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Equilibrium- Chapter VIII addition

Saturday, November 5, 2005

Chapter VIII seemed a little unfinished to me. This came into my head, all pretty-like, and I just had to add it on. But this isn't the end of the story, don't worry. There is more to come. Comments appreciated!

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River closed her eyes. Let herself ride the rise and fall of his chest.

It felt good to be held on to. She wouldn’t fly away when he was holding her like this.

She was afraid to move. Afraid that if she did, everything would break apart again and she’d be alone.

Alone was a scary word. It tasted bitter. She wasn’t alone. Not really. She had Simon.

But Simon had Kaylee.

Kaylee.

River rolled the name around in her brain over and over again. She decided that she wasn’t mad at her. It wasn’t her fault that that woman had stolen her face.

And it wasn’t Jayne’s fault, either.

He was…

Broken. It was the only word she could think of. The equilibrium had left him behind, too.

His breath had gone deep and slow. He was sleeping.

She caught an image. Soft. Quiet. So close to being not there that she had to look out the corner of her mind at it before it went away.

She was dancing again.

She pulled away from him a little. Looked up at his face like she hadn’t seen it before.

That was why he hadn’t caught her.

He’d been falling, too.

His arms missed her. Reached for her in his sleep.

She slipped between them again and let him pull her close. And she laughed.

Because it was perfect.

Comments
CUB
Saturday, 05 November 2005 03:53
That was all romantic-like.
Saturday, 05 November 2005 05:30
SQUEEEEEEEEE!

I can't help it. I love the bit about Kaylee. SO MUCH.

I love the bit about Jayne falling too...poor lug just doesn't know it yet.

Definitely a welcome addition/
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 05 November 2005 10:33
If Simon finds them like that he is going to explode. Poor Jayne a massive hangover, a boken rib, and all scratched up trying to deal with a furious Captain and a homocidal older brother. I just can't wait. This story is the best!
Saturday, 05 November 2005 17:11
Very shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 05 November 2005 19:42
agree with river, perfect

b

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