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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Twenty-Four

Thursday, October 20, 2005

War Stories, Roommate Stories, and Comparitive Religiosity.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Twenty-Four

“I’ve just received a wave from Colonel Campbell,” General Lei said, smiling broadly through his beard as he came into the kitchen. “He’s perfectly on schedule to meet us. Very punctual. He’s led the Alliance on a wild chase through three systems, but lost them around Eden.” He sighed, a rare look of satisfaction on his face. “Brilliant man, Campbell. If we’d had a thousand of him in the war, I’d be . . . well, maybe not Emperor, but probably Imperial Regent somewhere. Is that coffee?”

“Just made it. About to go on watch. Quality never was a problem with us, either,” Zoe said, pouring herself a cup of coffee. “We won plenty o’ battles we were s’posed to lose, on account of a few brilliant folks. ‘Course, punctuality wasn’t our strong suit. Or discipline. Or most o’ the other stuff that makes a real military – but we had some great warriors.” She took a long sip. “Didn’t help much, I guess, when the enemy insists on having more. And better armed. And better led.”

“Ah, give yourselves some credit,” Lei said, pouring a cup for himself. “You should be proud. What the Independents did, that was magnificent. We had an existing military, at least, with a long tradition. We had munitions factories. We had shipyards. What General Orvis and his people put together . . . nothing short of miraculous. When he captured the Alliance spaceport on Persephone, that strike was nothing short of brilliant. And that was the first of many.”

“I appreciate you sayin’ that, General,” Zoe said, smiling a little. “Mal an’ I, we were part o’ several o’ those impossible missions. Kind of a shame, there not bein’ a chain-of-command to recognize what we did at the end. Closest we come to that was Colonel Brevard. He’s the one who ordered us to lay down arms. Met him in a prison camp on Hera, not long after Serenity. Said he couldn’t give us a medal, but he woulda recommended one for what we done there. He was able to give us ‘battlefield promotions’, th

Comments
Thursday, 20 October 2005 18:04
Lovin' the comments. Keep 'em flyin'.

StA
Thursday, 20 October 2005 18:41
*falls off chair and rolls on floor holding ribs* the cake...!

"you are psychotic!" - wash to mal, serenity pilot, part II
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:11
BWAHAHAHA. You should have bunked River with Jayne and Simon with Kaylee, just to watch all the 'shippers around here (myself included) wet their pants in anticipation. Of course, Simon's probably glad you didn't - several days at Kaylee's mercy would probably leave the boy with a groin injury.

And the cake was priceless. And a nice nod to Tracey and his damn beans.
Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:14
Bah. That was my anonymous post up there. I swear I was logged in....
Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:15
Hah HAAHH!!

Such good stories! :D
Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:27
A true writer is good at stories, be they a paragraph or two, or books. You're good.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:42
I discovered your stories yesterday and stayed up until 2 a.m. to get caught up. Thank you. Thank you. It is a delight to read.
Thursday, 20 October 2005 21:14
Just wanted to add:

I've had a bad day at work today, with the 'promise' of an even worse one tomorrow. This chapter made me forget all about it for a few minutes.

Thanks.
Thursday, 20 October 2005 23:04
I'm with Book, Screwthe.

易弯曲
Friday, 21 October 2005 02:32
Shiny as always StA!! You do have firm grasp of the Serenity "Circus", especially with the Jayne/Simon grudge match.

Nicely turn Shepard scene... many chuckles.

Keep flyin',

K
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 October 2005 04:12
Mmm...cake.

-GG Crono
Friday, 21 October 2005 18:30
Slow down! I can't keep up!

Wait...I mean...

Keep going! This is exciting!

(I'll catch up later.)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 October 2005 02:10
Hot bunking with Jayne! Now that's a laugh... Having had the unpleasant experience of spending a whole patrol hot racking with 'Lurch', a sort of cross between Jayne and a walking zit, I can feel for the Doc.

For a minute there I sorta felt a revealin moment coming on in regards to Book's past. I appreciate your care not to deviate too far from Josh's storyline in that way while at the same time realizing that we are listening to a ghost!
Thursday, 27 October 2005 18:53
Ha! I knew Jayne and Simon bunking together would be funny. Yay!

Oh, I have so much catching up to do!
Friday, 28 October 2005 02:00
you done good StA!

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