Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - Chapter 15

Monday, December 19, 2005

Mr. Pink gets a conveniently wrong idea. Just some background info for newcomers- Zoe and Jayne were the first to scope out Mr. Pink. They posed as a married couple, Rebecca and Zeek. When Simon met Mr. Pink, he told him that his name was Jayne. So. Simon = Jayne, Jayne = Zeek, Zoe = Rebecca. Comments appreciated!

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Jayne was taken up the stairs and down a hall where another of Pink’s goons was standin’ outside a door. He nodded an’ opened it as Jayne an’ his guards came up.

The goon who was holdin’ his arm pushed Jayne inta a chair. Jayne turned ta glare at ‘im.

The door opened again. Mr. Pink an’ the doc came in. Mr. Pink sat in the chair behind the desk. The doc looked around for another chair. There wasn’t one. So he stood.

Mr. Pink folded his hands carefully on the desk. “Someone is not being altogether truthful.”

The doc shifted. Jayne blinked.

Mr. Pink leaned toward Jayne. “Why are you really here?”

There were two guards standin’ inside the door. Reckoned there was two more standin’ outside. Mr. Pink didn’t look like he was too strong, but he might be able to put up a decent fight long enough fer the two guards ta get hold’ve Jayne. Mal didn’t let Jayne bring a gun, but he reckoned Mr. Pink kept one in that desk. Probably kept it locked, though.

Jayne shrugged. “I thought it was pretty obvious.”

Pink nodded. “Yes. It did appear to be so. You came looking for a good time. You remembered us from when you and your… wife… came through earlier. You saw the goods,” He looked over at Marie an’ Stella, “and you decided to come back. But what an interesting night to come back on.”

Wood desk. Probably had the drawer lined with somethin’, though, ta keep it from bein’ easy ta break into. But if he was sittin’ there, he probably had the drawer unlocked in case he needed ta get into it fast.

Maybe there was some sort of… catch er somethin’, instead’ve a lock.

“Seemed as good a night as any.”

“Perhaps. But I think that you came to keep an eye on someone.” Pink turned and looked at the doc.

The doc looked about as white as a sheet.

Zoe had ta be hearin’ this over the comm.

Pink turned back to Jayne. “Jayne here has a very distinctive horse. I’ve never seen anything like it. It’s very easy to pick out in a crowd, if you were to… say… ride by.”

Jayne’d seen

Comments
Monday, 19 December 2005 00:52
Ohhh, dear lord, I didn't think it was possible to be more hooked on this... but I am now.

And, also? HEEEEEEE. Jayne + Simon = luuuuuuurve.
Monday, 19 December 2005 03:16
That was the funniest thing I've read in ages!

How in the world anyone could think that Jayne was sly is beyond me. Mr Pink must be a ruttin' idiot.
Yay for Stella and Marie. They're fun and they have EXCEPTIONAL taste.

You also seem to be picking up the pace, does that mean we'll get another new chapter soon? Here's hopin'...
Monday, 19 December 2005 04:03
Oh GOD.

I think I might be dead. That was fantastic. Wondeful. Hilarious. Sweet. Everything that is good in the world is in this fic.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 December 2005 05:02
I picked up the pace because i have an evil case of Hideous Death-Bringing Acute Bronchitis and didn't have anything else I wanted to do. but the holidays, they are a'comin. I'm hoping to get this puppy done in the next little while.

And please don't die. Then i would be sad. Honest. There might be tears. ;)

-Beautifool (because I'm too lazy to sign in and hey i'm sick so i don't have to do what i don't want to. so bring it.)
GARYTHEFISH
Monday, 19 December 2005 05:42
Alls I have to say is that Stella and Marie had better live through this. None o' that noble pitching themselves in front of a bullet for nobody or nothing. Dong ma? :P
Monday, 19 December 2005 15:00
"Weren’t right ta see a grown man cry over another grown man. Especially when the grown man he was cryin’ over was the doc." Hi-larious! More, more...please?

Monday, 19 December 2005 21:38
::gigglesnort:: He thinks Jayne is. . .and crying. . .ok ok I have to stop and breathe.

::takes a deep beath:: Ok, That was great! I am so hooked.
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 11:22
can you say...I NEED THIS ON IV. STAT!!

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