Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink-- chapter 7

Sunday, November 20, 2005

the adventuresome jayleeness continues. a smallish chapter in some ways, biggish in others.

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“Jayne an’ Zoe’ll be hangin’ around in case somethin’ happens to ya.”

Jayne looked over at Mal. “We will?”

Mal gave ‘im a look an’ turned back ta the doc. “They’ll be able ta follow what’s goin’ on through that little transmitter in yer ear. Shouldn’t be something he’d be able ta see er get suspicious about. Just don’t let ‘im nibble on yer ear er nothin’.”

Mal grinned. The doc gave ‘im a look fit ta kill.

“I’ll try.”

Mal handed Jayne an’ Zoe their own transmitters. Jayne popped his in an’ pulled on his earlobe ta get it comfortable.

“Where exactly we gonna be hangin’ around at?” Kinda hoped fer a spot in the whorehouse.

“In the hills ta the south. Far enough away not ta be noticed, but close enough ta ride in with guns blazin’, should our doc find ‘imself in danger.”

Damn.

“Guns?”

Mal nodded. “’Course.”

“When we leavin’?”

“I’m not really in a hurry.” The doc looked downright pissy.

Jayne gave ‘im a smile an’ ambled in the direction of his bunk. “I’ll hurry, then.”

Vera was waitin’ right where he’d left ‘er. He pulled her off of ‘er pegs an ran a hand down ‘er barrel real soft. Kissed ‘er gentle-like.

“So you have kissed more th’n one girl.”

Jayne whipped around. Kaylee was standin halfway down the ladder, holdin onta it with one hand an’ smilin’ at ‘im.

“You that nice to all women? Or just guns?”

She came the rest of the way down the ladder.

Jayne smiled. He’d tried goin’ back ta the engine room last night, but by the time he’d got up the rocks ta do it, she’d left. He was real glad ta see ‘er again.

“Depends on the woman.”

“Yeah? How so?”

Jayne looked down at Vera. “Well… if she’s good ta me, I’ll be real good ta her. Keep ‘er clean. Oiled. Make sure all ‘er parts work right. An’ that they get worked often.”

He looked back up at Kaylee.

She was still smilin’, bitin’ her lower lip now, though. Her cheeks were kinda pink.

Jayne took a step toward ‘er.

“Women do have their advantages over guns, though. Warm skin’

Comments
Sunday, 20 November 2005 20:50
OH MY GOD.

Hell yes that's big!

Simon knows! Zoe knows! And poor Kaylee, left looking all lost and hurt...

OH MY GOD.
Sunday, 20 November 2005 22:18
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

You made me squee. In capitals. Oh, hell yeah. Jayne's so cute. And everyone knows it! Well, Zoe and Simon know it.

(**throws a bippy**) You earned it!!

Now, you should let Kaylee know what happened, 'cause she's all upset about it. Make her smile.
Monday, 21 November 2005 02:53
I really loved Zoe's subtle little hint that the transmitter was on, so perfectly in character for her.

I can see Simon brooding on this for a while and then throwing a tantrum in the middle of the caper, revealing all in front of Mr Pink.

Work as fast as you can, I'm dying to know what happens next...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 06:19
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! ROFL I like how you kind of put some romance in the story without it being just purely an excuse for smut. In most stories, it goes from Romance to smut like that, like instantly, romancesmut. You, on the other hand, are taking the time to actually build a plot that is interesting in and of itself.
Monday, 21 November 2005 17:06
i'v emptied my account at the bippy bank for you!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 17:08
Oooops, they heard every word he said? Gulp, had to laugh and good to see Simon showing a spark of jealously firing his anger. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 18:11
YEAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! This story is getting so good!
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 12:46
Wonderful story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens between Simon & Mr Pink

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