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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Forty

Monday, November 28, 2005

Mal and Jayne go for an unpleasant walk on Hecate.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Forty

They prepared to leave Athens the next day, as the news over the cortex was all about the raid on New Lesbos “by persons unknown but believed to be raiders from the ring system”. Seven women died and ten were wounded in the raid, and twenty buildings, including the village’s majestic temple, had been damaged by fire. Local leaders pledged to rebuild, and the Archonate pledged a hefty sum for additional security.

Inara felt obligated to donate a significant amount to the victims herself. None of this would have happened except for her. Debra told her she was being silly, that those men were to blame for the death and destruction. For a woman who had just lost all of her worldly possessions and been shot for the first time in a long, sedate, and boring life, she seemed to be taking the crisis rather well.

“It’s something about being faced with violent death,” she explained. “You come face to face with your own mortality, it alters your perspective. I’ve lost all of my work, years worth, but I find I don’t care. I can get a new house, new things. And my work doesn’t seem as relevant as it did a few days ago. I’m going to have to give this a few months reflection before I can put it in a context of meaning, but honestly I’m looking forward to it. In a way, I feel like I should thank you, bao bei.”

“Please don’t,” begged Inara into the pickup. “Seven people died – more, if you count the raiders – because . . . because of me. Of who I am. Hell, I killed one of them!” The sole surviving raider was the man that Inara had shot in the eye with the arrow. It had permanently destroyed his eyesight in that eye, but had not penetrated his brain. He was in Acropolis, now, being healed. To stand trial. For capital aiding and abetting murder, and thirty-six other charges. He would likely be executed before his eye fully healed.

“Relax, my dear, relax,” Debra soothed. “I may not have your romantic lifestyle, but listen to a woman who has years more exp

Comments
Monday, 28 November 2005 19:06
Always wondered how the gravity part of terraforming worked. Your background stuff is as compelling as your storytelling.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 28 November 2005 19:39
Man, I'm hard pressed to think of anything in this series (andf the last one) that doesn't kick total ass. I've read almost each chapter four times at least and find the appeal hasn't worn off yet. Fantastic writing, on the details and characters!

Just curious though, is this tale supposed to be worked into the movie continuity, or something completely different?
Monday, 28 November 2005 19:46
I have taken great pains to stay within continuity -- except for the one-system/faster-than-light thing. But character-wise I am keeping it strictly in-canon. No one important will get whacked, sacked, or screw someone that they didn't screw in the series. Some real tear-jerking ahead, and some great action -- the best is yet to come!

ScrewtheAlliance
Monday, 28 November 2005 20:53
Loved this, and Mal quoting Virgil? Nice to know he has a grasp of more than just the Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner, God bless his mum. Also liked Jayne in this a lot and it is really good to have them have friends that will help smooth their path like Mal's friend Jorge. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 28 November 2005 22:13
Fantastiche!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 00:10
Shiny!

Mal's a smart feller.



ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 03:06
Have to agree with the comment above about how you have set up the visit to Hecate with all of the background on teraforming. It's more than just shiny. On some level you have affected me as much as some of my favorite authors, Murakami comes to mind (Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World).
The scenes on the dead moon are earie but much too short. It would be great if there were more happening there.
Some of the best scenes of movies (speaking subjectively of course) have been those leading up to the main theme. For instance in "Alien", all the scenes leading up to the crew member getting the thing stuck to his face. I've watched just about all of the sci-fi ever and that just was as erie-ass as it gets.
Stepping over corpses on Hecate is right up there on the scale of erie otherworldly images.
Thanks for taking us where we would not have imagined on our own.
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 11:39
you're absolutely SURE your name isn't joss?

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ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 01:49
Your attention to detail continues to amaze. From noting that most of the firefly verse must have some sort of gravity system to hold atmosphere to these tiny little moons, to noting that the Inara of the movie is far more ready to kill than the one in the TV show, you take the cake for showing a complete world. Thank you again.


I can't wait to see how the third book is going to look. (What?!? Third book? Of course, how else are we going to get from a fairly rich crew back to the hardscrabble existence of the comic-book, pre-BDM! )
WINTERHART
Monday, 06 March 2006 21:13
This is wonderful :) I'm enjoying my read through this immensely - your grasp of the characters and the ability to write them believably (coupled, of course, with the backstory and technological details that all of us geeks inevitably wonder about!) makes this a fabulous story!

Keep it up, and know that it's very appreciated!

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