Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

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Friday, September 15, 2006

It's taken forever, but the third installment of the series I've been working on is finally done. A two-parter about...well, a bunch of stuff. Jayne and Kaylee kissin'! River in love! New additions! Volatile villains! Marriages! Mal gets naked! Drugs, Elvis, and rockin' happenings!

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Script taking place approx. a week after the end of Icarus (I'm pretty sure it's kinda rough, and hence apologize to the wooorld!)

Scene 1:

A shot from above, of Mal and Inara, asleep in her bed. They’re tangled up together sort of confusingly, with Inara’s head tucked underneath Mal’s chin, holding each other. The shot goes down to show Inara’s face. She smiles without opening her eyes, then slowly does so. Reality hits her suddenly, and she glances around without moving her head, trying to figure out where she is and who she’s entwined with. She remembers, and a look of intense embarrassment, mixed with a dollop of humor she finds in the position she’s in, crosses her face. She half-bites her lip.

Inara: (quietly) Um, Mal?

Mal moves closer. Inara half-laughs, still embarrassed.

Inara: (louder) Mal?

She moves her head so that his chin tilts, and sort of tries to push away. He wakes up suddenly.

Mal: (sleep-mouthed) Danger? Where?

Inara: Mal, you’re squashing me.

He looks down, sees her, lets go, and jerks away, somehow managing to roll himself off the bed and onto the floor in a tangle of sheet.

Mal: Aii-yah! Pins and needles, pins and needles.

He shakes his arm vigorously. Inara clutches the remaining sheet to her chest and sits up. She looks straight in front of her, nervously avoiding Mal’s gaze, a bit exasperated. He stops shaking his arm, looks down at himself, then up at her. He sees her back and her profile, and his gaze goes hot.

Mal: ‘Morning.

Inara: (stiffly) ‘Morning.

Mal: (responding by getting equally stiff, though he doesn’t know why they’re fighting again) How are you?

Inara: (snapped) I’m fine.

Mal stares at her for a second.

Mal: (muttered) Well, fine then.

He attempts to get up, but then gets re-caught in the sheet and falls back on the floor heavily. Inara scrambles over the bed toward him worriedly. She leans her head over the side.

Inara: Mal?

Mal sits up quickly and their heads crack together. Inara cries

Comments
Friday, 15 September 2006 22:37
Hmm, very interesting.

Some of the characterization seems off, especially since this takes place after the movie, but I'll keep reading to see where you go with it.

I do hope Simon manages to tell Kaylee how he feels.
Saturday, 16 September 2006 11:48
A few things felt a bit off but by and large I am happy to see where you're going with this. The lawman on Paradiso is Sheriff Bourne (played by Gregg Henry). I did have to laugh at the Mal and Inara scenes but now it appears that Inara has unwittingly delivered Mal into the hands of his enemy. Hmm. Wiles. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 15:48
This is some mighty crazy stuff you got here, timbolectable...especially the River/Eratz conversations;)

Definitely loved Mal's attempt (though we all know it was intentionally half-assed) to understand what Inara does in her shuttle on a job! I was so waiting for Inara to snap and give Mal a good seeing to;D

BEB
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 17:24
Wow. Wow wow wow wow wow. Absolutely incredible, and I can't start recounting everything I love or I'll be here all day. It's just... you so OWN the characters and the subtleties of the show. It's like Christmas, reading your stories, everytime. *G*


And wow, this has been posted some time ago... What are the chances that you haven't yet abandoned this beautiful series and another chapter might grace this archive some day? Because.. well, duh. It's amazing writing, about ten levels above most other writers in fandom.

MUCH love!

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