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Bed and Wine: Part 5

Wednesday, January 4, 2006

Mal and Inara pretend to be newylweds for a job on Shadow. When Mommy and Daddy are away, the kids tend to play....Serenity *spoilers.*

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Bed and Wine: Part 5

By Kaynara

Mal and Inara pretend to be married for a job on Shadow. When Mommy and Daddy are away, the kids tend to play....Serenity *spoilers.*

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Inara stood before the mirror in just her slip. With delicate hands, she lifted the long, mint-green gown from the bed, held it against her body like an old friend. Though no longer a companion, she had a weakness for pretty things. Especially pretty, silken things that clung to her curves, fluted out at the hip and fell down to brush her ankles. She stepped into the skirts, bringing the straps up to tie behind her neck. She dabbed cologne at her throat, slipped her arms into a gold brocaded jacket.

“Oh, this is so much better than sweatshirts,” she murmured to her reflection. Heedful of wrinkles, she sat gingerly on the edge of the bed, began to check the contents of her purse.

“Ching jin,” she called when she heard the knock. “Hey, you.”

She smiled warmly, patted the bed for Kaylee to sit.

“Oh, Nara.” Kaylee whistled, stroking a hand down Inara’s full skirt. “You’re pure evil. Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.”

“Kaylee!”

“I’m just teasin’.” She lifted the pendant at Inara’s throat, stroked the ruby tear drop between her fingers. “Where’d you get this bit o’ shiny?”

“I--it doesn’t really go with the dress.” Inara unclasped the necklace, let it fall into her palm. “Anyway, you shouldn’t poke fun at the poor Captain. Not when he bought you such a lovely present.”

“The Cap’n don’t give presents,” Kaylee said, eyes narrowed.

“He bought one for you. Only he doesn’t know it yet.” Inara smiled, handed Kaylee a bundle wrapped in tissue paper. “Well? Go on, open it.”

“Nara....” Kaylee peeled away the paper, lifted a simple white sundress in eyelet lace.

“Do you like it?” Inara led Kaylee to the mirror, held the spaghetti straps even with her shoulders. “I know you prefer pink, but this one caught my eye.”

“Oh, Inara.” She pressed the rich fabric against herself.

“Now yo

Comments
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 04:32
Damn. At this rate, Mal's going to have to shoot his entire crew, just for bein' all kinds of crazy.

But this: "a mouth that didn’t hesitate to flap its opinions" was priceless. I love it when folks do description in Jayne's voice. He's just so straight-forward, and often has a hilarious turn of phrase. Kudos.


Wednesday, 04 January 2006 05:17
Really good. I am completly hooked on this series.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 05:34
Awwwwwww!!!! Simon and Kaylee got HITCHED!!!! :D *LOVE*!!!! Oh and poor consudes preacher... lol
~ misskitten
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 05:35
confused* (The room I'm in is a mite too dark... lol)
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 06:21
Simon and Kaylee...omigod, that wedding scene was beautiful, I actually got all teary. And I loved River and Wash's little conversation at the end, that was a great way to end the chapter. I'm so psyched, I can't wait for chapter 6! :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 07:16
Loved Simon and Kaylee's wedding, very sweet. And I love Inara being all criminal minded! Can't wait for your next post!:)-Leighkohl-too lazy to sign in!
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 09:07
Oh, WOW! Who in the frog humping verse is 'Trevor'? He can ruin every thing! Man oh man they are so humped! PLEASE, write more i am not sure i can take the suspence... Its killing me.
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 09:55
Loved Kaylee and Simon's sudden wedding, that dress really did push Simon the last inch in the right direction. Laughed and laughed at Jayne and Caroline, oh yeah, can't wait to see Mal's reaction as and when that little bomb is dropped. Then there's criminal mastermind Inara doing so very well right up until that figure from her past turns up. I'm with OldSoul1987 - who in the nine hells is Trevour? And will he turn out to be friend or foe? - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 16:13
Oh...my

Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.

And that advice applies to Simon and Jayne as well. Aiya, they are in for it *grin* Loved those two parts. A wedding *sigh*...despite the fact that was like WHAM wedding

This chapter was hi-larious. Poor 'Nara with Mal's constant nicknames (candy corn? yeah, i'd be ready to smack him as well), and him claiming she saved herself...
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 18:38
I can't wait to find out who Trevor is! Cliff-hanger, eek!

The constant teasing on Mal's side is hilarious, especially since it's obvious he's not really that arrogant, see Zoe's punch, hehe.
Inara certainly takes to crime!

Kaylee and Simon is almost too sweet to be true.

River and Wash chatting, break my heart again!


A lovely part! I hope the next one comes soon!
GOODDUCK
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 21:09
I could be mistaken, but I think Trevor is the guy who covered for Inara when she killed the client who tried to rape her - as described in an earlier chapter of this fic that now consumes so much of my waking thought.

Very funny/sweet chapter. The interaction between Mal and Inara is so utterly precious. I briefly thought that Inara might consider trying to endear herself to the counselor. With such an ostensibly boorish husband, it might be plausible to the counselor and a great way to get info from him. Of course, it would be out of character for Mal to allow it...I think.(?)

Looking forward to more!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 01:13
I think you could see a lot of mileage from a plot line that saw River convincing Gideon to "misinterpret" orders to benefit Serenity and her crew. Plenty of missed connections, lots of drama.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 01:29
Alicia and Dev -- if you got that where I think you got that you have excellent taste in movies in addition to being an amazing writer. And if you didn't, I'm a dork, but you're still an amazing writer. Can't wait for the next part!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 04:21
Hey,

You guys are good! You got the Alicia and Dev reference--and you remembered Trevor! I heart Browncoats.

~Kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 04:24
Ahh cannot wait for more! Such a great chapter! Loved all the stuff going on back on Serenity.....and yay for simon and kaylee getting married!!!

