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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - Chapter 18a

Sunday, January 8, 2006

More will be added to this chapter, but I wanted to post this while I had the opportunity. On with the caper!

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Everyone was waitin’ fer the job that night, so there wasn’t much ta do. Kaylee an’ Jayne sat in the little room off the kitchen most of the day. They changed position every once in a while. Mostly they were just… tagether.

The crew, ‘ceptin the doc, were pretty acceptin’ ‘a the stuff goin’ on between Jayne an’ little Kaylee. Nobody really said much, ‘cept Inara, who only said she was glad they was happy.

Jayne was happy. He liked ta think Kaylee was, too. He’d thought about holdin’ Kaylee, kissin’ her, playin’ with her hair, all that, fer so long he kept expectin’ ta wake up. He was in a haze—on a high a thousand times better thn’ kosu weed. Kaylee. Kaylee weed.

Gorram, he was happy. Felt off ta be so happy. But for Kaylee… he’d allow it.

She had her head in his lap. Her eyes were closed. Jayne thought she might’ve fallen asleep until she sighed.

“I oughta be doin’ somethin’.”

He brushed her hair off her forehead. “Ship ain’t runnin’. What do you reckon you’ve got ta do?”

She sighed. “I dunno. Somethin’. Don’t feel right ta be just sittin’ here bein’ all happy an’ warm with you. I feel like Mal’s gonna come in here an’ yell at us.”

She opened her eyes. “Not that I’m complainin’.” She smiled.

Jayne put his hand along her jaw an’ traced her lips with his thumb. Strange, how he couldn’t help touchin’ her.

“Yer ruinin’ my reputation, Little Kaylee.”

“You have a reputation?”

“’Course I do. I’m a womanizin’ hard-assed mercenary. I ain’t supposed ta cuddle.”

She sat up. Jayne could see she was holdin’ back a laugh. She got up an’ dusted her lap off. “Maybe I can see if Inara’s busy.”

Jayne growled an reached out fer her. He grabbed her around the waist an’ pulled her onta his lap. He jabbed her in the ribs, makin’ her squirm an’ laugh like anythin’.

Someone cleared their throat. Jayne stopped ticklin’ Kaylee an’ looked up.

Mal was standin’ with his arms crossed. “Hate to interrupt, but I believe we got a caper to pull off.”

Kaylee sat u

Comments
Sunday, 08 January 2006 20:21
yay!!! i love it when you update so fast...

b

p.s. there are not enough "awwww's" in the 'verse to describe the image of jayne and kaylee all cuddled up...
Sunday, 08 January 2006 20:39
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ADORABLE! I could eat them up.
Sunday, 08 January 2006 20:57
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Shiny!

I love how you write Jayne and Kaylee together!

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Bless 'em! This is turning into such a sweet story.

Keep going, beautifool!!
Sunday, 08 January 2006 21:23
Ooh, just the right about of Belladonna sounds like! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 January 2006 23:59
Heh. I love the conversation between the girls and Zoe. Very characteristic of her to be patient with them, while trying to keep them focused on the task at hand. Hee
Monday, 09 January 2006 01:39
::clears throat::

I have an announcment.

I love beautifool! She is the Jaylee guru.

That is all.
Monday, 09 January 2006 11:54
Love the update. So sweet, Kaylee and Jayne.
i love Stella and Marie's appreciation of the gun!
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 14:41
I loved the conversation with Marie and Stella. Hi-larious, in a very "who's on first?" way. Those two crack me up.
And, yeah, where is Kaylee?
18b - STAT!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 05:19
i love the stroy so far please write more i love kaylee and jayne story
GARYTHEFISH
Monday, 23 January 2006 22:17
*taps foot impatiently*

Well?!?
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 02:53
Okay, so I was "Yay, part 18b is updated!" and then I was all "Huh, what? What happened to 18a?!??!?"

And so I found this.

And giggled muchly.

How adorable are Stella and Marie? I love them to pieces.

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