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Bed and Wine: Part 2

Monday, December 26, 2005

A continuation of the Bedlam series. Inara’s back on board, and Baby Raven’s keeping the crew up nights. As always, there’s sex and violence (not at the same time though). Serenity *spoilers.*

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5013    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Bed and Wine: Part 2

By Kaynara

A continuation of the Bedlam series. Inara’s back on board, and Baby Raven’s keeping the crew up nights. As always, there’s sex and violence (not at the same time). Serenity *spoilers.*

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They touched down after sunset, left the ship on a dusty stretch of desert and headed for town.

When they reached the main square, River tied her hair back and took up her axes. Gideon helped her adjust her belt, securing the guns there.

“Our sources say they landed three hours ago. Probably resting now. Full.”

“No.” River shaded her eyes from the last glares of red and gold, squinted across the common to the small, white church. There. That’s where they waited. “They never stop. Nothing satisfies the hunger.”

“One ship. Shouldn’t be more than ten.”

“And still they killed half the town.”

Gideon had to sprint to keep up with her now. She ran over the cobble-stoned road, tore open the church doors. He aimed his gun, watching from the corner of his eye as she attacked two with her axes. She took them down one after the other: a clean, slicing arc over the female’s neck, a fatal blow to the male’s chest. Gideon found himself unable to look away, mesmerized by her movements, so graceful as to be almost a dance. He didn’t see the one come at him from behind, sink teeth into his shoulder.

He screamed.

River turned, taking a glancing blow from a Reaver knife. She felt the blood drip down her arm, ignored the pain and put a bullet to the guilty party’s head. She leapt over two human bodies like a creature of flight, landed next to Gideon. She drew his attackers away, teased them as she inched closer, stepped just out of reach. She killed them both with their own swords, letting them fall together at her feet. Then she went back for Gideon, extended a hand.

He took her slender white fingers, let her pull him up.

“You’re hurt. Need a doctor.”

“I’ll be fine,” he said. He watched as she tore off a slice of her skirt, used the fabric to bandage his neck

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 06:31
Interasting, defently not your typical fanfic. Waiting to see how long before River rejoins the rest.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 07:15
Very well written; the scenes crackle - please continue.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 08:11
Poor Mal. He always gets the short end of the stick.

ManicGiraffe
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 08:13
Can't wait for more!
AMELIAP
Monday, 26 December 2005 09:45
Have just read all your fics in one night and I really love them. Your Mal is... hilarious, but still very much Mal.
Raven is just the perfect name for Wash and Zoe's child, by the way.
I'm sure you read it all the time, but I can't think of anything else to say: can't wait for more!
Monday, 26 December 2005 11:58
Awww - this is so sweet!
And Raven's a perfect name - and she seems so adorable!

Keep up the good work!
Monday, 26 December 2005 12:19
Loved this, and wasn't that sneaky of Zoe sending Inara down to Mal's bunk knowing the poor man was dead on his feet from lack of sleep? And then for Kaylee to put the wave from Caroline through without checking first... Seems his whole crew want to make it their life's work to make him uncomfortable. And River and Gideon and the Reavers? Woah, think our little Albatross needs to head for home. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 12:22
Cuuute :) But can you please give Simon and Kaylee some more focus? Not that the others aren't great, it's just they rarely get mentioned anymore...
2X2
Monday, 26 December 2005 15:31
Ahhh, there's gonna be all sorts of uncomfortableness when they get to Shadow, ain't there? And not just for Mal...

Such a stubborn man... I wonder how long he'll be able to hold out with temptation walking the same halls...

I love Mal with Raven, and Kaylee's remark about him being a pushover with a pretty girl.. tee hee!
Monday, 26 December 2005 15:47
Aww, Mal and Raven are so cute together! And River, wow, scary. Do continue quickly, please!
Monday, 26 December 2005 19:54
Ah the ladies are fighting over the baby. but like Zoe was thinkin, she's only cute when its not 3 am eh eh? (lol)

Highly doubt Mal and Inara can resist the temptation to fall back into their old patterns. mwhaha

Should be some fun with Mal's family meeting the crew.

and what the duece is going on with River...I've got chills thinking about what that girl could be up to

great chapter!
Monday, 26 December 2005 20:43
Oooh, excellent funny part!

The baby... adorable. I love seeing them all interact with it, and Mal's convesation at the end was the best. Let him pretend there's a girl that will side with him, before little Raven learns how to speak and contradict him, hehehe.

My favorite image, though, was the lush Shadow landscape you described, and the sensuality it lent to Mal's dream. Wet green life. That was a really clever and gorgeous way to carry the soft, unguarded, sexy mood of that sequence.

Poor Inara and her wardrobe, though. Ouch.

Can't wait to see more of Mal's half-sister and learning the family history!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 22:41
Yay! Another great chapter!! I LOVE that Zoe sent Inara down to Mal's bunk knowing full well he was taking a nap! lol

I love Mal with Raven...so cute!

Cant wait for the trip back to Shadow....should be interesting to see Inara meet Caroline!

Oh and I loved the part with Simon givingthe baby nocs, lol!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 26 December 2005 22:56
I loved it! Can't wait to read more :)
awww and Mal is sooo cute with the baby!

CCke
Monday, 26 December 2005 23:36
Great story. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what'll happen next. One little thing that I noticed though - Badger is definitely not Irish - not with that Cockney accent!! But I suppose he's not technically English either, as England and Ireland are both back on Earth That Was. Anyway it's a minor point but seeing as I'm Irish it jumped out at me. You've really got a talent for writing these characters, I look forward to reading the next installment.
Tuesday, 27 December 2005 00:07
Yeeeaaahh!!! I'm already ready for the next chapter! It's definetly going to be interesting when Caroline meets Inara! I love how you potray the characters, because they act exactly the same as they would on the show!! Mal is soo funny! Can't wait till the next installment!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 December 2005 05:45
I'm addicted I'm addicted!! *jumps in seat*
This is soooo awesome! I'm some what fairly new to the Serenity/Firefly fan base..thanks to my twinny sis and the heavens of DVD's...LOVE THIS!
Can't wait for more! Merry Belated Christmas!!
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SERENITYCREWELLY
Tuesday, 27 December 2005 05:45
why'd that last post come up anom?? well..that was me..serenitycrewelly up there~~~^
Tuesday, 27 December 2005 20:17
awwwww!!! mal with baba raven!!! *cute coma!*

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 21:52
EEEEEK! Love it all! ooooooo bad inara she just let him go at it in his sleep like that! and even felt him up some ha! but poor her she loves him and wants to be happy with him. and poor mal he just is trying not to have to take that last blow to his spirite, inaras death would crush him but being with out her but with her around at least gives him a chance. oh my goodness i love him with raven! i wish inara could have seen it all. ok well keep it up and i am sorry i have not been commenting on you story but have been reading i just had computer problems! SORRY! -OldSoul1987
Wednesday, 18 January 2006 19:09
Please hurry up with next installment, your loyal fans are waiting.

Keep it coming!
WINTERHART
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 03:18
Just seconding the words of our friend Anonymous up there, when they said "Interesting, definitely not your typical fanfic."
It's true...you're not writing fanfic, you're quite literally writing the show. And it's astonishing :)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 March 2006 03:10
Where was I when this was being written? I love it!
Friday, 29 September 2006 04:42
Any more coming??
WHELP
Thursday, 15 March 2007 04:41
“Wait, don’t tell me; I know this one.”

LOL

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