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Happy Felicitations

Sunday, December 18, 2005

Continuation of First-Confirmation. Simon/Kaylee, Questions are asked,but not everybody likes the answers.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3818    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me, just writing for fun.

OMG, this took me forever( took some inspration from Serenity novelization ). I wrote myself into a corner, but I think I’ve kicked the corner’s ass. There’s more to come. I hope to post soon and appreciate all the wonderful comments I have received. Please comment and Happy Holidays!!!!

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They had left the infirmary after determining the results of her pregnancy test. Kaylee led an emotionally worn out Simon back to their room. She had just slipped off her shoes and was about to undress when he turned her around to face him. This was usually a playful move on his part but tonight his eyes were filled with trepidation.

“Marry me.”

It was more of a statement than a question. Kaylee looked at him, stunned. Her mouth refused to answer.

“Kaylee, I just asked you to marry me.”

Kaylee glanced down at the floor and muttered, “I know.”

Simon was completely mystified.

“And?”

“Are ya askin’ ‘cause I’m gonna have a baby, or do ya really wanna marry me?”

Simon had a feeling that she would respond to him this way. He had been going over in his head what he would say.

“Kaylee, do you know why I chose Serenity?”

Kaylee tilted her head and waited for him to continue.

“You. I could’ve chosen any number of ships, all just as...” he smiled a little as he chose his words carefully, “disreputable as Serenity, but you drew me in. I think I began to fall in love with you that very day and-”

Kaylee interrupted Simon by kissing him full on the lips. She pressed herself against him, deepening the kiss and Simon lost all thoughts of his orchestrated speech.

“Say it again,” Kaylee whispered as their lips parted.

“Marry me?”

“No.”

“No?”

She gave him a quick kiss and smiled at him encouragingly.

“No. The other one.”

It finally dawned on him and his eyes lit up.

“Oh...I love you.”

“Okay, now ask.”

Instead Simon kissed Kaylee thoroughly as he directed her t

Comments
Sunday, 18 December 2005 19:40
That’s it- Mal thought to himself as the anger began to build in his mind. His pilot was a lush and his mechanic was pregnant by the ship’s medic. Mal smiled with derision as he replied to Simon, “Happy felicitations.”

That was grrrreat! I could so see the first scene so easily and this is soo mal! I love it. Will check back for more.
Sunday, 18 December 2005 19:47
aww, i just love when mal's all protective of kaylee. and i love when he and simon fight! write more!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 18 December 2005 20:02
Awww I had to read the proposal bit one more time! And the Mal reaction with the punch and simon ducking? GREAT! MORE!!!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 18 December 2005 20:04
previous post was by misskitten btw
Sunday, 18 December 2005 21:09
Wow. Simon really shone in this one. he didn't blow it with Kaylee - in fact, he handled the whole thing quite well. And then dealing with Mal too...very nice. It's about time the boy shows some adaptability.

Now he just has to deal with hungover River. That should prove entertaining.
Sunday, 18 December 2005 22:44
Que Bella!!!!

I love you, will you marry me? No. As long as you keep writing I guess that'll be okay.

*luffs*
Sunday, 18 December 2005 23:47
Simon has to get it right once in awhile. More to come, but of course the holidays slow everything down. Hope to post soon and thanks for all your comments!!!:):):)
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 05:09
Simon did so well! I knew he wasn't an absolute spaz. Poor Mal, "Captain" is becoming more and more a figurative title.
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 10:34
- That man is going to have a heart attack.
- No, unfortunately he is too healthy for that, but I do believe his head might explode one of these days.
head go boom!!! hee hee!!!

b
Wednesday, 28 December 2005 15:01
Awesome (sorry, I'm not much for literary critisism) Keep them coming...
Wednesday, 28 December 2005 19:48
Sooooo where u gonna take it? I loved Mal and Simon interaction and you do Malnara quite well. Hope to see some more angry Mal and sarcastic Simon...course I am a little biased my own self!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 March 2006 15:37
why the hell did you kill wash?
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 March 2006 15:39
the movie was kickass,and wash didn't deserve to die, you should have killed the assasin.
Saturday, 13 May 2006 15:32
wey! i love seeing how Simon is getting more confident throught this...kind of.

and mals head exploding :D
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 11:48
*Inara sprung into action, she was not going to lose another good rug!*

Poor Inara, having to hold River's hair and such, what a good friend.

*That’s it- Mal thought to himself as the anger began to build in his mind. His pilot was a lush and his mechanic was pregnant by the ship’s medic.*

All the makings for a FOX reality show.

*Mal was a might impressed by Simon’s reflex, the boy was getting better at violence, or at least not getting hit so much.*

Another excellent ^line,^ and so very true.

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