Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Strange Bedfellows

Tuesday, November 15, 2005

Extended ending for War Stories
Multiple POV; Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee
A little bit of fantasy but, hey—“We live on a spaceship.”

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6228    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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It’s Joss’s ‘verse; I just borrow it....

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Inara pressed her warm face against the cool infirmary door. From her position in the door frame, she watched Simon work. He moved with his sister’s grace in this room, feet dancing over the floor as he acted as needed, clear-headed and competent, never hesitating here. He jumped when he saw her standing in the doorway.

“Lao-tyen.” He took a breath. “Shuh muh. I’m sorry.”

“And Kaylee said you never swear, doctor.” She smiled but it was forced. Even though he was exhausted, legs aching and fingers cramping from hours of surgery, Simon could see the red streaks in her eyes: the ones she tried to hide behind thick dark hair that waved halfway down her back. Usually she was flawless, a heady male fantasy materialized in flowing gowns and shining jewels. Today her dress was blood-stained, crimson marks she hadn’t bothered to wash out, memories from earlier when they’d carried the captain on ship.

“Sorry,” he said again, but she wasn’t listening. She’d drifted over to Mal, who lay sleeping on the table.

“How is he?” She stared down at him, careful not to touch. He looked unnaturally peaceful, childishly innocent. How odd that the end result of hours of torture would be this: the restless captain finally resting, dreaming morphine dreams while the doctor did his work.

“He’s…well.” Simon appeared at her side, adjusting a tube in Mal’s arm. “Amazingly well, considering….” Considering what that monster had done to him. But Simon left the last part unsaid.

“So no permanent damage?” She watched his chest inflate and sink, soothed.

“Everything seems to be in tact. And I gave him a pretty thorough examination while he was out.”

“Perhaps you should refrain from mentioning that when he wakes up, doctor. Mal’s…well, Mal. Vulnerability’s not his strong suit.”

“I’ve noticed. Anyway, he’ll be sore for a week or two. Bruises, dehydration—I’m giving him intravenous for that, plus something to e

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 05:35
gaahhh finish finish finish i'm begging you
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 06:51
You have Simon's sarcastic voice down pat. *g*

I'm ignoring the somewhat convenient way you had them all end up like this because the dialogue is so worth it! Excellent, funny and in character.

Looking forward to part two! Hopefully, it won't take long!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 08:47
I wish I could actually see this happen! on TV i.e.
Great writing! Can't wait for the next part!! :0)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 13:02
I love it! In fact, I love it so much that I'll even let you get away with the blatant, seemingly non-canon excuse for getting everyone in bed with each other. In further facts, you can add any and all blatant plot devices to your further writings, as long as the dialogue and characterisations and....everything, really - remain so very shiny.

Carry on!
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 13:34
This is great!!

The whole getting them into bed thing is kind of... well, cheesy, but I'm going to let you get away with that. Because it's so great!!!

Continue! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 13:51
FINISH IT!

Now that Kaylee's nightie is bloody, I'm assuming it's coming off... lol
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 17:37
Yow, what a place to stop, gorrammit! I wanted to hear Inara's reaction to Mal's softly spoken confession. And Kaylee and Simon had me in stitches. The whole thing is shinyness personified, now hope you hurry before our BDMs run out of fuel and life support awaiting the next chapter! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 19:23
Great characterization so far! Can't wait to read the next bit.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 00:47
Wonderful! More More!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 03:17
OMG! That was FANTABULOUS! Please post part two ASAP!

~MeiMei
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 11:38
Very moving! The plot device is cheesy, but I don't care. Your story echoes some of the thoughts I've had about Mal in War Stories, for instance what he felt when he was left behind with Niska; how horribly alone and abandoned and helpless he must have felt. Keep writing!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 11:55
EEEEEEEEEE!!!! why oh why did you stop there you evil person?!?

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 17 November 2005 01:48
You're killing us Kaynara.. where's the rest? I usually don't like much Mal/Inara stuff, but this is good... despite the device to get them into bed, now that they're there I'm not complaining. I can't wait for the rest..
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 17 November 2005 03:56
Love the dialogue - you have their voices down perfectly. And I want more!
Thursday, 17 November 2005 07:41
So good, I love sarcastic Simon. Also you really made me want to smack Mal. Good Job :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 17 November 2005 09:10
VERY fucking shiny
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 21:37
“I’m half glad I don’t remember. If I kissed you once, I don’t ‘spect I’d stop.”

That's it, right there. You've got it.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 22:34
I have some catching up to do but this is great! I'm off to the next chapter! *Thanks from deyvra.*
AWINDSOR
Friday, 18 August 2006 01:59
This is my 3rd or 4th time reading. 1st time posting. I go back a reread it (the whole series, really) when I need a pick-me-up or after I've watched the series/movie again. It's so good! Thank you so much. Your characterizations are perfect.
Friday, 22 September 2006 09:48
loved it

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