Bed and Wine: Part 5
By Kaynara
Mal and Inara pretend to be married for a job on Shadow. When Mommy and Daddy are away, the kids tend to play....Serenity *spoilers.*
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Inara stood before the mirror in just her slip. With delicate hands, she lifted the long, mint-green gown from the bed, held it against her body like an old friend. Though no longer a companion, she had a weakness for pretty things. Especially pretty, silken things that clung to her curves, fluted out at the hip and fell down to brush her ankles. She stepped into the skirts, bringing the straps up to tie behind her neck. She dabbed cologne at her throat, slipped her arms into a gold brocaded jacket.
“Oh, this is so much better than sweatshirts,” she murmured to her reflection. Heedful of wrinkles, she sat gingerly on the edge of the bed, began to check the contents of her purse.
“Ching jin,” she called when she heard the knock. “Hey, you.”
She smiled warmly, patted the bed for Kaylee to sit.
“Oh, Nara.” Kaylee whistled, stroking a hand down Inara’s full skirt. “You’re pure evil. Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.”
“Kaylee!”
“I’m just teasin’.” She lifted the pendant at Inara’s throat, stroked the ruby tear drop between her fingers. “Where’d you get this bit o’ shiny?”
“I--it doesn’t really go with the dress.” Inara unclasped the necklace, let it fall into her palm. “Anyway, you shouldn’t poke fun at the poor Captain. Not when he bought you such a lovely present.”
“The Cap’n don’t give presents,” Kaylee said, eyes narrowed.
“He bought one for you. Only he doesn’t know it yet.” Inara smiled, handed Kaylee a bundle wrapped in tissue paper. “Well? Go on, open it.”
“Nara....” Kaylee peeled away the paper, lifted a simple white sundress in eyelet lace.
“Do you like it?” Inara led Kaylee to the mirror, held the spaghetti straps even with her shoulders. “I know you prefer pink, but this one caught my eye.”
“Oh, Inara.” She pressed the rich fabric against herself.
“Now yo
But this: "a mouth that didn’t hesitate to flap its opinions" was priceless. I love it when folks do description in Jayne's voice. He's just so straight-forward, and often has a hilarious turn of phrase. Kudos.
~ misskitten
You can't take the sky from me
Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.
And that advice applies to Simon and Jayne as well. Aiya, they are in for it *grin* Loved those two parts. A wedding *sigh*...despite the fact that was like WHAM wedding
This chapter was hi-larious. Poor 'Nara with Mal's constant nicknames (candy corn? yeah, i'd be ready to smack him as well), and him claiming she saved herself...
The constant teasing on Mal's side is hilarious, especially since it's obvious he's not really that arrogant, see Zoe's punch, hehe.
Inara certainly takes to crime!
Kaylee and Simon is almost too sweet to be true.
River and Wash chatting, break my heart again!
A lovely part! I hope the next one comes soon!
Very funny/sweet chapter. The interaction between Mal and Inara is so utterly precious. I briefly thought that Inara might consider trying to endear herself to the counselor. With such an ostensibly boorish husband, it might be plausible to the counselor and a great way to get info from him. Of course, it would be out of character for Mal to allow it...I think.(?)
Looking forward to more!
You guys are good! You got the Alicia and Dev reference--and you remembered Trevor! I heart Browncoats.
~Kaynara
“Mal,” she whispered. “Watch your back.”
“I would. ‘Cept I can’t seem to quit watchin’ yours.”
LOVED that exchange!! Can't wait to see more flirty Mal and Inara....although I'm sure Trevor will have some role to play....
First, your Kaylee is sooo good. Best line: “Oh, Nara.” Kaylee whistled, stroking a hand down Inara’s full skirt. “You’re pure evil. Cap’n’s gonna hafta sleep with an ice pack on his nethers.” Isn’t that just like Kaylee, being so concerned about the Captain’s welfare!
Plot inspirations? We’ll you’ve already got them!
