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Atonement

Friday, October 7, 2005

BDM Spoilers. A deviation from Canon, based on my own warped perceptions of Events in the Movie Serenity. Morbid and Creepifying. (rating for cinematic gore)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2847    RATING: 10.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Like Father...like son.

The beauty of the courtyard would not be sullied by the denegration of name, but it was as memorable to him as any home could be, a place where true meaning could be exposed in the late afternoon air, thickly infused with the scent of cherry blossom and water lily. A garden of ritual, where at last he could achieve the sacred act of atonement.

He knelt, white linen on green grass, a symbol of purity upon the growing earth. Slow strokes of the pen transcribed images into words, and words presented thoughts that had been reflected on with the same percision of a bride preserving her wedding gown. Resistance, remonstrance, loyalty and expiation, disgrace and defeat accepted with grace upon the rice paper.

The fire of dwindling sun glistened on the kozuka laid neatly before him, bound and wrapped with paper with its end inches exposed. Clean. Sterile. Chaste. When the pen was laid aside, an act of contrition, he allowed his fingers to run over the edge of the robe with an unshaking hand. The garment fell open, exposing the hard sculpted, burdened chest and abdomen, the colour of earth.

After a slow exhalation of breath, he lifted the blade from the tray and without so much as a blink, a flinch, the tip pressed into his flesh. Across his stomach it danced left to right in a straight line. He pulled it out sharply so that he brought the scarlet entrails into the cool breeze, displaying his 'true intentions', unfolding his true self.

Even as the light in those darkest eyes began to fail the second man, as nameless as he, stepped forward in light paces that reminded of falling leaves and presented his companion his sword. It was an elegant weapon. His Kaishaku waited to be given the signal. For a moment it was grotesquely beautiful how he leaned forward, a precise, rigidly controlled angle of proper spinal alignment, and nodded but once. Steel and flesh met between earth and sky in a moment of silent love.

In the silence that followed, it was as if the witnesses of the mo

Comments
Friday, 07 October 2005 15:37
*gushes*

This is one of those fics that you just stare at the last sentance for minutes.

Simply powerful.
Monday, 10 October 2005 01:05
In one word: Amazing! This is a stunning piece. I really don't know what to say, I'm so blown away. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this astounding piece.
Monday, 10 October 2005 18:40
Simply Beautiful, the poetry of it all. Thank you.

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