folks!

This is my first fanfic, so I'm interested to see how it's received. I've read plenty of previous fics and the standard is mighty high - if I can come close to some of those, we'll be shiny!

Working on Chapter 2 now - should be up soon. Be assured that this story will get pacier as we progress and as I find my feet!
Friday, 20 January 2006 19:38
OOoh, somehow I don't think this new job is going to go smooth, and if the Reavers aren't at home where the good gorram are they? Got a nasty feeling where that might be. Good work, can't wait to see what happens next. And poor Simon, he really does need to learn how to talk to girls. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
GOR
Friday, 20 January 2006 20:14
I think your standard is just as high Jayro. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
CBY
Friday, 20 January 2006 20:22
I am not a fan of chapter based stories but this one sounds interesting enough to keep my eyes on for a while.

The writing is very good and imaginable.
Friday, 20 January 2006 20:59
Jayro, this is good stuff. I have to say, you sound like me. Worrying about you skills and such. If this is any indication, no need to worry.

Keep it up!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 23:41
Nice. I like your story, and your style. It had never really occurred to me that images of a "vengeful River Tam" might be popping up in the various nightmares of our favourite crew members. Almost all the fanfic talks of her being accepted, fixed, one of the crew, understood, or at least not feared anymore.

Now that you've made me think about it, I can see why Kaylee would fear her even more now than she did before. I wonder what other assumptions you're going to make me rethink before this story is through. Can't wait to find out!

Errbrr
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 03:35
i like it. You have talent
Saturday, 21 January 2006 12:56
Good story. I like thst we see how everyone is trying to move on. Looking forward to the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 January 2006 19:53
Good story. Kaylee's quite in character, but it still annoys me when she tries to change Simon - he accepts her as she is, I just wish she could do the same for him.

I like the frequent mentions of Wash. Wouldn't mind if someone mentioned Book, though.
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 21:05
She didn't want him to see the fearful look that stayed on her face at the thought of being pursued through the ship by a vengeful River Tam.
interesting visual there...

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 17:58
This is the first Firefly fanfic I've ever read. I picked this one because the story seemed cannon. A good adventure story the way they should be. I have not been disappointed. The characters are very In Character. I'm a freak about that. Some people aren't, but I want to read about the characters that I love from the show, not a bastardization of them. Thank you. I'm glad I picked this story to be my first Firefly fic.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 17:59
ARG! I didn't mean to post as Anonymous!

Sorry,
Shinigami_senpai
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 February 2006 03:18
Interesting!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 19:52
Just great! Keep it up!

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