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Confirmation

Thursday, December 15, 2005

Simon and Kaylee return to the ship and every one weighs in about the situation. Simon/Kaylee. Continuation of Dessert, Explainin', and all others beginning at First.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3766    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Here’s the next installment. I told you they would get longer!!! Not sure if this should be the end and to start a new series later down the timeline. I'll let you guys give me your opinion. Hope you like it, hope to post more soon, and please comment!!!!

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Jayne eagerly tore into his piece of pie as Kaylee put away the leftovers. Simon went to check on River, though he was sure she would just suffer some dehydration and a headache in the morning.

Mal strode into the kitchen.

"Hey, Cap'n," Kaylee still had the dreamy smile on her face.

"That's all ya got ta say? Hey, Cap'n?"

Kaylee stared puzzled at him for a second , then replied, "Hey, Cap'n...sir?"

"Kaylee! Gorram it! What the hell is going on?"

"Don't rightly know just yet. This is news ta us, as well as y'all."

"Well, when is it gonna be cleared up?"

"Simon'll give me a test, shouldn't take more'n a couple minutes."

Jayne finished scarfing down his pie and, with his mouth still full, interjected, ”C’mon Mal, don’t say ya haven’t been expectin’ this. All the ruttin’ that’s been goin’ on.”

Mal sat down at the table glaring at Jayne. Kaylee just ignored him.

“Don’t we live in a day and age where things like this ain’t supposed ta happen?”

Kaylee had dished a piece of pie for Mal and placed it in front of him.

“Nothin’s a hundred percent, sir.”

“Pie won’t fix nothin’,” Mal commented as he looked at the appetizing slice.

“Tastes real good,” Jayne assured Mal.

He got up from the table and deposited his plate in the sink. He then turned to leave but not before stopping in front of Kaylee, and, with the most sincerity she had ever seen in him, told her, “Tell your folks thanks for all the eats, and, well...congratulations.”

Jayne nodded to her, then left the room without another word.

Kaylee’s smile widened as she took the seat across from Mal, touched by Jayne’s unexpected best wishe

Comments
Thursday, 15 December 2005 21:22
Hahahahahahaha. Mal's head is gonna explode.

You have to keep going, either here or in a new series. Inara was right: Simon will definitely ask Kaylee to marry him (he even told her father as much). Mal's reaction alone to that bit of news simply must be shown.
Thursday, 15 December 2005 21:38
I can't wait to see what mal is going to say to simon! Violence (very funny violence) is going to ensue! I hope River's there to say some things too, because she makes it all worthwhile!
Thursday, 15 December 2005 22:09
HAHA Oh you've only just started right? That's too .... priceless, to give up.
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Thursday, 15 December 2005 22:49
misskitten here, no time to log in... I LOVE IT! Sooooo CONTINUE! :D Besides you promised us :P
Thursday, 15 December 2005 23:36
This was so sweet. I love everyone's reactions to Kaylee being pregnant, and Mal's ever-lessening lack of say over the events on Serenity. You HAVE to continue this story, it's too good not to! Consider it a X-mas present to your readers.
Saturday, 17 December 2005 08:24
Thanks everybody for commenting! Okay, I'll give you some more but I'm a little stuck. Gotta hate the writer's block!! Hope to post soon, with exploding heads and very funny violence!:):):)
Sunday, 18 December 2005 15:49
no!!! fic good!! writer's block bad!!! *hates writer's block*

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Wednesday, 14 June 2006 11:39
*Nothing was ever boring when River was involved.*

^This^ is so very true.

Even though this one was a bit longer, it was still not enough of your excellent writing for me (I could read your works all day long and not get tired of them). :)

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