“Mal,” she whispered. “Watch your back.”

“I would. ‘Cept I can’t seem to quit watchin’ yours.”

LOVED that exchange!! Can't wait to see more flirty Mal and Inara....although I'm sure Trevor will have some role to play....
Thursday, 05 January 2006 05:09
I’ve commented anonymously on this series several times because it’s just so gorram good! But you’ve actually made me want to shed (relative) anonymity to make a few more comments (only the second time I’ve ever actually logged in!).

First, your Kaylee is sooo good. Best line: “Oh, Nara.” Kaylee whistled, stroking a hand down Inara’s full skirt. “You’re pure evil. Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.” Isn’t that just like Kaylee, being so concerned about the Captain’s welfare!

Plot inspirations? We’ll you’ve already got them!
1. Trevor. When you first introduced him, he was obviously older, but your description makes him seem not that old! Could he be the reason Inara left Sihnon or is he just connected to it? Why DID she meet him in a blackout zone?? And oh the complications this will cause!
2. I’m thinkin’ that Inara is going to get her first driving lesson under less than desirable circumstances. Like a hail of gunfire or Mal bleeding all over the place on account of a hail of gunfire….
3. Hasn’t the crew of a certain Firefly-class ship learned that they shouldn’t go out walking alone…
at night…
on a planet with an increasing Alliance presence…
especially when their name is Jayne!
4. Glad Wash is back and is keeping River company. Will they all meet up on Shadow during some clandestine situation?? I too like the idea of her manipulating Gideon to get there.
5. Will Jayne realize he’s just a big sweetheart and that relationships could be good for him? Or is he still thinking about a certain young psychic?

Keep writing, I'm addicted!
Thursday, 05 January 2006 06:52
Wow, this fic is so gorram good!!
I just love every plot line you have with all the characters.
How funny is Jayne sleeping with Mal's sister?
Or the fact that Kaylee and Simon are married?
I love everyone's interaction with Raven(the coolest name BTW!).
It's also theraputic for me to have River talking with Wash. I loved him somthin' fierce.
Can't wait for more.
Please update soon.
JOY
Thursday, 05 January 2006 08:11
you;ve done a brilliant job! my boyfriend even allowed me to read him part- loved the automobile scene the best!

Squish is right - Serenity crew know better than to go off alone - though it always seems that no one thinks quite clearly after "zeal" that "burns calories" plus he's going to have to figure out how to handle Mal and Caroline. it won't work out, but killing her off (in the story, not jayne) would be more than Mal could take, so i'm no help here.

Who will the new Tam couple share the news with first? Kaylee of course would insist on making a huge announcement about it when everyone's finally gathered, that is if some flaw in Mal's "perfect plan" doesn't have them all in action before she gets the chance, but Inara would be the first on her list to tell. Mal would have wanted to give her away, should've.

Zoe is a good mama, but can Raven's first word be for her daddy?

River and Giddeon - too much alike for a pairing - more of a soldiers' pact friendship. Can he really be good in the end?

As for Mal and Inara, well. . . you know how i feel about THEM, and I'll swear never to read again if you let Trevor mess things up for Mal. Trevor started out as a platonic friend, if i'm not mistaken, though the "leak witness" maid is a problem. Perhaps he'll be good help for the job.

Not to throw you into a completely different tangent, but what about Book. Of all people, he would be a proper spiritual guide, and there is so much about his past that still goes unanswered.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 06 January 2006 01:00
You're doing a fine job, Kaynara. I can't wait for more Mal/Inara fun. And Simon and Kaylee's wedding vows were perfect.- As your medic, I think you might need your head examined. But as your soon-to-be husband...well, I’m just honored.
Friday, 06 January 2006 19:21
okay, it's official. i am reading WAY too many fics. i couldn't remember who trevor was...*hangs head in shame*

b
Saturday, 07 January 2006 00:35
OMG. I think I've consumed this series in a matter of hours, forgoing ALL the tons and tons of homework I have to do and staying up to all hours of the night to read it.

I'm completely and utterly hooked and in love. Your dialogue flows seemlessly. I can't even tell you the number of times I snorted or choked while reading this. I have a roomie, you know. She probably thinks I've gone completely insane.

All your pairings are fun to read - even Kaylee/Simon, which I've never really appreciated before. I love how you've written them. Kaylee, so happy and cheery and in love. Simon, letting himself love her even when River's off battling Reavers. They're really, really beautiful.

Your Mal/Inara is perfect. Complicated and messy and angsty and they're both so completely in love with each other that it's painful. Even though they've gotten together and then not gotten together and then gotten together again - you've got more tension between them then when they were dancing around each other on the show. Poor w00bies.

[Mal grinned at their host, lowered his voice to a conspiring whisper. “She’s just a little eager. Been savin’ herself for me.”

Inara nearly choked on her champagne.]

Oh. Man. That just killed me.

All your characterizations have been great (self-destructive Mal... whew), but your handling of Inara is some of the best I've seen. The way she's trapped between two lives. The blending of her Companioness and her new life of crime. Her feelings killing someone. Her feelings for Mal. It's all so real and intense and I just FEEL for her. Well done.

This story is so, so, so very awesome. Thanks so much for writing it and filling the Mal/Inara, Firefly shaped hole in my heart.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 06:06
Okay I was PISSIN' my pants at the hilarious. You got these charcters pinned, let me tell ya.
And Inara sure is a little theif herself ain't she?? It's destined I think!! hehe...LOVE that Kaylee and Simon got married! And RIP Jayne..you're gonna be deadified for sure.
Can't wait for more!
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SERENITYCREWELLY
Saturday, 07 January 2006 06:08
Heh...that was me again~~^ forgots to log in.
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