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Retribution

Sunday, December 4, 2005

Conclusion to Girl Time, Incorrigible, and Interruptions.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3769    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Nothing is mine, just writing for fun.

Here’s the conclusion, hope you like it. PG-13 for some words and situations. Please comment!!Thanks to every one who read this little series and if you want suggest a name for it!

They had been drinking for awhile and Mal was beginning to think this night might end very well!

After announcing at dinner that they would be taking a few days off in Three Hills, every one was all smiles.

He did feel a little sorry for the joke they had been playing on Simon and Kaylee, but thought that the downtime would make up for it. Deep down, he hoped it would appease Inara’s anger, but he wasn’t really ready to admit that to her himself.

His late night walk around the ship had led him to the kitchen and a nice cup of coffee when Inara floated in with a bottle.

She told him that it was very kind of him to let the crew have a few days to themselves and wondered if he would like to share a drink. Her smile let him know that she knew this was his way of making things up with Kaylee and Simon.

Not one to pass up some fine liquor, Mal and Inara toasted to “the happy couple”. More toasts ensued till Mal was almost seeing double.

He reached out and took Inara’s hand as they were laughing, causing a light blush to color her cheeks. Her smile was encouraging, so Mal decided to make his move. He stood up from his chair and pulled her against his chest , rubbing small circles with his thumb on the wrist of the hand he grabbed just moments ago.

Inara leaned into him and tilted her head up.

“Come to my shuttle.”

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"Oh Mal, don't be upset, it happens to all men."

He was sitting on the edge of the bed, his back turned to her as she reclined stretched out on her side, head resting on her palm.

She was wearing that sweet pink confection of a nightgown, the one that skimmed her thighs, slit on the sides, and plunged deeply on the neckline.

Mal stole a glimpse back

Comments
Sunday, 04 December 2005 23:23
I'm seriously rofl over here, Inara totally pwned Mal, to be perfectly 'net about it. And River doing chores for Simon and Kaylee to make up for her part in the prank...aw!
Sunday, 04 December 2005 23:40
Oh GOD! LOL!

Now that is just downright... bwahahaha! Cruelty is so much fun, isn't it? *g*
Sunday, 04 December 2005 23:42
LMFAO

God that woman is CRUEL....I love it!
Monday, 05 December 2005 00:01
LMAO *brilliant* revenge, Inara!! :D :D :D
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 01:24
omg too funny! poor mal
-kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 01:28
This was a great series. I would love to see you collect them into a single work (with rewriting as neccesary for pacing). Please? Pretty please with a new compression coil on top?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 02:17
Hahahahaha. I new Inara was gonna get him. Canned food is gonna get old fast.

Well played.

ManicGiraffe
Monday, 05 December 2005 02:25
OMG, love the ending!
Monday, 05 December 2005 06:22
I am so glad every one has enjoyed the series. It didn't start off as one, but evolved on it's own and with all of your encouragement. The suggestion of posting in one continuous story may be a little daunting, I'll see what I can do. I may have a new story cooking up, River might meet a boy near her age, Simon may not be happy about that(brotherly concern, no crazy space incest!!!). If you read Starving Jayne might meet a little dark haired barmaid again. I want to thank every person who gave me feedback!!!! Hope to post soon.
Monday, 05 December 2005 07:25
And just a question because I am not completely net literate, what does pwned mean?
Monday, 05 December 2005 16:51
"God that woman is CRUEL..."
and that's why we love her...

b

p.s. those darn space monkeys!!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:55
LMAO...that was sooooooo cruel!! But I LOVED it.....ahahahahahha
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 06:11
"Pwned" means "owned," basically. It's a typo from somewhere that got turned into netspeak lol.
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 07:05
Thanks for clearing that up, I was a bit confused. I had some time coming up with crazy anagrams to figure it out! :):):)
Saturday, 10 December 2005 12:50
omg i can't breathe!!!! omg!!! go nara!!! u rock girl!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
LMAOROFLLMAOROFL
dear me, yes i'm breathing now.
hehehehehe.......
'Space Monkeys.'
Thursday, 22 December 2005 05:45
That was unbelievably funny.
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 12:21
Gotta love those space monkeys!
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 14:58
*“Or maybe some terrifying space monkeys came and stole your erection.”*

LOL, ^excellent line.^

*folded all his underwear into perfectly symmetrical squares*

^Another great line,^ with very funny visual imagery.

River is such a brat sometimes, and you write her very well, which makes me very happy.
Wednesday, 16 August 2006 05:16
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA INARA IS SO EVIL.

I LOVED this. So bright and spunky! I'm glad I came across this little series.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 03:04
Oh am I glad I found this little series! So great, Leighkohl. Space monkies and eating out of a can... cuz you know that's exactly what Mal would do if that happened... That was just too funny!

Off to read more Leighkohl fic!

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