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Icarus

Friday, December 9, 2005

A continuation of "Broke"--the second script in my attempt to envision a post-movie Firefly. Where does Serenity's crew fit in an Alliance-run 'verse? And what exactly have they become? Art history! kinky sex! important River secrets revealed! metaphors! a few deaths! and a whole lotta talkin'!

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Icarus:

Script for a Firefly episode dating a while (two weeks to a month) after the movie, and approximately three days after the long-ago advent of my first script, “Broke”

(see shameless self-promotion exhibited above)

Scene 1:

The nameless operative, antagonist of Serenity the movie, is kneeling inside a Catholic-style confessional. The room (booth?) feels close, but calm; the light is very warm. He is speaking to the person on the other side of the grate, with his quiet, intent smile.

Operative: (explanatory) I sought, to put a point on it, not to die selfishly. To that end I honed myself as a tool, and emptied myself as a man—and I slept well when I killed, knowing myself to be in hands greater than my own, a part of something greater than myself, a movement toward the light. I would eliminate the shadow under the light, until there was rest, and peace. A final peace, moving always toward the light. My mind was as a finely-honed sword, a weapon in the cause of the Alliance.

He nods to himself, and his smile widens a bit.

Operative: I was happy, I think.

He unsheathes his sword smoothly; one realizes that he has been kneeling in the manner that he tends to when he’s about to have someone fall on his weapon.

Operative: As you shall be, when you are dead.

He rams the sword forward into the wall behind which one assumes his listener has been listening. The wall shatters and falls—he sees that what he has thrust his sword into is a mirror, with himself reflected in it. His reflection is smiling contemplatively, and blood begins to run from where the sword point is lodged in its abdomen. This happens in a timeless sort of second, and then the mirror too shatters, and he finds the sword lodged in himself, blood welling thickly around it and beginning to drop rhythmically to the floor—

He wakes up. Viewed from above (as with River at the beginning of “Objects in Space”), he is lying on his back in a plain white room, covered by a blanket on a mat. It is night, but the moo

Comments
Saturday, 10 December 2005 11:11
I really loved it that Simon got to hit that *hundan* Thron in the face - twice. One query though, when they get back to Serenity and Mal and Inara go to her room how come she doesn't notice he got shot in the arm (from when he pushed Simon aside and took the bullet from the albino woman)? Even if it was just a nick it would bleed. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 10 December 2005 18:58
that was great really well written keep it going.
Saturday, 10 December 2005 21:21
SQUEEEEE! Yay, a sequel!


Okay, with the preliminaries out of the way, I can try to be coherent.


Plot is always sexy. I loved the entirety of it, the idea of River being created isn't improbable at all, yet it takes nothing away from the heartbreak. Simon's punch felt gratifying. Great characters there.

I love all the visual clues you put in, though much of the poignancy is probably lost since it's just description of things meant to be seen.

Mal and Inara... oh man. You have those two down pat so well, weild them like an instrument. The oh-so-subtle resentment in the beginning, the tender and open ending... Just lovely, all around.

Things I will forever adore: Daran. God, I jumped for joy! What an amazing way to combine past, present and future for Inara in a single person and his very particular specialties? How typical for Inara to seek refuge in her own world, the way that Companions solve problems, which is by all evidence a pretty successful way.

And the Operative. Having him back was great, even like this.

The River and Jayne scenes, the way he is learning her, in a way. Beautiful.


Soooooooooooo... will there be another script like this? Because, that would be gooood. *g*
Sunday, 11 December 2005 12:49
I am so completely and utterly in love with this series. (Um, it IS going to be a series, isn't it? *hint hint*);P

What's happening with the Operative is intruiging (and somewhat disturbing); Mal & Inara are as fascinating and frustrating as ever; Zoe's sorrow is heartbreaking; River is... River, but the thing that's really drawing me in is the exploration of Jayne's crush on Kaylee.

When Joss said straight-out on the commentary of 'Serenity (Part 1)' that it actually existed and I hadn't been imagining things, it made me feel disappointed about the cancellation all over again because I didn't get to see the inevitable triangle develop. And now you're building that triangle for me, and I just can't thank you enough.

Excellent writing. I will be eagerly awaiting the next episode.
TIMBOLECTABLE
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 04:10
once again, thanks so much for reading and being so freaking nice. yeah, kaylee's part kinda sucked in this...she's getting a central role soon, though, in my NEXT installment (i did a little head-wag on that "NEXT" which due to the limitations of this medium you unfortunately couldn't see). i'm fairly sure it'll be much funnier than this one (and i'll try to do a better simon as well...)
thanks again.
LYN
Friday, 16 December 2005 13:43
I read the first episode, then lost the link, so I only just found the new installment. I love this series! It's funny, and witty, and sad, and moving - you sure you aren't Joss after all?! ;-)

Usually I don't tend to be crazy about fanfiction in the script format, but your scripts work insanely well - I can completely visualise what you are writing. It's like watching an episode of Firefly on paper... Amazing stuff!

Can't wait for your next 'episode'. :-)
Friday, 16 December 2005 21:07
more please!!!
violent simon is always good...and yeah, kaylee's part sucked

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LINX
Saturday, 31 December 2005 04:33
Another great script! I would have liked there to be a bit more humor in this one and the pace was a bit slower than 'Broke', but it's a solid story. I love your idea of how River was genetically 'made' and raised by Simon's parents. It also gives reason for his family's fortune, which is just a nice backstory to think on. Nicely done! I hope you write more soon!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 19:59
This is timbolectable, awkward authoress, and I want to say to whoever nominated me for this Strawberry thing: it pretty much means the world that you'd be willing to do so. Thanks so much.
okay, that was all.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 20:00
oh, (timbolectable again) and there will be another script fairly soon, i've just got to get back into it (time--and scary scary midterms--being what they are).

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