Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Interruptions

Friday, December 2, 2005

There doesn't seem to be enough time. Simon/Kaylee

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4277    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Firefly is not mine, just writing for fun.

This is my first foray into non G, nothing too explicit, well maybe just a little PG-13.

Simon loved it when she wore those shorts. He wasn't sure if they were underwear or what, but he couldn't really control himself when Kaylee wore them. She had on that little tank, the brown one with the flowers, and Simon wasn't sure why, but her socks were pulled almost up to her knees and she had those cute buns on her head.

She resembled those girls he remembered from school, they played field hockey every Tuesday and he would always remember to walk the long way to the transport, just to get a glimpse.

As Kaylee sauntered up to Simon with a wicked grin spreading across her face, he leaned back on her bunk, arms bracing himself.

She quickly straddled him, knees on each side of his hips, arms stretched out over his shoulders, not sitting on his lap but pressed against him as her head stayed a few inches from his, coming close to his then pulling back coyly.

Of course he fell for the bait and leaned forward more, forcing Simon to wrap his arms around her waist.

With only mere seconds to their lips meeting the comm in Kaylee’s bunk switched to life.

“Kaylee! “, the Captain’s voice resonated off the hull’s walls, destroying the moment Simon and Kaylee were sharing,” We need you up in the cockpit. Gorram cortex feed is blown and I need to send a wave! Hurry up!”

“Always when it’s gettin’ good”, Kaylee muttered as she slid off of Simon and grabbed for her shoes and coveralls.

Simon leaned back again on his arms and groaned, “This is getting ridiculous. How many times in the past few days has this happened?”

“Seven”, she replied as she began lacing up her boots.

It seemed that the fates had been working against Simon and Kaylee. Everything on the ship was breaking down, nothing catastrophic but little things, making Kaylee feel like she was losing her touch with Serenity. And Simon was doing more non doctor duties that it would fill up mo

Comments
Friday, 02 December 2005 21:50
Oh that's just mean. And funny.
Friday, 02 December 2005 21:55
Wow! You're on a roll, and this one was hilarious.

Keep it going!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:00
Best joke played on Simon since the pilot! Well done. =)
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:00
ooh!! eeeeeeevil crew!!! *falls off chair laughing HARD*

b
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:07
I'd also like to add that you are now responsible for me with visions of Kaylee in knee-high socks and shorts.

My productivity at work just dropped to zero.
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:31
Absolutely hilarious!

I couldn't believe the twist at the end, even though I was suspecting that something was up.

Brillant characterization. I see them saying all those things.

I have to laugh some more now and make my sister read this!
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:34
Guys love the knee-high socks! Sorry MG, but now I've got to get to work. Hope to post soon and thanks for all the positive feedback!! I love writing Simon and Kaylee! I was intimidated to post for a while now but everyone being so kind and responsive has made me want to write more! Thanks!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:44
BC here:

Oh, that is just cruel. *L*
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:44
I *loved* this, the crew setting Simon and Kaylee up for some inconvenient interruptions. Oh Inara, you spoil sport! - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 December 2005 23:02
MAN, that's mean! give us another one :) Pretty please?
Saturday, 03 December 2005 05:26
Hee! They're so mean, but this fic is hi-larious!
Saturday, 03 December 2005 06:23
“Inara will tell on us,” River replied.

too cute!
Sunday, 04 December 2005 08:29
Kaylee will kill someone when she finds out.
Saturday, 17 December 2005 13:21
That was fun! lol
Thursday, 22 December 2005 05:35
That was great. Too funny to even describe. Great job.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 03:03
HOWL! OMG, that was great!

Inara the only one not wanting to play along was great!

Wonderfully done!
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 12:14
This is great. Very cleverly done!
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 13:56
For some reason my ruttin' gorram fed computer at work keeps logging me out, that was me.
Wednesday, 16 August 2006 05:04
My, you just painted Kaylee as a little picture of sexy :) (I found it funny because you somehow mentioned every quirky sex-clothing detail that turns me on - long socks, boyshorts, cute hair...)

Ak! This review has gotten a lot more personal than I'd intended! This was cute and hilarious - especially the end! Although I'm a big fan of Simon's field hockey peeping past, too. A few grammar errors, but otherwise a smooth read and a lot of fun! Now I'll just bounce on to read the follow-ups...and I hope they have socks in them, because if they don't I'll just add them mentally ;)

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