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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - Chapter 17

Friday, January 6, 2006

(formerly known as chapter 16. Thanks, humbug for pointing it out!) (Sorry for the awful delay. More soon to come!) Jaylee stuff. Jayne and Kaylee emerge from the bunk of love. River outs Jayne and explains things.

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Jayne wrinkled his nose. Lifted up a hand ta bat at whatever it was that was ticklin’ it.

His hand hit somethin’ soft. He closed his fingers around it and opened his eyes.

“Whatcha doin’ that fer?”

Kaylee’s head was tipped ta the side. She wiggled her fingers that was all wrapped up in Jayne’s hand. “I’m hungry.”

Jayne stretched and rolled onta his side, pullin’ Kaylee against ‘im so their bodies fit perfect together, her back ta his front. He tightened his arm around her waist an’ closed his eyes again. “No ya ain’t.”

She laughed and squirmed in a way that made Jayne near see stars. “It ain’t my fault you didn’t sleep last night.”

Jayne sighed an’ slipped his hand under her shirt. Trailed his fingers real light across the scar in her belly. “The hell it ain’t.”

Kaylee slipped her hand over his. “I didn’t force ya ta stay awake an’ watch me… all creepy-like.”

Jayne could hear the smile in her voice. He smiled back eventhough she couldn’t see. “Guess it’s yer mama’s fault fer makin’ ya so pretty.”

Kaylee shifted an’ rolled onta her back. Jayne opened his eyes an lifted up on his elbow so he could look down at ‘er.

She was still smilin’. Jayne liked makin’ her smile.

She reached up with one hand an’ touched his cheek. Slid her fingers down his jaw.

She slid her fingers behind his neck an’ pulled him down, leanin’ up ta meet him halfway. She kissed ‘im again. Sucked his lower lip between her teeth in that way that made him go all funny inside.

He slid his hand down her side an’ grabbed her hip. He couldn’t help but scowl when she pulled away.

“I’m hungry.”

Jayne sighed and rolled back onto his back. He stretched again. Kaylee was watchin’ him.

She slid her hand up his shirt an’ leaned over ta kiss his ear. “So swai.”

“Mm.” Jayne pulled her back on top of him. “Swai enough ta get that fool idea about eatin’ outa yer head?”

Kaylee giggled. “A girl can’t live off Jayne alone.”

Jayne raised his eyebrows. “Won’t know ‘til you’ve tried.”

Comments
Friday, 06 January 2006 23:25
he loves her!!!! and he wants soup!!!!

b

p.s. yes, that WAS an awful delay!!!
Friday, 06 January 2006 23:35
I think I can forgive you that delay, if this is the result we get.

Mmmm. Good fic.
Friday, 06 January 2006 23:40
What a long wait!!!!

But *sigh* it was worth it!!

He loves her......

Jayne n Kaylee on Serenity,
K-I-S-S-I-N-G.......
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 00:32
Heh. Soup and love. Love Soup.
Saturday, 07 January 2006 01:29
So, wife soup? Enjoying the way the tale unfolds. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 07 January 2006 04:47
Aww, the wait was awful, but what a chapter! Jayne loves! YAY!

I love your River. Crazy, but lucid (if that's even possible)

So when do we get to go on a caper and get the loot from Mr. Pink?
Saturday, 07 January 2006 07:26
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Saturday, 07 January 2006 11:53
It was worth waiting for. There are so many good lines, I love River telling Simon not to be selfish. He loves her! Yay!
Saturday, 07 January 2006 13:18
“Come on. Let’s go look at my brain.”
*snorts* I love that line. River is so funny.

(tongue/cheek)Jayne loves Kaylee. Wow, what a surprise. You know, I didn't see that one coming. ;P
Now, if only Kaylee would admit she loves him back. How would that happen? Oh, I know. Another chapter...
Sunday, 12 February 2006 05:50
“Come on. Let’s go look at my brain.” She smiled at him like it was some kinda treat an’ pulled him out the door.
I laughed so hard.
I just love you your River is always tending to her big brother, even though he is often so much work.

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