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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Twenty

Sunday, October 16, 2005

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Twenty

River watched silently from the communication console as Devon and Rowan prepared for atmo entry. She was studying what they were doing intently. The flight sequences were much different than what Wash did on Serenity, she noted, and as she corroborated what their hands were doing with what their minds were doing, she was getting a better and better picture of how the Sky Hawk worked.

She was enjoying her time here. In the week she and her brother had been aboard, they had made two quick stops at villages on tiny moons where Duncan had regular clients. Now they were making their third, on the agro moon of St. Albans. Each time they went into the world or out of it she begged to be allowed into the cockpit. While Duncan was initially reluctant (Jayne had told him about her kitchen knife faux pas and her other eccentricities) Rowan pleaded on her behalf, and he grudgingly allowed it.

River had learned a lot. She already had an excellent technical knowledge of flight mechanics – having a photographic memory was useful like that – but to be able to see and experience the process from inside the head of the pilot allowed her to glean more practically useful information than she could have gotten in a top flight school.

But she knew she didn’t have it all. There was so much unpredictability in flight – mechanical issues, of course, but also the chaos of gravity, weather and electromagnetism – that she found it a heady challenge to contemplate how one little central nervous system with only two hands and two feet and two eyes could possibly get a multi-ton ship to go against the very nature of solid matter and leap into (or out of) the Black.

It was addicting. Like dance, only with engines.

She rode shotgun in Rowan’s mind (it was easier to get behind her eyes than Devon’s, for some reason) and saw and felt just as the other teenaged girl did. Which switches to hit. Which levers to pull. What safeties could be overridden. What protocols to

Comments
Sunday, 16 October 2005 18:07
Heh heh. Bellona, you will just have to wait. I ain't killed more than that one guy with suspense, yet.

This one might be a little intense. Let me know if you think I took River in the right direction.

Thanks again for readiing, and thanks for the comments!

ScrewtheAlliance
Sunday, 16 October 2005 18:44
Shiny. It's easier to breath without the smell of mammoth.


Sunday, 16 October 2005 19:04
BTW, a story-mention to the first reader who identifies the Heinlein reference in this chapter.

StA
Sunday, 16 October 2005 22:42
More expert shininess!
Sunday, 16 October 2005 22:46
Oh, and Heinlein... that'd be Junebug to Peewee, then.
Sunday, 16 October 2005 23:15
Very shiny story but that big block of text in the middle was wearying to wade through. Breaking it up into paragraphs would have helped. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 16 October 2005 23:15
Score! 'Junebug' was Kip's call sign in "Have Space Suit, Will Travel", and 'PeeWee" was, of course, Peewee.

I have no idea how I'll work your nick in. But I have great confidence in my wriggling ability.

StA
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 October 2005 03:14
I have some distant memory of a boy in a spacesuit crossing a stream, but able to breath the suits air. I used to think of that story as I waded across a certain stream/ditch back home as a kid, wondering if a spacecraft would come down and take me away from rural Arkansas. Woulda been a benefit for sure! Beats his later work, well except for Jonathan Michael Smith!
Monday, 17 October 2005 05:44
Nice, was wondering if you was going to tell what happened to Simon and river while the others was off.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 17:51
erm, make that two people. i dropped dead last night with all the evil tension you piled on.

“He hasn’t tried to kiss me yet,” River said, matter-of-factly. “He wants to have sex with me, but he’s too polite to take the initiative.”

*laughs hysterically* which direction other than right COULD you take her? i love the way you write her...brightens up my dingy existence

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