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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - Chapter 14

Monday, December 19, 2005

Jayne recieves a warm welcome at the Pink Petal. Just some background info for newcomers- Zoe and Jayne were the first to scope out Mr. Pink. They posed as a married couple, Rebecca and Zeek. When Simon met Mr. Pink, he told him that his name was Jayne. Comments appreciated!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1881    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Weren’t no need ta feel guilty ‘bout findin’ a nice girl ta spend some time with. First off, the captain had told ‘im to. Second, Kaylee hadn’t actually staked her claim. Third, havin’ a woman stake her claim had never stopped Jayne from findin’ a nice, different girl ta spend some time with before.

‘Course, no one had really ever staked their claim in ‘im. And he ain’t ever staked nothin’ in nobody long term before.

Hazard of movin’ around too much, he reckoned. Certainly weren’t nothin’ wrong with ‘im.

The doc’s silly yella horse was tied up outside the main house, along with a couple dozen other horses. The noise comin’ out the door was even louder than it’d been when he’d come before. Lot’ve people in there. He’d have ta be real sure ta stay pretty close ta the doc in order ta make sure he was safe.

Not that he really cared, personally. Havin’ him taken hostage would sure make things a lot easier with Kaylee.

Why hadn’t Kaylee staked her claim?

He felt a hand slide along his back.

“You got an invite?”

The hand slid across his side. The girl attached ta it came around an’ looked up at him.

It was the dark-haired one. Marie.

“You!” She smiled. Looked genuinely glad ta see ‘im again. “Back for more?”

Jayne grinned. “Didn’t get much the first time.”

“Too true.” She peeked around him, then looked back up at ‘im through her lashes. “You alone?”

He shrugged. “Couldn’t get any real business done with the missus around, I reckon.”

She smiled. “I reckon.”

“Can’t come in if you ain’t got an invite.”

Jayne turned ta see who was talkin’. It was the red-haired one. Stella. She was standin’ in the doorway lookin’ at ‘im. He saw the smile spread real slow across her face. “Oh. Didn’t know it was you.”

Marie took Jayne’s hand an’ coaxed him up the steps ta the door where Stella was standin’. “Told ya he’d come back.”

Stella didn’t look away from ‘im as she answered. “I was hopin’ you were right.”

She circled around him like Marie had, trailin’

Comments
Monday, 19 December 2005 00:44
Oh, this keeps getting better and better! You like to keep us dangling.

Girls alone weren't enough to distract Jayne, but talkin' about Kaylee was. Hee.

Jayne and Simon being bitchy while trying not to be bitchy... nothin' but fun. Pure gold.

Also? Once, twice... *three* times a fic whore! My work here is done. I think I'm getting a bit of a fic-cing reputation.
Monday, 19 December 2005 03:09
Better, and better, and better, and...
Well, you get the idea.
I love that Jayne got all distracted thinkin' about Kaylee, and him saying her name out loud like that was precious. ;P
Onward to the next part.
GARYTHEFISH
Monday, 19 December 2005 05:36
Stella shrugged. “We read a lot’ve cheap romances. Not a whole lot ta do around here.”

Oh dear. Are there any other kinds of romance novels? This is priceless.
Monday, 19 December 2005 14:54
Love the romantics, Stella and Marie. This fiction just keeps getting better.
Monday, 19 December 2005 21:30
Ha, I'm one of Mr. Pink's girls ::giggles::

Ok now that that's done :) Love this. I love how Marie's obsessing on Jayne's size, he is just so. . .big.

Love it! Off to read the next one!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 11:17
"Or Bella."
*happy dance* i'm a pink girl!!! yay!!!

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