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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink- Chapter 8

Monday, November 21, 2005

The trip to Mr. Pink's compound. Can we say... awkward? Jayne vs. Simon. (I would like to say, by the way, that I love Simon dearly. Just so you all know I'm not unjustly biased.)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1885    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Jayne took the buckskin again. Zoe took the black one. That left the doc with the silly-lookin’ yella one. He didn’t seem ta notice, though. He just glared straight ahead, silent as stone.

Jayne almost woulda preferred ta have the doc draw a gun on ‘im. Come flyin’. At least then he coulda’ punched ‘im an’ had it over with. Better th’n havin’ him poutin’ like he was.

Couldn’t help but wonder what the doc was gonna say ta Kaylee. Jayne wasn’t sweet on the idea of her bein’ upset er nothin’. Or gettin’ yelled at.

The doc wouldn’t do nothin’ ta hurt Kaylee. Didn’t seem the type. An’ if he had, Jayne’d likely have ta wait in line behind Mal ta beat the shu ma nyaw outa ‘im.

Weren’t none of the doc’s business. Gorram girl could make decisions fer herself.

Not that’s she’d exactly decided anythin’. She hadn’t come out and said nothin’. She just kept hintin’ an’ goin’ at it backwards.

Gorram girl. Why couldn’t she make a decision?

Zoe’d stopped. Jayne pulled his horse to a stop next ta her The doc was too busy glarin’ ta notice. Kept on ridin’ ahead.

“Simon.”

The doc looked around. Turned his horse back.

“Yes?”

“Best we part ways here. You keep straight ahead. Go inta the compound from the west. We’ll head south ta those hills.” Zoe nodded at some hills in the distance.

“Fine.”

“Got your money?”

The doc nodded. Jayne could see his jaw clenchin’ an unclenchin’.

“Don’t spend it unless you have ta. Stay only as long as you feel comfortable.”

“I’m done, then.”

Zoe half-smiled. “Longer than that.”

“Do I get a safe word? Or do I just have to scream your names when he tries to have his way with me?”

“I’d rather not have my name mentioned, if ya don’t mind.”

The doc didn’t even glance at Jayne.

Zoe shifted in her saddle. “I think I safe word would be best. Got one in mind?”

“Oh, I don’t know. Usurper Seducer. Gun-toting desperate ape-man.”

“Hey!” Jayne didn’t know what the first one meant, but he was ruttin’ positive the last o

Comments
Monday, 21 November 2005 19:14
I am SO your bitch!

LMAO. OMG.

That was hilarious. I could picture every word. Oh, and I just love the tension... and picking the name Jayne?

SQUEEEEE!
Monday, 21 November 2005 19:42
I'm having trouble breathing past the sniggering.

"Please. Call me Jayne."

Simon is in so much trouble that a little more ain't gonna hurt that much. Let's see him give Mr Pink a run for his money whilst gaily (ahem) flinging Jayne's name around as much as possible. Wheeee! More please?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 21:31
LMAO- this is soooo funny
Monday, 21 November 2005 22:35
Oh... *swoon*

This was classic, it really was. Hee, Simon is so very outmatched and Jayne's going to kill him sideways.

"I was named after my mother."

Heeeeeeeeeeeeee.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 03:51
Heheheeeeeee. Love it! And I love the frequent updates! I don't know how you do it!
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 04:19
OMG! You actually made me laugh out loud in front of my computer and now it's looking at me like I'm a freak ;P

There's only one thing to say about a chapter like that, and I quote, in the immortal words of RinnyPJ: SQUEEEEE!
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 11:42
french class, screeching, i think you get the picture...

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Tuesday, 22 November 2005 12:40
::wipes eyes:: oh dear, That was hysterical! ::gigglesnort::

Your Jayne and Simon are great and I can just picture Zoe!

I'm so gonna challenge Rinny, cause I wanna be your bitch.
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 12:50
What fun! Hearing everthing that's going on. And picking Jayne's name? Inspired
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 14:23
Fantastic! Like others have said- I can hear these words in their voices- you write our beloved crew so well!
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 17:07
I love the name change at the end!

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