Bedlam: Part Six
By Kaynara
It’s Joss’s verse--I just borrow it. Leave me feedback!
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River shook with the convulsions, seeing it all, feeling everything. Simon carried her to the infirmary, laid her on the table.
“River?” He held her shoulders, trying to make the shaking stop.
“Oh, God,” Kaylee whispered, near tears. “Poor sweetie.”
“What in the gorram hell’s goin’ on in here?” Jayne demanded from the hallway. “Girl’s hollerin’ loud enough to wake the--” He stopped short in the doorway, seeing River’s slim, shuddering body writhe around on the table. A strange sensation twitched in his chest. Suddenly, she sat straight up, smacking her head on the hanging lamp.
“You’re the one he needs. Go to him, go to Daddy now. Go!”
Jayne scrutinized the little witch, cheeks wet, eyes blazing, hair in disarray with damp strands plastered to her forehead. He looked at Simon who shrugged helplessly, already using gauze to dab at the spot where River had hit her head.
“Something’s wrong with the cap’n?” Kaylee asked. “Oh, and Nara! Jayne!”
“I’m takin’ Inara’s shuttle,” he muttered. “Stay on the gorram ship.”
He went to find Vera.
“What about Zoe?” Kaylee murmured, holding River’s hand as Simon bandaged her temple.
“Zoe don’t go,” River said firmly. Then, whimpering, she lay back down on the table, curling her knees up to her chest in preparation for the next wave of pain.
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A bullet, tearing through flesh, muscle. Mal let Zoe wrap his arm with a strand of fabric torn from her shirt. And suddenly it didn’t hurt anymore. Actually, felt like nothin’ more ‘n a pinprick. And then he was slipping away again. The Valley faded into the background, the sky going gray, then white. In place of star light and gun blasts, he saw the warm glow of Chinese lanterns. The smell of death became incense, maybe vanilla. He sucked in air, so clean after the filth of the valley. Then he remembered.
“Just a few drops of the antidote, Mr. Reynolds.” A small, bespectacled face loomed be
(oh, and if you ever want a beta to help you with those small flaws that occasionally make it through, I'd be thrilled to help--first read and all that :) )
That was absolutely lovely. And hilarious!! You have a great hand for dialogue! Bwaha!
Equally lovely was Inara killing Niska, and her backstory. That's downright fascinating! It's a very plausible scenario, Inara coming from a problematic family and being so awed by the alternative in female role model when her own mother didn't provide much care. Can't wait to hear more about that.
Not to mention, after the beautiful hotness of Mal and Inara in the last chapter, he we get gut-wrenching desperation and warm sweetness. Mal would hate to see her touched by this part of his life, that's true.
An excellent part. Absolutely great! And the best was how soon you posted it, whee!
Looking forward to more!
fantastico, I love your Wash as well.
can't wait for more as always!
Loved how Wash was paying Mal back for all he did for him during "War Stories." Definite Whedonesque moment, though I have to say that I thought the whole "Mal gets tortured by Niska, with Wash taunting him constantly" scene was gonna go on longer...get some more special moments out for our enjoyment. However, Inara knifing the hundan for calling her a whore seems rather right for Firefly...one gets the twisted idea that only Mal can call Inara the W word and not suffer her wrath cuz only he seems to use it with concealed love.
Definite series material, though probably something for a later season or a hypothetical full first season finale ending.
You can't take the sky from me
I'm here late, but catching up.
Incredible story.
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