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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Thirty-One

Friday, November 4, 2005

Wash pulls a getaway -- Mal pulls a stunt -- Zoe pulls a muscle

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Thirty One

“Why is there a warship in my sky?” Mal demanded Wash as he entered the bridge. He sounded like it was a personal affront.

“If we aren’t careful, we might just find out first hand,” the pilot responded, not taking his eyes off of his console. “It’s not running a transponder or pulse beacon, but I cross-checked the telemetry with Janes Index. If I had to guess I’d say it was an old Prowler-class frigate.”

“A frigate?” Mal asked, a little shocked. “A patrol boat I could see – but a frigate?”

“It’s probably not an Alliance ship, Cap’n. They haven’t used the Prowler-class in twenty years – since long before the War. Probably picked it up surplus.”

“Is she armed?” Mal asked as Master Lei glided onto the deck.

“Permission to enter the bridge?” he asked politely.

“Come on in, Heavenly Master,” Wash called out. “Mal, you don’t buy a frigate because the chicks dig it,” he explained patiently. “Of course she’s armed. I’d guess lasers, long-range ship-to-ship full yield EM loads. Probably a hefty amount of high-explosives, too. Might even have a fighter or two, and I’d say some drones would be likely.”

“That isn’t good,” mumbled Mal, watching the little red dot on the monitor. “You think she’s related to that crowd that just shot us up?”

“I’m thinkin’ it’s possible,” agreed Wash. “Either that or my student loan people finally caught up to me. I’ve gotta make a choice, soon, and your guidance would be appreciated: if I climb out of atmo and make a break for it, she’s likely to catch us in orbit – she’s just got more legs. If I can lure her down into atmo, though, she’s got all kinds of drag. We might be able to out-fly her. Or something.”

“It’ll buy us some time,” Mal said after a few moments consideration. “Do it. I’ll rustle up the General, see if he has any ideas.”

“Well, I’ll do my part,” Wash assured. “I’ll fly around and look tempting. It’s up to them to actually chase us,” he reminded Mal’s back.

When the Captain was

Comments
Friday, 04 November 2005 03:12
I've been trying to post all week -- this is the first time it's gone through. Working on the next chapter now, hopefully will have it up tomorrow. Enjoy!

StA
Friday, 04 November 2005 04:11
Oh hurray!! Been waiting with bated breath! I love Master Lei and Wash. Loved it. Can't wait for the next one....although I'm wondering about your timeline....do Kaylee's Lament and Treasure take place between the series and the comics? Are you going to deal with Book and Inara leaving? I mean, I'm noticing ALL of these little connections with things mentioned in the BDM (Sanchez brothers, leaf on the wind, just off the top of my head) which I love and think are very very cool. i justwonder where we are in the timeline.

Keep 'em coming! I love them!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 06:37
Superb! er Shiny....
Friday, 04 November 2005 10:18
Ai ya! More shiny-ness!

Love the whole Way of flight thing. Perfect. Brings a tear to my eye.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 12:06
I agree with RelFexive: that whole piece about the Way was heart-rending. But, Hey! You got a 10 rating!
Behold the power of positive feedback! :)
Friday, 04 November 2005 14:00
That was great. This part just about killed me I laughed so hard. I could so picture Mal's expersion.

“Oh, don’t get me started,” River said, caressing her harmonica. “That boy thinks I’m some sort of mad, demented, dangerous super-genius,” she said derisively. When she caught Mal staring at her, she amended, “but in a bad way!”
Friday, 04 November 2005 18:45
Loved it! Adored River reading the prisoner and them convincing him it was some gorram sneaky machine that could empty his head. And Wash, dear sweet Wash, I think he makes a shiny leaf! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:45
“I was a leaf,” Wash muttered to himself. “A freakin’ leaf!”

that's our pilot...a freakin' leaf, man!

b
ZYDECODOLLY
Saturday, 05 November 2005 01:47
I've read this and Kaylee's lament during the past 3 days, in between work, school and motherhood. Puhleeze - get your stuff published so I can buy the books and be done with it!

You have a real feel for the voice of the different characters. However, you almost lost me at Inara's pondering over Caritas - no woman should ever feel the need to put up with violence from her partner, regardless of what he's going through. That part just didn't ring true.

Looking forward to the next installment.
Saturday, 05 November 2005 03:30
ZydecoDolly:

Perhaps no woman should, but that doesn't mean that it doesn't happen. Not that I think that Inara would ever condone violence against a woman in the course of the relationship -- far from it. I was trying to make the point that in such men there is violence, and it takes either a skilled and intuitive woman or a man sensative enough to his own psyche or both to come through that violence.

It's interesting: in the last 300,000 words I've written, that one section is by far the most controversial. I dig it. We all have ideas about the characters, and the pity is that we only had 14 episodes and the movie to give us enough data to form those opinions. I stand by my Inara/Caritas section, though I don't deny it needs a rewrite. I'll do it, too, once I'm done.

Thanks for reading! On to the NEXT CHAPTER!

StA
Saturday, 05 November 2005 13:09
Leaf...

易弯曲
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 20:46
Oh! Mal was soooo funny!

And now we know how Wash became a leaf on the wind.
WINTERHART
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 01:20
Wow - great chapter! Wash's 'leaf on the wind' nearly made me cry, it really did :'( Really well-written, without being maudlin or self-conscious at all.
I'm enjoying this so much, keep 'em coming!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 03:27
wonderful!
Friday, 30 June 2006 05:54
LOVE the leaf on the wind part. I'm amazed how well you integrate those little bits and pieces from the canon works into this little piece o' shininess of yours.

One little continuity problem: Zoe told Mal about the prisoner in the last chapter, and he told her to put him in the storage locker, and then in this chapter she tells him again and he's surprised. So, either he's having blackouts, or you are ;-)

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