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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty-One

Thursday, December 29, 2005

The lighter side of torture.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty-One

35th TAU -48:40

The new “headquarters” was hardly worthy of the name. It made the cafeteria they had vacated seem spacious. But the White Tigers of the 34th had no problem making-do; the unit was famed for its adeptness with improvisation. The room was a largish space, part workshop, part office, for the maintenance of the cooling system array they were now within. All around them pipes hissed and steamed with excess heat from the huge reactor several decks overhead. It also shielded them from passive detection: both the complex network of cooling apparatus and the radiation shielding from the reactor kept sensors from penetrating this particular space.

The men had made their camp on the machine shop side of the room, while he took the office for his own. The prisoners they had scattered over three decks. This section had no end to odd little rooms built around the huge cylindrical reactor, and he knew better than to confine them all in one space. That’s how escapes happened.

His sergeant approached with a bow, followed by three new men. He wrinkled his brow – the sergeant was to have awakened more than thirty by now.

“Major!” the sergeant said as he was beckoned forward. “I have come to report an issue with the hibernation chamber. The capsules are refusing to open as directed. They have come online one at a time, and only one an hour. I left two of the men at the chamber, one to guard and one to assist in the revivification. These three are ready to claim their billets and report for duty.”

“Only one an hour? Explain this delay!”

“Sir! The capsules are ultimately controlled by the central computer. They seem to be responding to a program issuing from the computer, and cannot be overridden with local controls.”

“Unacceptable! At this rate it will take weeks to reawaken our comrades!”

“Sir! One of the men I left has some experience in these matters. He said he would try to determine the programmed cause and issue a bypass

Comments
GGCRONO
Thursday, 29 December 2005 23:51
What this chapter really needs is a "Bum bum BUMMMM" right at the end.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 00:04
woah. this just gets more and more exciting.
Friday, 30 December 2005 01:04
When I read the first line of the bounty hunter's section, I said out loud "Oh, stupid bloody people." But affectionately ;)

And as soon as that special, pivotal container was mentioned... well, let's just say I guessed right.


Yay!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 04:00
Welcome back! A long dry spell, so I read a little of Amodell's stuff. Not too bad. You two are the best I've seen so far.
Friday, 30 December 2005 11:16
"Whatever. You want a parade? First thing, I promise."

"I just wanna fulfill my obligation about the sword."

"Get off the gorram sword Mal! Hump the sword! I'm sick of hearing about it!"


I cheered at these lines.

I decided for this story it's worth detaching myself from my own understanding of Mal and Inara and just enjoying yours. The dialogues are just too sparkly and hilarious to miss!

Also: oooh, Shanyu himself! I bet he'll be a charming host.
Friday, 30 December 2005 15:13
"Standard Universal Safety Protocol mandates an easy manner of two-way access through non-pressure zone doorways."

Is the Sun Tzu perhaps ISO 9000 certified?



Friday, 30 December 2005 15:17
HOLY @%&*&%#@! I remember a pot of petunias quoted as thinking 'Oh no, not again.' and figure that something similar was going through Book's head. Most shineyness is this latest installment!!
Friday, 30 December 2005 16:04
Always with the cliff hangers....great as always awaiting more
Friday, 30 December 2005 18:29
First:
"Old men scare easily."
Ha! As if!

Then:
OMG!!! They're humped!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 31 December 2005 00:54
I've just finished reading this story, very long and well written. My only gripe is the way you portray Simon, he had enough nerve to steal River from the Feds but you still treat him as a whining fool.

Seems a shame.

Otherwise your work is freakishly brilliant. Look forward to further chaopters
WINGONTHEWIND
Saturday, 31 December 2005 05:25
Well, it just gets worse and worse. I forsee a stunning climax approaching!

P.S: When I say worse and worse, I mean the situation, not the writing >.<

-Winger-
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 20:29
*leaps away from screen screeching like a banshee* WO DE MA HE TA DE FENGKUANG DE WAISHENG DOU!!!!!!!!!! they are so gorram humped!!!

b
Sunday, 08 January 2006 03:02
Holy *ouch*.

I'm on the edge of my seat here. Good stuff.
Sunday, 08 January 2006 20:05
WAGH! Ok, the people in the library are now looking at me like I'm insane. I guess when you curse at a computer screen in complete shock and cliff-hanger-ed-ness, people tend to edge away.

Well done, LOVE the Heavenly Master, and of course adore Mal. Needs Jayne though. Add Jayne to taste.
Tuesday, 17 January 2006 02:43
ShanYu, Tyrant of Yuan.

Aaaaaaahh!!! Run away! Run away!

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