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Bedlam: Part 9

Friday, December 9, 2005

The morning after. Of course the crew didn’t stay out of trouble while Mal and Inara were, um, occupied. Rish, I'm guessing.

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Bedlam: Part 9

By Kaynara

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Inara woke up to find the sheets pooled on the floor and Mal clutching her like a life-sized teddy bear. She tried to move but found herself stuck, vice-like in his arms, his breath warm and steady on the back of her neck.

In Inara’s experience, the male morning-after response pattern tended to follow one of two trends. Embarassment was the first. Men who acted like animals the night before became shy, shameful, as though the morning sun revealed their sins. They turned aloof and stammering, hurrying into their trousers, rushing to show her the door. Then there were the sweet ones, the clients who pampered her first, pouring her wine, filling the bath with rose petals. After the act, they turned confident, arrogant. They’d had her once and believed themselves mighty, entitled. They turned into bastards. Inara knew she couldn’t handle either response from Mal.

She lifted a hand to touch her hair, felt the wild waves stream out in all directions. She needed a shower, lots of hot water. She imagined slipping into a robe, lighting incense. And coffee, coffee was a must. She started to wiggle down, slide through the space between his arms.

And found herself pinned underneath him.

Oh, yes. He was up now, no mistaking it.

“Where you think you’re goin’?” he murmured sleepily into the curve of her neck.

“I was planning on getting dressed,” she answered, amused.

“I get a say in this?” He was starting to wake up. Hell, this wasn’t half bad, finding her in his bed, all warm and sleep-tousled. A fella could get used to this sorta thing. He moved his head down her chest, trailing lazy, open-mouthed kisses over her skin.

“I hardly thought you were one for lying around in the nude all day.” She felt his tongue slide around her nipple, his mouth a warm contrast to the cool morning air.

“Nude, no. Naked, though....” He slid down her body, nibbling at her hip bone. “Naked’s got all sorts of possibilities.”

“I--what about the crew?” What was wrong wi

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 06:57
Sexy, sweet, and funny all at once! Very good plot, too. I absolutely LOVE this story----please continue soon.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 07:06
Whew! What a relief! Was afraid I was going to have get by today without getting to read another installment of this great story!
Friday, 09 December 2005 07:14
I loved the morning-after-Mal. He and Inarya are so good together, and you write them both wonderfully!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 11:04
LOVED it! Come on, give us more!

Fave line:
"Hey, now, no need for the name-callin’. Criminals would suffice."
2X2
Friday, 09 December 2005 11:33
<contented sigh>
I just love this story... your Mal and Inara are wonderful, and I love her uncertainties and honest reactions to Mal... and so troubling, the guild revoking her licence... the choice taken from her will be a lot harder to deal with than making the decision herself, I'm thinking... such mixed emotions, and I can totally see her not telling Mal yet... she has to find out how she even feels about it, and he would feel a strange mix of emotions too, I'd bet, satisfaction, or relief that she can't work, but a whole lot of guilt for being, as I'm sure he'd see it, the cause of her gettin' in trouble... and it will be very difficult for him to understand exactly what she's feeling too, I'll bet... ahh, but enough rambling! I'll find in in the next part, I'm sure <g> Great story, keep it up!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 14:19
aww great chapter! Didnt see that coming with the Tams!

And I love Mal....he's so sweet with Inara!
Friday, 09 December 2005 17:56
secrets? from Mal? yikes, not fun..well, reading it is fun but theres gotta be a backlash somewhere

love mornin-after Mal as well, just all cuddly.
Friday, 09 December 2005 18:51
That was really good. Youve got these characters down i cant wait for more.
Friday, 09 December 2005 18:58
Simon and River's parents have an unmitigated cheek to hire armed thugs to snatch them then accuse their children of falling in with criminals! Huh, kettle, pot, black? At least with the crew of Serenity they have a family that loves them and will fight for them and that ain't nothin'. Love Mal and Inara getting closer and showing their feelings more, just hope Inara isn't going to screw it all up by trying to get back into the Guild good books. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 23:38
More More MORE!!!!

Again, your characters are bang on. River esp this time. But your Mal is brilliant. You can *hear* Nathan Fillion when reading your dialogue. *Excellent* plot twist with the Tams.

One quibble: "Sobbing wet." Did you mean *sopping*?
Saturday, 10 December 2005 03:36
happy happy happy happy! thank you! i luv this alot! i will surely tune in next time!
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 12:00
the whole tickling conversation was just SO funny!!! think i need a captain to tickle me...

b
WHELP
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 04:17
“Oh, can I?!”

LOL

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