1. Trevor. When you first introduced him, he was obviously older, but your description makes him seem not that old! Could he be the reason Inara left Sihnon or is he just connected to it? Why DID she meet him in a blackout zone?? And oh the complications this will cause!
2. I’m thinkin’ that Inara is going to get her first driving lesson under less than desirable circumstances. Like a hail of gunfire or Mal bleeding all over the place on account of a hail of gunfire….
3. Hasn’t the crew of a certain Firefly-class ship learned that they shouldn’t go out walking alone…
at night…
on a planet with an increasing Alliance presence…
especially when their name is Jayne!
4. Glad Wash is back and is keeping River company. Will they all meet up on Shadow during some clandestine situation?? I too like the idea of her manipulating Gideon to get there.
5. Will Jayne realize he’s just a big sweetheart and that relationships could be good for him? Or is he still thinking about a certain young psychic?
Keep writing, I'm addicted!
I just love every plot line you have with all the characters.
How funny is Jayne sleeping with Mal's sister?
Or the fact that Kaylee and Simon are married?
I love everyone's interaction with Raven(the coolest name BTW!).
It's also theraputic for me to have River talking with Wash. I loved him somthin' fierce.
Can't wait for more.
Please update soon.
Squish is right - Serenity crew know better than to go off alone - though it always seems that no one thinks quite clearly after "zeal" that "burns calories" plus he's going to have to figure out how to handle Mal and Caroline. it won't work out, but killing her off (in the story, not jayne) would be more than Mal could take, so i'm no help here.
Who will the new Tam couple share the news with first? Kaylee of course would insist on making a huge announcement about it when everyone's finally gathered, that is if some flaw in Mal's "perfect plan" doesn't have them all in action before she gets the chance, but Inara would be the first on her list to tell. Mal would have wanted to give her away, should've.
Zoe is a good mama, but can Raven's first word be for her daddy?
River and Giddeon - too much alike for a pairing - more of a soldiers' pact friendship. Can he really be good in the end?
As for Mal and Inara, well. . . you know how i feel about THEM, and I'll swear never to read again if you let Trevor mess things up for Mal. Trevor started out as a platonic friend, if i'm not mistaken, though the "leak witness" maid is a problem. Perhaps he'll be good help for the job.
Not to throw you into a completely different tangent, but what about Book. Of all people, he would be a proper spiritual guide, and there is so much about his past that still goes unanswered.
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I'm completely and utterly hooked and in love. Your dialogue flows seemlessly. I can't even tell you the number of times I snorted or choked while reading this. I have a roomie, you know. She probably thinks I've gone completely insane.
All your pairings are fun to read - even Kaylee/Simon, which I've never really appreciated before. I love how you've written them. Kaylee, so happy and cheery and in love. Simon, letting himself love her even when River's off battling Reavers. They're really, really beautiful.
Your Mal/Inara is perfect. Complicated and messy and angsty and they're both so completely in love with each other that it's painful. Even though they've gotten together and then not gotten together and then gotten together again - you've got more tension between them then when they were dancing around each other on the show. Poor w00bies.
[Mal grinned at their host, lowered his voice to a conspiring whisper. “She’s just a little eager. Been savin’ herself for me.”
Inara nearly choked on her champagne.]
Oh. Man. That just killed me.
All your characterizations have been great (self-destructive Mal... whew), but your handling of Inara is some of the best I've seen. The way she's trapped between two lives. The blending of her Companioness and her new life of crime. Her feelings killing someone. Her feelings for Mal. It's all so real and intense and I just FEEL for her. Well done.
This story is so, so, so very awesome. Thanks so much for writing it and filling the Mal/Inara, Firefly shaped hole in my heart.
And Inara sure is a little theif herself ain't she?? It's destined I think!! hehe...LOVE that Kaylee and Simon got married! And RIP Jayne..you're gonna be deadified for sure.
Can't wait for more!
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