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Bed and Wine: Part 4

Monday, January 2, 2006

Mal goes home to Shadow. A continuation of the Bedlam/Bedfellows series. Serenity *spoilers.*

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Bed and Wine: Part 4

By Kaynara

Mal goes home to Shadow. A continuation of the Bedlam/Bedfellows series. Serenity *spoilers.*

It’s Joss’s verse--I just borrow it.

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If there was one thing Mal Reynolds missed out here in the Black, it was waking up with the sunshine. Tomorrow, the bright rays would sneak through his sister’s lace curtains, spreading over the bedcloths till they reached his face, warming and wheedling, coaxing him into opening his eyes. Tomorrow, he’d see daylight when he blinked. Today he dressed in the dark, ran a comb through his hair and strolled down to his kitchen for coffee.

He came up short at the doorway, leaned against the frame watching her.

Inara wore one of Kaylee’s old sweatshirts, a soft worn gray with the sleeves cut out, and blue silk pajama pants that musta belonged to the doc. Her hair was long and loose, dark, riotous curls pouring down her back. She was feeding Raven from a bottle.

Mal posed in the doorjamb, careful not to make a sound.

She was talking in poetry, softly spoken words designed to soothe the fretting baby.

“Deep into the darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing

Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before”

Inara adjusted the bottle so the little chick could get a better grip. Mal watched the baby’s tiny fingers curl around Inara’s hand as her little lips sucked keenly at the milk.

“Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,

By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore”

Mal could see the child’s eyes, wide and blue--would they stay that shade or turn dark like Zoe’s?--so solemn and earnest, staring gratefully at the source of the nourishment.

“Lovely.” Inara smoothed the jet hair, soft as down. “You make him smile, you know. You give smiles to everyone on this ship.”

“Ahem.” Mal stepped into the kitchen. Inara jumped, startling the baby who whimpered once, found a more secure mouth-hold on the bottle and settled. “Mornin’.”

“Good morning,” Inara sai

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 04:39
LMAO at Mal and Jayne having to kiss :P
Monday, 02 January 2006 04:43
*lmao* ah the fic has turned into jayne/mal!
just kidding ;) loved the spin the bottle.

“Oh, I’m bettin’ she can get you up, Mal.”

God, I can hear Jayne saying that *lol*

Whoo! Go Zoe! Kick that captain's ass!

Still love Baby Raven, so very cute :-P

looking forward, as always to more
2X2
Monday, 02 January 2006 05:01
Oh, hooray for Zoe tryin' to knock some sense into that gorram Captain... Loved spin the bottle! I played Truth or Dare this New Year's Eve <g> so I have no problem believing this group could get up to Spin the Bottle... tee hee!! I like Mal's sis... askn' all sorts of uncomfortable questions, and offerin' up Pie in exchange for answers!!! Brilliant girl, but then, she's related to Mal, probably instrumental in much of his makeup bein' 11 years older'n him and all..
So happy to see this part posted,.. what better way to start the new year!!!
Will Mal resist Inara's wiles??? Can't wait to find out!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 05:11
Yay I loved this chapter!! Spin the bottle was great, loved Zoe's "chat" with the Captain, and aww loved hearing...err...seeing...Inara admit she loves Mal.

Raven is sooo cute and its so great to see Mal's soft side with her!! Can't wait for the next chapter....and no Mal certainly cannot resist Inara's feminine wiles!
AGEDRELIC
Monday, 02 January 2006 05:17
Love Jayne's behavior after fining himself in bed with Mal's sis. All obedient-like.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 05:39
This was excellent, as always!
Fav lines: "Who wants to hear a funny story about sick people?" I cracked up, good reference back to the series.
“Sir, you didn’t die at Serenity Valley. I’m tired of you actin’ like you did.” Finally someone tells the man this! Of course it would be Zoe.

And glad to see Jayne making his way into a compromising situation. Can't wait to see how the Captain handles that one!

GOODDUCK
Monday, 02 January 2006 06:14
I have been lurking on this sight for a few weeks, but registered just so I could post not-so-anonymously with my praise for this story. I love that you so steadily add to it - it is great to know that I can stop my work and turn to your story for laughs and suspense and generalized wonderfulness before bed.

Can't wait to find out whether Mal learns about Jayne and his sis - thinking he probably will.

Loved

“Mal and I are just friends,”

“Yeah, when they ain’t fightin’ or screwin’,” Jayne added helpfully.

As usual Jayne is dead on. Just excellent!
Monday, 02 January 2006 07:16
Again, great chapter! I love the fact that Mal and Jayne were actually drunk enough to consent to a kiss! You had me dying laughing with that one. Also, loved guiilty Jayne, and how Zoe intiated her little "chat" with Mal :) Please keep up the good work :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 07:20
Grreat job! Keep up the god work the stuff with jayne and mals sisiter was brillaint
Monday, 02 January 2006 09:06
YES! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU! PLEASE WRITE MORE!... thank you again!
AMELIAP
Monday, 02 January 2006 09:45
Great! Especially loved Jayne in this chapter- you capture the crew's voices perfectly
please write more...
Monday, 02 January 2006 10:49
Very fine story, so much to love in it and so much to cherish. I'm hoping that Mal's sister is as wonderful as she comes across, slightly worried with her having been married to an Alliance man. Wonder if that will come back to haunt them. It was shiny having Jim and Jem pop by and bring the party to Caroline's house and everything that followed was great. Loved Zoe doing her *tough love* bit with Mal, now wish she'd have a straight word or two with Inara. Like Inara said it takes two, let's get the two of them together! And Kaylee announcing to one and all that she and Simon had finally had sex in a real bed, I laughed so much I almost spilt my coffee. I also loved Mal with the baby and can't help wondering if it won't be giving Inara the hint she needs. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 January 2006 15:04
What with everyone holding a tiny squirming thing all over the place I had to go get my plushy guineacat that I got for Christmas, just to soothe the pet cravings.
The baby is entirely too compelling, hehe.

This was a really light-hearted part, complete with sophomoric party games, whee!

And Jayne! Lol! That man is so unsubtle, it's subtle again...


It looks like Simon is starting to pick up the rimworld slang! Maybe all these fighting lessons with Mal rubbed off in more ways than one. But he's still beautifully snarky. It makes me cheerful everytime.

Also: I love Zoe.

Mal in a "strange mood" is much fun to watch.

Now I'm looking forward to more of your lovely plot!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 15:33
Trust Zoe to set Mal stright, keep going.
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 02:38
I also loved the who wants to hear a funny story about sick people line, that really got me! Can't wait for your next post!:)
JOY
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 06:57
yay! more! please!
i'd hate to see Zoe go soft, i bet she's going nuts on the ship just waiting during a job.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 22:28
I like how you're keeping River in the reader's minds.
I'm even starting to like Gideon... Starting. Maybe if he took a bullet for River...
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 23:51
ooh!!! jayne/mal kiss!!! *happy thoughts*

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 January 2006 21:39
i really enjoy how you've drawn out the fact that mal was really injured, emotionally by the war. although the show and movie implied this, they did not have the time to flesh it out like you.

thanks so much for writing for all of us.

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