Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink- Chapter 12

Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Simon doesn't agree with Mal's idea for communication. Kaylee and Jayne can't communicate at all. Comments appreciated!

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Jayne staid in bed for as long as he could. Hadn’t yet figured out how ta act aroun’ Kaylee. Figured it was best ta… stay out a sight.

He weren’t hidin’.

He jumped when someone kicked the hatch leadin’ down ta his bunk.

“Put some pants on an’ be in the kitchen in five minutes.”

Mal. Prob’ly gonna talk about what they was gonna do about the doc’s date that night.

Jayne groped over the side of the bed fer the pants he was wearin’ the night before. He held ‘em ta his nose an’ sniffed. Thought about it fer a second an’ sniffed again.

Good enough.

He pulled ‘em on an’ stood up. Stumbled over ta the sink an’ splashed some water on his face.

Considered shavin’. Thought better of it.

His Fightin’ Fairies t-shirt was mostly clean. Didn’t stink, anyway, as he pulled it over his head. He looked at ‘imself in the mirror again an’ ran his hand over his hair, mussin’ it up a bit.

He closed the hatch behind ‘im after he’d put his shoes on an’ clumb up ta the deck. Made sure it was shut tight an’ turned toward the kitchen.

Kaylee was just comin’ up outa her hatch.

She looked at ‘im. Her eyes were a little red. Didn’t look like she’d slept real good.

Jayne’s stomach did a little dance.

“Hi.”

Her voice was a little gravelly and real ruttin’ sexy.

“Mornin’.”

“You… uh… you headed ta the kitchen?”

Jayne nodded slowly, lookin’ around at the walls. Couldn’t quite bring himself ta look at her face, pretty as it was.

“Yup.”

“Me, too.”

The silence was real loud.

“We could… walk… together. If you want. I ain’t forcin’ ya to er nothin’. Just… if ya want.” Jayne rubbed the back of his neck and looked real intent-like at Kaylee’s feet.

“That’s okay.”

Jayne glanced up at Kaylee’s face an’ then back down. “Fine by me. Just askin’.”

“No! I mean… okay. I meant yes. That’s okay. I want you.”

Jayne’s eyes shot up to her face.

She was red as a warnin’ light. “To! I want you to. Walk with me.” She was twistin’ her hands in front of her. “I

Comments
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 06:10
*Grin*

OMG, I LOOOOOVE their walk to the kitchen. Literally, it's like ten feet...but they wanted to walk together.

SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 06:42
Awwww... this is very cool. I get so excited everytime I see a new chapter.

Their walk was so sweet! And Kaylee wants Jayne! (to walk! yes, walk, TO - she *wants* him).

Wednesday, 30 November 2005 12:27
The miscommunication is great. I love this new chapter all the characters show up so well.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 12:29
oh! And I forgot to say I love the Fighting fairies t-shirt! I want one
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 13:05
“I don’t want ta talk about him. I don’t want ta talk about what he is er ain’t er anythin’. I don’t want ‘im around. I don’t like ‘im. So when you get ‘im all outa yer system an’ feel like talkin’ ta me, let me know. It’s like I said last night. You an’ me an’ that’s all.” He softened his voice. “I’m greedy like that.”

Oh my God, how can she resist him after that? Hell, forget wanting a Fighting Fairies T-shirt, get me a man like Jayne! Oh, unless he's actually WEARING the shirt, then that'd be okay ;P
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 13:12
Oh, I forgot to mention that I LOVED the tiny little detail of Jayne mussin' up his hair before he left his bunk. He's gotta look right for his girl after all...
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 15:28
Ok I love that Jayne keeps messing up his hair cause Kaylee mentioned it.

That tee-shirt is my favorite!

“Lucky for you, Zoe’s got a real attractive pair of earrings left over from the war.”

I gigglesnorted in the middle of work, now everyone thinks I'm nuts!


“Is the only reason you talk ta me because I ain’t the doc? Because I’m all… manful an’… whatever it is you think you’re lookin’ for?”

Aww poor Jayne.

This is great. I can't wait for Simon to wear earings!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 16:21
“I don’t have medical experience. Don’t want you gettin’ an infection ‘er nothin’.”

*snort* Man, you make me giggle.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 17:40
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and breathe...

b
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 19:54
I like this a lot and Jayne wanting to make sure Kaylee was talking to him not merely having him overhear her thoughts about Simon is great. I hope Kaylee doesn't play about with his feelings or hurt him. And Simon's date with the creepy Mr Pink? Think he should have the biggest gorram earrings so he can stick the pin right in him if he tries anything. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 20:44
Simon will be much happier when he acknowledges that 1.) he brings The Gay and 2.) Kaylee and Jayne 4-eva
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 20:58
"Kaylee was chewin’ on her lower lip.

Jayne wanted ta reach out an’ touch her hair.

He didn’t."


I am now officially in love with this fic!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 00:49
Love. This. Fic.

The only things that I don't like are:
1. Mal's voice seems iffyish.
2. All the ta's are bugging me. Meh. XD

But this is excellent. Gotta love Jaylee XD

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