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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-Two

Tuesday, January 10, 2006

Reuninted. And it feels so good.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty Two

RESCUE PARTY -45:20

“We’ll break for ten,” Zoe called out, holding up a hand to stop the mule. Ever since they had left the forward sections of the ship, where everything worked, she had insisted on taking point, leaving the commandos to guard the flanks and rear. “This was the second-to-last position the Gamma Team reported from,” she noted as she unslung her Dragon. “Keep a sharp eye out for anything suspicious. Anything that might give us a clue.”

“Like corpses,” added Jayne, sounding authoritative, as he brought the mule to a stop. “Corpses’d be a dead giveaway.” It took him a moment to realize that he had inadvertently made a joke. When he did, he doubled over in laughter. No one else did.

“And to think I gave up the chance to ride on the mule with him,” Simon muttered to Campbell as he caught up.

“Where the hell are we, anyway?” Jayne asked. “Looks like a gorram snack bar! They got snack bars on warships?”

“Folks gotta snack,” River pointed out. She took a chocolate bar out of her bag to prove the point.

“Folks gotta pee, too,” Zoe said. “Campbell, can you keep an eye out while I squat?”

“Consider it done,” he said with an elegant bow. With a motion he dispatched two commandos to cover the intersection. They nodded and loped off, guns ready.

“It’s the Deck Eight Canteen,” Simon said. “You can tell by the big square thing over the bar that says ‘Deck Eight Canteen’. It’s a dead giveaway.”

“Ain’t you all . . . um . . . educated,” Jayne said without humor.

“This should lead us to the last place they reported in from, which was the Reserve Infantry unit. That should be up ahead a ways,” Campbell noted, as he scanned the fleximap he brought along. He gave River a casual glance. “Any idea what’s ahead, my dear?” he asked quietly.

“The frozen dead,” she replied airily. “Sleeping corpses.”

“Anything else?”

River closed her eyes and just listened for a while. Campbell continued to watch her long after the pause wou

Comments
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 17:34
Sorry for the long hiatus. The holidays and work have conspired -- and I'm working on a new original book concept (potential agents take heed!) I've also wanted to plot the end of this thing right, or it will come off sounding lame. Thanks for your patience -- the next one will come soon.

Hope everyone has had a happy new year!

Screw the Alliance
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 17:50
"pissed off like a Reaver at a salad bar."

Oh my god, that is a great analogy. Well played.
GGCRONO
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 18:07
Hoping your holiday was likewise enjoyable, Mr. theAlliance. :)

Good chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 18:17
Oh good. New chapter and everyone's back together (almost) and they're off to do in the bad guys. Just about perfect. Perfection of course would be the next chapter! :0).

Thankyou for giving us your stories
Salamander
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 18:20
Welcome back, StA! A fine prezzie you've brought with you, too. Thanks!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 19:36
Yay! Welcome back and thanks for the awesome chapter! Writing gets better and better than the awesomeness it started with and the situation worse for our heroes! Good combination!
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 19:37
Oh yeah, now you're cranking up the volume on the crazy control. Love the notion of going in to "get us our Preacher back". I'm hoping they send them to one of Book's Special Hells. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 21:52
Groovy. The fun stuff returns. And what fun it is!

Hope the next one doesn't take so long to arrive ;)
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 23:42
Johnny's a goner. I'm sure Nyan Nyan will make a fine empress.



Wednesday, 11 January 2006 00:23
The wait was agonizing - and then I read it too fast!
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 01:22
Yeah for more and gettin the peacher back!
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 09:52
Brilliant!
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 18:35
"skywalker"
i'm sensing a lucas influence here...
“Y’all just keep tellin’ me who to kill.”
and there's the minear effect...
don't wait so long next time!!!! and good luck with your book!!!!

b
WINGONTHEWIND
Friday, 13 January 2006 09:31
*Sighs and stretches contentedly* I swear, it's like an addiction. Just keep waiting anxiously till my next fix. At least each fix is really, really good.

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