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Wednesday, January 11, 2006

The end of First-Happy Felicitations. Best to read the series from First. S/K

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3543    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: Holy Crap!!! So sorry to keep you guys waiting!!! If you’re still interested in the story, thanks for hanging in there! I got super sick, then the holidays, vacation, and this horrible creature called writer’s block was rearing it’s ugly head. So here is the end of the First- Happy Felicitations. I hope you guys like it. I have to say it got really sappy, I guess I’m just a big mushy puff. The end has some possibilities and I will revisit this story soon, but most likely in one shots interspersed through out the time line. And I will return to the funny at some point. Please Comment and thanks to all who have read and enjoyed!!!

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“What’s goin’ on?”

Inara and Simon turned to Kaylee as she poked her head out of the sliding door. She was still sleepy, but the concern in her voice jolted them.

Simon walked over and kissed her forehead.

“Nothing, bao bei. I should go check on River.”

Before Kaylee could protest Simon headed up to Inara’s shuttle. Kaylee then turned to Inara.

“It’s just Mal....being Mal.”

“He hit Simon?”

Inara smiled at Kaylee and shook her head, “He tried, Simon ducked.”

“Really?”

“I’m not surprised. The man tends to hit first and ruminate later.”

Kaylee tilted her head.

“Ain’t what I’m surprised about.”

This elicited a chuckle from both of them.

Inara set down "River's" bucket and took Kaylee's hands in her own.

"Are you happy?"

Kaylee just beamed at Inara.

"Oh ‘Nara. We're gettin' married."

Inara pulled her into an embrace, happy for her friend but worried all the same. At least she thought Mal may be better receptive to the idea of Kaylee being pregnant if Simon married her.

" A baby is something to be cherished, mei mei. You have many blessings now."

Inara held Kaylee a little closer, a small twinge of jealousy creeping into her heart for the life she thought she never wanted.

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Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 19:36
Ack... the end? I can't wait for more from this end of the verse.

Thanks for the effort, and for combating the writers block so effectively.

-goblueguy
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 19:42
Lovely work lady! Anxious to see whatcha gonna do with Malnara and can't wait to see the wedding. Fav line.....
As he took off he whispered encouragingly to himself,” My ship. I’m the captain.”
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 21:01
ooooh, finally! Keep at it, ok? Even if it's with some time between them, I just love this series :D

And yeh I know how bad a writers block can be, I just hope this new idea I have will fix my own...
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 21:46
the ending made me snort milk up my nose. it was so in character, typical mal reaction to anything. "huh?"

b
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 21:52
Gotta give props to the ending to Gypsylife! And it makes me so happy to see all the familiar names posting comments, thanks for sticking with me. I feel some more stories coming on!
Thursday, 12 January 2006 02:39
Good read ..kinda got mushy there with a great Mal "huh" at the end of it....
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 January 2006 06:32
Excellent series. You did a very good job writing Mal, and drunk-River was a hoot. I hope we get to see a few more glimpses into this verse. I was looking forward to seeing River acting out on her crush.
Thursday, 12 January 2006 19:12
Don't worry about River, she'll meet up with her boy soon, and hey mphillips, I said I was a big mushy puff at the beginning of the story! I am working on a new little story right now so hopefully I can post it soon! Thank all for commenting!!!!!
Thursday, 12 January 2006 19:12
That was Thanks up there I am the queen of Typos!
JESSCLIFTON
Friday, 20 January 2006 02:08
I love this series! Keep up the good work :)
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 19:22
Too cute for words. Simply lovely
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 12:05
*"I never want to come here again," Zoe whispered to Mal, wrinkling her nose*

Shudder. Ick on the smell of many large chickens in a confined space. I'm with Zoe.

*As he took off he whispered encouragingly to himself,” My ship. I’m the captain.”*

Poor Mal, people are always doing things to circumvent his command, he can never catch a break.

Wonderful conclusion to the story, can't wait to start another one (and I don't have to).

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