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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - mini update

Tuesday, December 20, 2005

it's just a little fluffy update, but it was so darn cute i just had to share.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2195    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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She was so beautiful when she slept. She was beautiful all the time. Still beautiful when she slept.

Kaylee was curled up on ‘er side, her back ta Jayne’s gun rack. Jayne was on his side, facin’ her. He hadn’t slept. They’d stayed up until the little hours—not doin’ anythin’, really, ‘cept talkin’ an’ kissin’. Jayne reckoned he’d really been missin’ out on all that kissin’ over the years an’ Kaylee seemed real happy ta oblige.

Kaylee eventually fell asleep. Jayne tried, but he kept openin’ his eyes every five minutes ta look at ‘er. Gave up, eventually.

Her eyelids flickered. She smiled.

“You watchin’ me sleep?”

Jayne smiled. “No.”

She opened her eyes. “Liar.”

She stretched her arms over her head like a cat. Kinda took Jayne’s breath away.

She scooted toward ‘im. He opened his arms for ‘er an’ she slipped right between ‘em ta cuddle up against ‘is chest.

She let out a little sigh. “I missed you.”

Jayne closed ‘is eyes an’ rested his chin on top of her head. “Mm?”

“While I was sleepin’.” She slipped ‘er arm around his waist an’ slid her hand up his shirt in the back. Slid her hand along his spine. “Kept dreamin’ about you, but it wasn’t good enough.”

Jayne smiled again. Kaylee pulled away a little ta look up at ‘im. He opened his eyes.

She was smilin’. He tipped his head down’ an’ kissed ‘er, real soft. Funny, how it still made his heart jump like the first time.

She made a happy little noise an’ smiled at ‘im again when he pulled away.

Jayne rolled onta his back, pullin’ Kaylee with ‘im. She was so little against ‘im. Hardly seemed ta weigh anythin’. She sighed again an’ put her head in the curve of his neck.

“This is nice.”

Jayne slid his hand up an’ down her back an’ closed his eyes again. He was sleepy now. Happy-sleepy. Well-fed-puppy-sleepy. “Glad you think so.”

She was quiet, just layin’ there against ‘im. Felt real comfortable ta have her there. Felt… right.

Jayne started driftin’ off ta sleep.

“Jayne?”

“Mm?”

K

Comments
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 18:05
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Lovely!!

I really enjoy this sort of soppy romantic fluff. I think I like it better than the explicit sexy stuff. Thanks, beautifool!

Bless!! Kaylee and Jayne are so cute together.

Jayne & Kaylee, sittin' in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!! Squeeeee!!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 21:58
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

what a wonderful middle of the workday soft and squishy-ness! Cheered me right up. I love just.... SO MUCH. I can't even say.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 22:45
Yeah, I agree-- it's the way you describe the little things that really makes this story awesome. I really like this type of fluff much better than sex scenes. I mean, they can't have raucous sex all the time. Sometimes they chat and they sleep, like regular people. Much lurve = )
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 01:36
Awww, they're twitter-pated!

::pets the sweet::
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 08:41
Sleepy-puppy Jayne is so cute and cuddly.
*grabs pen, writes* Dear Santa...
Thursday, 22 December 2005 06:01
Cute & cuddly, just right for today.
Friday, 23 December 2005 22:58
“I think I have a crush on you.”

join the club girlie, we got jackets...

b
WELSHY
Friday, 30 December 2005 01:25
AAAWWW so sweet

I'm really enjoying this story, I hope there's going to be more soon
Sunday, 12 February 2006 05:40
There are jackets? I have a crush on Jayne JACKETS!?!
No one ever tells me these things.
Why does no one ever tell me these things?


The fluff was first rate. Nice job!

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